JEET- a murat-karnika ff - Page 4

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

i truely liked it

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

sweet update:)

Originally posted by: Amor.

radhika 🤗

yaar so awesome m in luv with thz four mujhe pata hota mere 2 fav jodi yahan h to pehle hi tapak padti

awesome start 👍🏼

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

Jeet, by god, saare k saare characters leaders h..

Jannat's entry was best- really cool n rare name.

Kahte h love k baad life jannat ho jati h'eshaan k liye tho sachi mei life jannat bann jayegi :p

Edha?- meaning kya h di iska..plz tell..i quiet liked it. tej n ehda ka pair is so lovely..luvbirds kahin k'dno bade shone h'

But jannat n eshaan is ekdum dhamakedaar..god, herr jagah ladai ladai'

Inki love stro tho hate story se hi shoro hoti h herr jagah' but maza bada aata h'

Uhoo! Jannat, itni bori bori bate nhi kaho'tumhara hone wala pati h bhai..kuch tho socho'

I really like ki eshaan badme genuininely sry tha for jannat to tej'acha bacha'

Prof- shukla'hmm, yahi naam mila aapko'ek prof shukla mere bhi colg mei h' :p

Really waiting for more masala wali stry of jannat n eshaan n cheeni wali stry of edha n tej..

Hope edha-jannat n tej-eshaan Jodi hamesha aise hi frdns rahe.

Eshaan per jo ladkiyaan line maar rhi thin a di, unko mere taraf se :P

N yes tej babu- humari jannat is rockstar, 10 on 10..yo!

Ehda is sweetest-iske saath tho kuch bora nhi hona chahiye kabhi..dil se dua nikalti h sweet bachi k liye.

Alpha plus- nice name agn.

Originally posted by: pranita1202

my god kya part

mujhe laga miley jab hum tum part 2 dekh rahi

kya kamaal ki story opening thi mazza aa gaya

hawt munde ,soni soni khudiya

i m already in love these 4

i loveee the naming of characters

especially jannat n eshaan

jaha pyaar hai waha takraar hai

nafrat hi pyaar ka first step hota hai

so jhagda is a sooper positive point 4 relationship blossoming

but yeh toh past hai

present mein sab panga hai😭

pata nahi how the story turned and everything got messy

so eager to know dat how all these characters reached 2 their present condition

continue soon😊

Originally posted by: shruja

thanks for staring n sharing rtmc ff
beautiful intro n cs
so christian muslim hindu all religon are there!!
i think girl sitting at church mugz
boy in car rt
n other two r karan kartika
apt songs used!
i m ready with tissues!!

Originally posted by: soniaparte90794

lovly & superb di. Kya story hi direct dil ko chuti hi. Sabse pahle vo jo intro tha mujhe realy rona a raha tha jab mugdha ro rhi thi. Di jannat nam kitna sona lag rha hi hamare rajat ki jannat. Ishaan or jannat kitne pyare hi dono kya ladte hi i realy enjoy their desum-desum. Ek song hi DARMIYAN un charo par starting me suit hota hi. Apka ff padne ke liye main bahut excited hu itni intresting story or first part like a atom bomb jisne to sabko hila kar rakh diya. Or tej or edha also amazing both are sweet or rtmc to hay hi .Fantastic Di plz plz upd soon. Luv u.

Originally posted by: sonalimurat

Thanks Ridzzi for starting new FF

..Hmm For stories.. for characters ...all four are in pain of Love ... different concept ...really it would be very nice story for readers ...Thank u so much dear...

Looking forward ...

update soon

Love u

Originally posted by: girlz-rule

@ridzzi: Nyc story!!!!😊

@rashmi:- EDHA means SACRED

and ESHAAN is one of the another name of lord vishnu

and i think you know the meanings of jannat and tej,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,😊

PART 2:- Their Unwanted Decision And A Day Together

Dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai
Beete Lamhein...

Chand Lamhaaat Ke Waaste Hi Sahi
Muskuraakar Mili Thi Mujhe Jindagi
Teri Aaghosh Mein Din The Mere Kate
Teri Baahon Mein Thi Meri Raate Kati
Aaj Bhi Jab Woh Pal Mujhko Yaad Aate Hai
Dil Se Saare Gamon Ko Bhula Jaate Hai
Dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai
Beete Lamhein...

ZUBEDA HOUSE (DELHI):-

Her body shivered because of the loud thunder outside her house and with that her eyes moved towards the window, her face was still red and pale, lips were dry and hairs were messed, how she always keep on trying to find just a single way to be around him, to talk to him, just a single chance. Her every day starts and end only and only thinking about him and how her face got brighten up and heart jumped with happiness only by his one glance and if by chance he saw her for a moment then she was on 9^th cloud, that day also she was too scared to go to him when her friend almost pushed her towards him to sit beside seeing him alone.

TWO YEARS AGO (EXCEL COLLAGE):-

Escaping from edha's play full slaps, they both finally reached to the outside of their class room when jannat stop and turned around:-''ok ok stop now, we have reached to the classroom'':-she said controlling her laughter:-''ok I spare you'':-edha said while raising her palm in blessing and they both laughed:-''let's go":-jannat said and they both entered in class room.

As they both entered jannat eyes first and foremost fell on tej who was sitting alone in the mid row concentrating in his book. Jannat looked at him and then to her friend and getting excited she elbowed to her friend try to signal her about tej.

As edha felt that her friend was unusually elbowing her she confusingly looked at her when jannat signaled her something and she followed her gaze. As edha's eyes fell on jannat's signal her cheeks get deeper shade of red with shyness but again her fantasy got broken when jannat again elbowed her and she annoyingly stared at her.

''what are you doing, he is alone, go and sit beside him before his dumb friend occupy that space'':-jannat said while slightly pushing edha to move ahead.

''what?????????, are you mad???????, I am not going to sit beside him, what he will think??????'':-edha scaredly replied and somewhere she was right what if he will think her as a despo who was just trying to find a way to get close to him.

''he will think that you are a despo'':-jannat annoyingly snapped and edha gulped at her reply. Seeing the color draining from her friends face jannat calmed herself:-''idiot, just go and sit, he will think nothing, you are loosing a golden chance, just go and don't think about anything else'':-jannat said and almost pushed edha in his direction.

STREET AT RIVER SIDE (BANGLORE):-

His trace got broke as some water droplets of waves directly hit his face, closing his eyes he wiped his face, as he slowly removed his palm a slight smile was playing on his lips, how much he got irritated whenever he use to see her, just forget about being with her and that day when he got to know that they were paired to do the project, he so wanted to scream on professor just for pairing them together when he knew that it was intentional.

EXCEL COLLAGE:-

After seeing that finally edha is moving towards him jannat scanned the classroom to find a seat for herself, she was amazed to see that the whole classroom was filled with students, ''something is special today?????????'', she asked to herself and found the last seat vacant.

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Edha silently walked and hesitantly sat beside him keeping her hair lock behind her ears, for first tej turned his eyes and again turned his head towards his book without paying attention but soon his heart thud with loud noise as he realized that she was sitting behind him and instantly he faced her.

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Eshaan slowly entered in the classroom with his bag loosely hung on his left shoulder but soon stopped as he saw edha sitting beside his friend, a teasing smile played on his lips as he saw them lost in each other. He then scanned the classroom to find seat for himself and found the last seat empty only occupied by someone who was now bent down to pick up something. He moved towards it and sat beside that person.

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Jannat was keenly observing the love birds and smiling seeing them together, she didn't knew why but she was feeling good though she herself never believed in love and all that but whenever she saw them a smile automatically plays on her lips, she didn't knew why but she always adored them. She was just thinking about them when her pen fell down from her hand with which she was playing keeping them in between her fingers. She had just bend down to pick it up when she felt someone sitting beside her, she picked up her pen and got up only to get red with anger.

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Instantly seeing each other both got up as fast as they could and change their seats with other students, where eshaan just changed by requesting, jannat angrily forced one of the champu of her class. As soon as they sat on their changed seats the professor entered with a bundle of papers in his hand.

Tej and edha were completely lost in each other where edha was trying her hard to hide her blush tej was shamelessly gazing at her, he couldn't believe that she had actually taken a step towards their unnamed relationship. Where on the other hand jannat and eshaan was too looking at each other but with different feelings, after leaving their seats they both couldn't help themselves from shooting daggers at each other.

''good morning class'':-professor shukla greeted everyone and with that the gazing and stairing session of all four of them got broke and they all looked towards the professor:-''G-O-O-D M-O-R-N-I-N-G S-I-R'':-the whole class lazily replied.

''is this a singing class?????????'':-the professor asked and the whole class room got filled with soft giggles:-''please sir, first you'':-from somewhere a voice came:-''just came out and then I will tell you who will be the first one'':-professor said and everyone laughed.

''so class enough of your competitions and fun, now it's time for real competition, as you all know that you guys are in your mid semester you all have to make a project'':-professor announced and got quite for some moments to see the reaction of everyone. Some made faces, some yawn, some tiredly leaned back to their seats and some just slap their head with their hands. Professor gave a ''OK'' type look and continued:-''fine then as you guys are too much interested as I can see, there is a good news for you all, this year you don't have to make solo projects, two people will work on one project and that will be one boy and one girl'':-as professor finished the girls just smiled and boys whistled.

''ok then make a chit of your name and submit it to me, we will play your favourite game ''THE LUCK'', I will pick up a chit from boys and one from girls and the names will be partners'':-he said and after two minutes there were chits on his table divided in two, one with the names of boys and one with names of girls.

''so let's began'':-professor said and picked up a chit from boys:-''anoop'':-he announced, the boy got up and then he picked up a chit from girls, the whole class was silent and was waiting to know who will be the girl:-''madhulika'':-he announced and everyone clapped teasingly smiling at them after that professor kept on the processes and the whole class enjoying.

Now the name was of tej, edha, eshan, jannat all of them were sticking their eyes on the chit in professor's hand hoping that the name will be of edha's but as the professor announced the name their face fell down, it was the name of some random girl and same happened with edha also, she had also got some book worm of her class mr. anoop.

But the real fun all students got when finally the professor announced the name:-''eshaan'':-as he heard his name he got up only to find half of the students looking at him and half of just fixing their eyes on jannat even the professor was also trying his best to control his laughter seeing both of them.

Jannat and eshan both were feeling hell embarrassed with everyone's behavior but they can't do anything, if everyone was behaving like this then only they both are responsible for all, even their best friend's were also trying their best to control their laughter. And then finally the professor announced his partner which made everyone shock plus brust into laughter:-''jannat''.

''what???????'':-both exclaimed together in shock:-''no way sir plz, I can't work him'':-jannat instantly said getting up from her seat:-''yes sir, believe it or not, it's weired but unfortunately I am agreeing with her, I can't work with her at any cost'':-eshaan too supported her.

''I am not giving you choice, you guys like it or not but you have to work together'':-professor said roughly, it was not like that professor can't change the pairing but eshaan and jannat's fight was so popular in whole collage that even sometimes the professor's too enjoy their enemity and jannat, eshaan knew it very well that he can change their pairing but he will not as he was getting a chance to enjoy their fight so they just nodded in yes and sat down on their seats abusing each other under their breath and with that the bell rang and professor smilingly leaved the class and as he left jannat took her bag and angrily dragged edha out of the class where as eshaan just kept sitting their when tej too joined him. They both were upset as tej wanted to be with edha but it didn't happen and eshaan wanted to be away with her but now unwillingly he has to be with her. They both kept sitting there for long without saying a single word staring at the white board of their class room.

SAINT METHODIST CHURCH (HYEDRABAD):-

A smile came on her lips as the day flashed in front of her eyes but soon tears took it's place as the realization dawn to her that she was just roaming in her past.

The evening was getting itself into the night but she was still sitting there in church lost in her past:-''what happen my child????????'':-the sudden voice made her to tilt her head upward. A concern church fathery was standing beside her holding a bible and a cross chain in his hands.

''what happen my child????????, did you have lost something or had a fight with anyone??????'':-the concern fathery again put up a question, without answering she again silently turned her eyes to the statue of jesus.

FIGHT, how unusual this word seems to her now but there was a day when this word remains on top in her dictionary.

TWO YEARS BACK, EXCEL COLLAGE :-

Anoop was walking with his bundles of books when suddenly a strong grip around his arm pulled him inside a dark room and pinned him to the wall while strangulating:-''just take your name back in pairing with edha or make yourself ready to be in our house with broken bones'':-after that there was a still silence in that dark room, anoop coughed as he was released from the person's grip, for a moment he couldn't understand that what was happening when those words ringed in his ears again, '' 'just take your name back in pairing with edha or make yourself ready to be in our house with broken bones'' and then he realized that someone has actually threatened him just because he was paired with edha??????, while slowly stroking he pondered over that person, the hand's which were around his neck was soft and that voice was of a GIRL, he released a deep sigh finally deciding that he is ready to work with other person instead of living with broken bones.

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She frustratingly closed her eyes stopping in her reading process closing her palms in a fist:-''will you please just keep your fat mouth shut'':-she angrily demanded.

''NO'':-he calmly clarified, they both were sitting together from almost last 30 minutes and with utter shock silent but eshaan was not in mood of sitting with her so he was intentionally making wiered noises to make her annoy so that he will get rid of her as soon as he can but because of the project she was continuously avoiding his tries but it was getting out of her head, ''why the hell he is annoying her????????''.

She avoided him and tried to concentrate in her book:-''sorry'':-a soft voice pierced her ears and her head shot up in disbelief:-''what did you just say????????'':-she asked not believing on her ears, the great ESHAAN KHANNA is saying sorry to her, to her JANNAT SINGHANIA, whom he didn't even stand just for a second is saying sorry to HER.

''are you a deaf??????'':-he angrily questioned:-''I am saying SORRY, I shouldn't have drop you in morning'':-he apologized and then seeing her ''ARE YOU OK??????'' type expression he clarified :-''wait don't take it wrong, I am just apologizing because of tej, he didn't like when I misbehave with anyone'':-he clarified but somewhere he knew that it was not tej, some where he too was feeling bad for saying those things to her, his dad had always taught him to respect others especially when it comes to girl' but he didn't knew why whenever she came infront of him he always loose his patient and just emerged into fight with her.

''whatever is the reason, I didn't have to do anything with it, I just couldn't believe that papa's boy is saying sorry and too me'':-she teasingly said flipping her eye lids.

''ahhh tej was wrong, it's of no use to apologize to a spoilt brat like you'':-he annoyingly snapped her:-''don't you dare to say me something like that'':-she pointed her finger towards him.

''I will'':-he said while gripping her finger and twisting it:-''stop it you are hurting me'':-she pleaded in pain caused by his grip and twisting.

Realizing that it's getting too much, he released her finger and irritatingly turned his red face to other side:-''stupid'':-she said while lightly stroking her finger and they shoot daggers at each other. Unwillingly they both kept on sitting there shouting and fighting until that class got over.

CENTRAL JAIL (MUMBAI):-

''10 minutes, finish it soon'':-the cook shouted while almost pushing the plate of food towards him breaking his trace, he looked at him and then to the plate, ''COFFEE'', a word ringed in his ears from his past leaving a smile on his lips and tears in his eyes, looking at the plate he remembered their first talk together and finally their first coffee together.

EXCEL COLLAGE (CANTEEN):-

Edha happily came running to him and stood beside him panting, she was continuously finding him from last 20 minutes and finally she found him:-''we...we...we are working together'':-she said still panting. Tej looked up at her in confusion and in bewilderment, she is saying to him?????????.

Seeing him looking at her like that she realized that what she had done, she had never talked to him, not even got the courage to even stand infront of him but now when she got to know that they are working together she got too much happy that she didn't even bothered about anyone and almost shouted on him making him aware about their pairing.

''working????????'':-he asked completely surprised:-''ah...we...we both...i mean professor shukla has said that we...we will work together, madhulika and anoop have asked to work together so professor said that we both will do this project'':-she completed in low voice feeling little shy and hell embarrassed on her way of telling him about the changes.

An unknown smile appeared on his lips as he listened to her words, he was so disappointed when professor had announced about their pairing with others:-''but how...I mean we were paired with others then how this??????'':-he asked not believing that his wish has been fulfilled.

''I don't know professor shukla had called me to the staff room and told me about our pairing and asked me to let you know about all changes'':-she completed feeling too much happy to utter a word.

''sit'':-he offered and then they both sat down:-''coffee'':-he asked and she just nodded and after some moments of awkward silence slowly they merged themselves in chatting with each other removing all hesitation between them after all finally they both got an official chance to talk to each other or directly can say that they got a way to be with each other apart from jannat and eshaan's fight scenes.

And like that everyone's day passed willingly or unwillingly but with each other.

Those moments were so sweet and memorable, their fight, arguments, hide n seek everything, though at that moment they didn't knew that one day these memories will leave a smile on their faces and tears in their eyes but now...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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