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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

thanks for the double update,welcome bt kya point pe khatam kiya yaar,ab w8 kaise karu!!!!!😳😳 sabr ka phal meetha hota hain ds is veryy intelligent,she knws her grnddauhter too well😊😊 j and manyata bnding iss lovely!!!!! thanx!😳

woow std!! i know only truth or dare (kya stare choose karne se oppste bethe insan ko stare karna hota hai?? i am trying to put my ideas😆 do tel me stare mein kya hota hai then i can also play dis game😉) yeah its the same as u told. we have to stare without blinking as long as we can. waise game superb thi!!thanx bechari j sarre,without makeup😆 lol. yeah she is bechari to some extent o my god,last qstn was sacchhhi a bomb!! lol. and uday's answer dhamaka!!!!😉 well he has yet to complete his sentence cant wait for ur nxt update😊😊 it will come ASAP

thanx fr the beautiful cumnt pia!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Sanju
The double updates were so good dear👏
and tumne mujhe dedicate kiya😲😳 Thanks a ton🤗
coming back to the updates, lol J was a total kid in both parts😆
phir chahe woh Manyata ke phone call me uska chillana ho ya VB ke challenge par rotlu shakal banana😉
What a brilliant plan by DS...i hope she succeeds👍🏼
aww sab Manyata ke wapas aane se kitne khush hain😛 use kabhi majnu ke paas mat bhejna phirse🤢

omg! truth and dare!! ab aaya na Camel mountain ke neeche😉 what would Uday say?😲
i think there is something more he will add to the sentence that will get him out of the situation easily😆

Thanks for the double updates Jalebi😃 and Thanks for PM too😳
Please update soon😊

(and im really sorry for late comment)
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved both of the parts it was awesoe espeically how j got excited after knowing that manyata is coming to devgarh palace... loved the scene between ds, j and vijay bhai that was superb and the std game was a good idea lol something new,,, now i wonder how uday will handel the situation update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

!!SURPRISE!!

BETTER LATE THAN NEVER UPDATE

Guyz I know this is something too much unexpected. But yeah I am with an update

Actually Jeena isi ka naam hain was in line.

But if u r like greatful to me for bringing this update before jeena isi ka naam hain n muskaane, then don't be

Be thankful/greatful to ur Navina

Ye sab locha kya hain will be cleared on I suppose 21st or 22nd.

So now let me tell u, this update is ManVeer centric update. But J, Vijay n Unnati are an inevitable part of the story. So they will be there. And yeah I'll bring as much fun as possible as pure passionate romance is kinda unsutaible to current track going on in the story.

So enough of my descriptions and bak bak, lets turn towards the update

And yeah not to forget, update is dedicated to MY ALL-IN-ONE and Navina

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"….. jaanti hain us ladki ka naam" Uday said with his eyes glued to Manyata's eyes. (hope u all remember the ending of earlier chap. If no then it was like Unnati asked him the que. Whom does he love in an STD-Stare Dare Truth game where in Uday selects truth and he HAS to give the TRUE answer. In last update, he said "Manyata…" it continues from there). His eyes reached till her soul and she could feel the radiations his body was sending towards her. Her eyes slightly small in size then the huge buttons and her mouth nearly dropped in an O. J, Vijay and Unnati looked towards each other thru corner of their eyes. Awkwardness sank in the air of the terrace. J had got everyone into this situation and she knew she had to bring them out. "hume bhook lagi hain" J suddenly said as she couldn't think of any other good reason. "J bhai kuch hi ghante pehle khana khaya tha na… itni jaldi bhook bhi lag gayee?" Vijay bhai said with a bit frightened and worried expression. Without paying any heed to Vijay, J got up and held Unnati byher arm and attempted to pick her up. With J all in a mood to drag her away, Unnati got up to her feet. As soon as J saw that Unnati had stood up, she dragged her out nearly making her fall. Seeing both the girls storm out in such a way, Vijay franctically got up and ran behind the girls saying "humare liye bhi to ruko".

In this complete chaotic situation, not once did Uday's gaze travel away from Manyata. They were glued to her. While on the contrary Manyata looked everywhere except Uday. Uday could feel Manyata being uncomfortable. An unevitable smirk appeared on his lips. Not because of Manyata's uneasiness but because HE DID IT! He had confessed indirectly. He felt new spirit rise inside him, a new sense of victory spread inside him, the flowers of courage were blooming inside him. Fidgiting with her duppatta Manyata got up and Uday looked at her. "hume bhi ab chalna chahiye neeche" Manyata said and finally looked at Uday. Uday sighed in agreement and got up. Without looking at Uday, Manyata walked out of the terrace door.

Silence had over powered the situation. To Manyata's luck, Uday had stopped staring at her like a fool. They walked a few steps slower than a turtle. Manyata was feeling awkward and this was for the first time she had sucha feeling when she was with Uday. She knew it was the time to break the ice. "umm…Uday kaisi chal rahi hain tumhari life? Must be fun for the most eligible bachelor hain na?" she asked with a bit of a teasing tone to her voice. The words 'ELIGIBLE BACHELOR' pricked him for the first time. How badly he wanted to remove that tag from his name. he no more wanted to be a bachelor. He wanted to be hers. He was dying to get married to her. He had enough of the playboy games and now he was fed up of those, because, he had FOUND LOVE.

"Uday… answer me!" Manyata said shaking his arm. "hunh? Haan right. Jaisa sabko lagta hain na, waisi bilkul nahi hain humari life. Din bhar kaam rehta hain. Raat ko thake ghar aate hain, dinner a glass of drink and then humari puri energy hi drain hojati hain. Bas hum sojate hain. Humari zindagi is just like kisi aur mard ki jindagi. Kabhi kabhi gharwalonka chehra dekhneki fursat tak nahi milti hume" Uday said looking away. He sounded as if he was completely depressed. Manyata held Uday by his shoulder. Now this time, Manyata searched for Uday's eyes, but they were lost. she knew she had to cheer him up. Rubbing his shoulder she looked ahead. "waise tu ab yaha is mahel me nahi rehta kya?" she asked him. "seriously princess abhi bhi tumhe ye lagta hain ke hum yaha rehte hain?" he asked raising his eyebrow and with his to die for smirk. And Manyata giggled. "wo kya hain na princess ab yaha rehne me koi maza nahi ata" Uday said suddenly and Manyata looked at him with bright eyes. "yaha ab aisa koi hain hi nahi jiske saath hum mazak kar sake jisko tang kar sake aur…" Uday suddenly leaped in front of her and pushed her towards the wall "…aur jiske saath hum khullam khulla flirt kar sake" he said caressing her face with his index finger of right hand while the left hand rested on the wall. And for a couple of seconds Manyata blushed all crimson red. "kyun, J ke saath tum ye sab nahi kar sakte?" Manyata asked inquisitively remembering how close Uday got sometimes with J. "J?!" Uday laughed heartily. Both Uday and Manyata were still in that position. "J, to bacchi hain abhi" he said still laughing. Manyata's face had so many questions and this didn't go unnoticed by Uday. "J abhi mere liye bahot choti hain. She was behind me like oh my god… khilona thi wo mere liye just like other girls. Ab to thank god she is not after me" Uday said though the reason was not so clear for him. "oh…" Manyata laughed a bit and continued "chal ab bahot der hogayee hain hum yaha khade hain, sab neeche intezaar kar rahe honge" she said punching his chest and walked away. He stopped in that position for a while and looked towards her. Soon he picked up to her speed and walked with her.

"Uday.. tum kuch keh rahe the ke I know whom u love?" Manyata asked taking a leap in front of him. Wo kuch nahi jaane do" Uday looked away. " ab jo main keh rahi hu uska sirf haan ya na me jawab de" Manyata said looking at him seriously. "tu kisise sacchi wala pyaar karta hain?" Uday nodded in yes. "kya wo bhi tujhse pyar karti hain?" Uday looked confused. The answer was none between yes and no. the confusion was clear on his face. "tujhe nahi pata?" Manyata corrected her question and Uday nodded in yes "use pata hain tu usase pyar karta hain?" Uday disappointedly nodded in no. "wo ladki kisi aur ladke ke saath hain" Manyata asked and Uday sadly nodded in yes. "saali bhootni. Uday jaise mard ko chod kr kaise kisi chomu ke saath reh sakti hain. Kamini.." Manyata said irritatedly and this brought the widest smirk on Uday's face he so much wanted to tell her that the saali, bhootni kamini was Manyata herself but he just couldn't. Uday laughed uncontrollably in his mind thinking how badly Manyata was abusing herself. Manyata looked away as if analyzing the whole kaand. She cupped his face and said "tu chinta na kariyo, sab theek hojayega. I swear I cant believe tujhe pyaar hogaya hain! Shit seriously? Sacchi me ya fir dusre ladkiyon jaise…" Manyata looked at him and biting his lower lip Uday nodded in no with his face still cupped in her hands. Manyata left his face and did small jumps and danced a bit. Uday was on cloud 9. "ye baat sirf hum dono ke beech rehne chahiye. Kisi ko bhi pata nahi chalni chahiye. Humari kasam hain tumhe" Uday said a completely filmy dialogue and Manyata agreed on it. She calmed down a bit and came near him. "I am so happy for u" she said and hugged him with force which had an underlined affection, care, satisfaction and not to forget… LOVE. He pressed his face on her neck. Her soft milky white warm skin beckoned upon him to touch it with his hunger, to kiss it with his passion, to bite it with his love, but alas… he was yet struggling to own those rights.

After a minute or so Manyata broke it and said "chale neeche, sab intezaar kar rahe honge…" and patting his check she went down. He stood rooted to the ground. he shook his head coming out of thoughts and he too came down. Uday sat across Manyata and passed a faint smile. J was sitting with a plate of two toasts in her hand, she regretted her decision of announcing that she was hungry. Now she will have to do some work out tomorrow. All sat around her watching her eat. Manyata grabbed a magazine which was lying on the table, while Uday propped up his chin on one of his hands and played with a fork lying near by. Vijay was doing something with his phone and Unnati was observing everyone. "guyz I am getting bored kuch karte hain" she said after watching everyone's silly acts for a long time. "kya karna chahti ho choti?" Uday asked still playing with the work and ithers resumed doing whatever they were doing before. "kuch game khelte hain?" Unnati asked inquiring."agr koi senior KG wala game hain to, chalo sab sone chalet hain" Manyata said closing her magazine. "nahi Manyata, like a sport" Unnati said. "good idea, pr kounsa wala" Vijay said supporting her. "Patang basi?" J said finishing her toast. A smile crossed everyone's lips and they looked at each other. "that sounds like a plan" all had the thought in there mind. "awesome idea J. chalega" Uday said agreeing with her which was very rare now-a-days. "oh please Uday, tu itna mat ud jaise tu jeetne wala hain. Yaad hain tujhe peechli baar kaise haraya tha?" Manyata said folding her arms across her chest. "wait a second. First of all humara tone ye suggest karta hain that idea is good, not that hum jeetna wale hain. Par yeah, hum hi jeetenge and for the last time, I think J can explain to u things well" he said looking at J. wow his revenge was finally being fulfilled. J gulped and said, "Uday hara nahi tha, use humne haraya tha. Humne uska maanja kaat diya taki wo haar sake aur aap apki wish mang sake jiji. Kyunki Uday ke bhi jeetne ke chances utne hi the jitney aapke. I didn't want him to win cuz agr wo jeet jata toh he wud have asked his wish and…" J said in a res-is-history tone and Uday smirked looking at her. "dekha…" he said proudly. "chal thik hain thik hain. Khel hi lete hain match" Manyata said.

The venue was the same and time – JUST NOW. Manyata and Uday raced upstairs like little children n the rest three of them came up a bit after them telling the staff to arrange for kites immediately. They both stood opposite each other panting and waiting for the others to come up. Soon all were there and the staff had brought the kites.

Both proceeded near each other. The distance minimizing with each step and they ended up being too close to each other. They shook hands like some professional players and wished each other the best of their luck. "patang bazi ki betaaj rajkumari, be ready to get defeated" Uday said with pride and Manyata rolled her eyes. Uday bent down a more till Manyata 's level and she said to him or rather whispered in his ears "jyada hawa me na udiyo, ye ghamand ke par (wings) kat gaye, to itni jor se neeche girga ke fir ud nahi payega" she said gritting between her teeth . "aww how cute" Uday replied moving a bit near to her ear. "I wish u the best of your luck from the bottom of my heart baby" he said huskily in her ear which sent a shiver down her spine. Moving a bit down towards her cheek and gently placed his lips over her soft rosy cheeks. He let his lips be over her cheeks for a couple of seconds longer and then reluctantly parted. He was mesmerized and 'hungry' after that small kiss, but he collected himself and to avoid the out pour of emotions on his face, he smirked in his signature way and moved his face away from her but he himself didn't move away. She looked in his eyes with a weird feeling. Unnati coughed and said "agar aap dono ka wishing session hogaya ho to shuru kare?" Manyata and Uday moved away from each other but still there eyes resting upon each others. Uday, J and Vijay were very upset with Unnati for breaking such a beautiful scene.

Manyata stood opposite Uday holding the maanja while Unnati stood behind Manyata holding the roll unto which the maanja rolled. "commom Manyata…" Unnati shouted or rather cheered. "Chotti.. hum aapke bade bhai hain. u should be on myside" Uday looked at her shocked. "dada, hum pichli bar bhi Manyata ke side pe the aur is baar bhi hum unhi ke side pe hain" Unnati said and both the girls hi-fived. "Girls will be girls… not expected from u chotti" Uday said and sighed and one of the staff members held his roll. "Vijay bhai, u wanna come?" Manyata asked.

"wo actually umm…" Vijay said and suddenly the maker sankranti day hit his mind

~*FLASHBACK*~

Manyata's kite had cut Vijay's kite and suddenly his maanja cut his own finger

"khoon khoon khoon" Vijay shouted and Manyata and Uday laughed uncontrollably.

Menaka, J n Komal carried him to the shed.

"areh ek boond khoon hi to hain kabhi raktdaan nahi kiya kya?" Manyata said still laughing

"excuse me" Vijay said "tumhe pata hain tumne hume kya kiya hain" Vijay continued and J tried to stop him.

He pushed J away in such a force that she nearly fell down

Vijay continued "tumne hume halal kardiya hain. Dheere dheere karke eke k boond behti jayegi aur hum mar jayenge. Hume nahi marna hume nahi marna" Vijay said franctically and hugged Komal who was standing before him.

Manyata Uday and Brijraj laughed till their stomachs ached

~*END*~

"Vijay bhai, Manyata kuch puuch rahi hain" J shouted. "hunh , nahi hum nahi khelenge" Vijay said nearly frightened. He looked at his finger and nearly shouted.

"n J u wanna come?" Manyata asked. "nahi hum yaha pr hi theek hain" J said.

"one two three go…" J said and the kites flied high

"be ready to be defeated" Uday smirked and winked at his opponent

"tu jyada ud mat aur patang uda…" Manyata said rolling her eyes

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This is all for today

To know who won

Stay tuned…

Love

Pranoti aka Sanjana

P.S.: sorry Mahima, cudn't send Pm. I am busy

Sorry for the mistakes. I haven't read before posting

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Prankz !

The update was super good !
Perfectly written 👏
Loved it loads 😳

Oh God i thought he would say her name ...
But you are too smart 😉
But i am still happy he took her name indirectly ... 😃

The best part of the update was IT HAD SO MANY MANVEER MOMENTS ... 😳
Loved them all !

Jai's confession was good !
I so wanted that always ... 😆

Wow !
Kite flying competition !
That's going to be interesting !

Waiting to read more ...
Continue soon ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsssmmm sanjuuu tu nay sariii bazi palat di yara
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaayyy ... update!
After my 2 day long wait , this was SO WORTH IT👍🏼!
Terrific update Sanju , thoroughly enjoyed it.
As predicted , Uday didn't take Manyata's name in the last chapter ... but INDIRECTLY HE DID TAKE HER NAME 😳, and that made me overjoyed.
Surprisingly , the part that stood out for me , was what was happening on the dining-table ... Jai attempting to eat her toast , Manyata glancing a magazine , Vijay skimming his cell and Uday playing with his fork. That scene was so real for me ... WELL DONE WITH THAT SANJU👏!
All the Manveer moments were superb ... cute , romantic and totally dreamy.
The best dialogue of the chapter was ... "saali bhootni. Uday jaise mard ko chod kr kaise kisi chomu ke saath reh sakti hain. Kamini.." Manyata said irritatedly and this brought the widest smirk on Uday's face he so much wanted to tell her that the saali, bhootni kamini was Manyata herself but he just couldn't. ... for obvious reasons😆!
Also , I must commend u for tying a loose end which the CV's left , that is ... in the show , Manyata never knew that Jai cut Uday's string during their kite-flying contest , BUT HERE ; SHE CONFESSED IT! Thanks for that😃!
It was a wonderful update Sanju ,
thanks for the dedication😳 ...
Hope u can continue soon ,
would love to know who's gonna win this time!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nice update uday indirectly say manyta

patang udane ka plan ws to gud wting 4 nxt update
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey... sanju..
The chappy was awesome...
Manveer scenes were so gud...
I hope Uday wins the game..
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
WONDERFUL.AMAZING UPDATE.

LOVED MANVEER SCENES SO MUCH.

DEN CONFESSION OF HOW UDAY WAS DEFEATED IN KITE FLIGHT WAS MY FAC PART.

LUKING FORWARD FOR NEXT CHAPPY.

CONTINUE SOON SANJU.

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