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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
wonderful update
Flashback part was very cute.
Want to see Mayur scene on present track

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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Superb update
Gang scene was really fabulous
Mayur were romantic - loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Loved this update
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
beautiful update Api

very nice

Plz update next part

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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
very nice update Fiza.

loved their teasing season ... i thot mayank ws back to home, par ye to 1 din k liye aya tha ... very bad.

i hope he ll be with nupur soon as she need him most this time, though everyone at home to take care of her, but still she need him.

ab kya ho gya?? why com sir said him to report in headquarter??? is there some huge problem??

offcourse yes ... warna story suru kaise hogi?? ... LOL

continue soon.

love ya.

dekh maine sara due clear kar dia ek sath ek hi din me ... ye to record hai ... LOL


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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
lovely update...

but wht happend to aunte? i just read ur update tu came to know...

will call u ...


tc sweety
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Oky so now CSI is going to get its speed… as I can see new one have also caught the old season….

Plus mayank didn't now now went to Mumbai… I mention that in note … and doing so again.. all the italics will be of flashbacks in this ff.. oky.. he hasn't gone back and hasn't seen Nupur since when she is pregnant..

Haven't rplied to u all… u know at this ff it will be alternate

Thanku so much for ur love

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter: 3

COM: mayank report the headquarter immediately

Mayank: is everything oky sir…

COM: no not at all…

Mayank: wht … I am cuming ASAP…

He took his keys and rushed to his office.. he did dial nupur's no a lot yet she wasn't picking up the call, may be she is in deep slumber .. after all they talk quite long in the nite… ya life has been in reverse gear .. they are back on seems like the pre wedding phase of couple…

So morning wishes were also added in things to do list… atleast they do inform other before leaving for office… at itme she will wake him up… he will deliberately wont until she scold him like anything

Nupur: mayank utho…

Mayank: hmm

Nupur: kya hmm… kya delhi office k timing change hogay hain….

Mayank: han mein boss hon jab chhay jao… thori dair sony do na

Nupur: oh hello.. mera office k timing change nhi hoay hain smajhy… tumhary chakar mein mein bhi late hojay gi..utho nah mayank..pls na..

Mayank….. mayank.. MAYANKKK…

Mayank: kya hai utha gaya.. ajeeb biwi ho… any do mjhy waha beta phir dekho tum… office min roz late nah hoi tu…

Nupur: I will make sure that happen hubby..morning and bye…

Mayank: han han sara romance phone per hi tu tum ko yaad ata hai…. Wasy tu mein kaun … huh… kaha tha weekend per ajo per nhi bht kam hai… kaha gai… phone rekh diya meray moo per… nupur.. choro ga nhi…. He said wincingly.. pakr bhi nhi skata …

He dialed her number for the last time… and than left a text msg…

" aj subha ek ajeeb se khatna hoi… delhi k ek veerna area mein ek private plane ny hungami landing ki… pilot zakhmi hai aur us mein bhaity haoy 2 passenger safe hain"

Police k khana hai k plane mein itna fuel tha k woh airport land kersaky aur yeah bhi k engines mein bhi koi problem nhi bati gai…

Ab sochny wali baat yeah hai k yeah pilot k rabat control tower se kyun kahtam hoa aur woh yaha kasay land ker gaya…. "

Mayank reached the area and was surprised to see this… a private small plane was lying on the mid of road, crashed landed… there was nothing wrong in that plane, airport was just few miles away why the pilot landed it here. N tht so so properly… . there was no bomb aur any thing in that plane.. he check it from inside.. there was no sigh of fire or any technical trouble in it… he asked for the black box to be decoded immediately …

COM: wht happen mayank

Mayank: sir yeah strange hai… is plane mein koi garabr nhi hai.. it's a safe landing

COM: tu phir yaha kyun land kiya hai yeah…. There must be a reason…. Asa tu nhi hai yeah koi security problem k liyan tu nhi..

Mayank: sir as such tu nhi lag raha hai.. Maybe hum zayda hi soch rahy hai its just an accident… pilot hosh mein aay tu I think phir hi woh kuch bata sakt hai k us ny asa kiya kyun

COM: hmm hoskta hai..phir bhi tu aircraft k ass pass k area seal kerdo

Mayank: sir.. aur mein hospital jata hoon…

COM: han yeah better hai…

…………..

Mayank: doctor we have to talk to him first

Doctor: he is about to cum in conscious .. he is stable…u can cum…

Mayank waited for sum time when saw the pilot to open his eyes…

Pilot: I want police… he said breath less..

Mayank: yes I am here .i am ACP…

Pilot: airport per terriost hain…

Mayank: WHT…. Are u mad….

…………

COM: how can be this possible… such a huge security lapses …plus humain internal security se kyun nhi information mili abhi tak…. how can be this.. that so two days before a huge event in the city…

Mayank: there was sure chance of terrorist attack and we were prepared but how can this be possible… sir yeah jan bojh ker humain tang kerny ki khosih bhi hosakti hai…surveillance office se bhi kisi kism ki koi problem report nhi hoi hai…

COM: magar hum risk nhi lay sakty hain… flights sari divert kedi hai … we need to confirm this…

The phone rung…

COM: wht… mayank the pilot is right.. the tower has stop working..this is sumthing serious… dam serious…

" country has been again on the target of terrorist and this time just before when the most biggest conference was about to start in the capital city within two days… the most highly secure area and were the security was high alert has been reported to be in control of terrorist gang.. yes u heard me right .. a terrorist control…. The Delhi airport that has always been a place of perfect security is reported to be in terrorist control….

The authorities are not answering anyone… and there is no confirm news from the official .. yet our inner source told us that there is gang pf terrorist who has taken the charge of the airport..

All flights are direct to the Chandigarh airport … we will keep u inform as soon as we get any further information…

Those who has just join us I repeat for them.. Delhi air port has been reported to be under terrorist control…"

Mayank: I cant believe this…. Waha security lapses kasay hosakta hai…

COM: yeah waqt is baat k nhi hai…

Mayank: sir humain andar ki security se connect kerna hoga

The tired yet the whole areas communication was blocked… they wasn't able to connect anyone inside the airport…

Mayank: dam it…. sir its huge thing … I have asked the force to take charge of outside the air port

COM: don't move in side as we still donot know whts inside… we cant risk 1000s people life….

Mayank: I want my team here to work on…

COM: u can ask anyone to join u… ur not even required to ask my permission mayank… ur on the charge n command … I want results here… and that so immediate…. U can use any resource u want… any thing… military, intelligence any one u want u can go an ask for… mayank u were the whole sole responsibility of this security plan.. so this will be on you… so best of luck .. u can use any resource u want..

Mayank: thanku sir…

He left the office to go towards his.. asking his team here for the maps and security plane of the airport…. And than he took his phone.. this is a huge matter and he wants the best people here…

Samrat: hello mayank… kya baat hai yaar aj kal tujhy humari yaad bht arahi hai

Mayank: Samrat its work.. tu benji yaha ASAP aao… we have a huge problem here

Samrat: kay hua hai

Mayank: tv laga .. tu pata chaly… aur haan I even want nupur at this case..u three are now in this ….. report … at the airforce base…

Samrat: fine we are cuming….

He called benji.. and inform him to report ..they have to take the air force base area as the airport at delhi has been closed for the flights…

Samrat: gunjan…. Mein jaraha hoon… yaha anty k kayal rekhna ok..

Gunjan: ya ..

Samrat: relax.. kuch nhi hoga… oky… I might not be able to contact u very often oky

Aur han nupur se bhi kaho join us quick

She nodded in yes.. he pecked her forehead and left the place… they have to reach ASAP they donot have much time.. for anything….

Gunjan doesn't know wht to say about nupur to samrat so it was better she kept mum about it… how they all are gonna react to this she doesn't knew.. better they are off to delhi

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
very nice update Fiza.

so now the story began ... terrorists r in airport.

airport is most important place of a country ... n that too delhi airport is most imp place aur waha hi terroirst hai!!! par wo log andar gaye kaise, itni tight security k bad bhi???

no wonder ... kuch andar k admi hi mile huye honge ... i just hate those persons who do every illegal things for money ... i hate them ... they are the original terrorist than terrorist.😡

so they were there and jammed the network ... ab kya hoga??😕

mayank have to work hard to get into airport when thousand of innocent people are there ... i am watiing for the step mayank ll took to entre there.😳

nice move Fiza ... very intelligent storyline ... attractive👏

lovely ... i m sure its really gonna huge hit like first two seasons.👏

continue soon.

love ya🤗



Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOO amazing update fizaa Nupur must be on a flight and now our Super 4 will be slovng the case
:)

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