JEET- a murat-karnika ff - Page 3

Jeet, by god, saare k saare characters leaders h..

Jannat's entry was best- really cool n rare name.

Kahte h love k baad life jannat ho jati h…eshaan k liye tho sachi mei life jannat bann jayegi :p

Edha?- meaning kya h di iska..plz tell..i quiet liked it. tej n ehda ka pair is so lovely..luvbirds kahin k…dno bade shone h…

But jannat n eshaan is ekdum dhamakedaar..god, herr jagah ladai ladai…

Inki love stro tho hate story se hi shoro hoti h herr jagah… but maza bada aata h…

Uhoo! Jannat, itni bori bori bate nhi kaho—tumhara hone wala pati h bhai..kuch tho socho…

I really like ki eshaan badme genuininely sry tha for jannat to tej…acha bacha…

Prof- shukla…hmm, yahi naam mila aapko…ek prof shukla mere bhi colg mei h… :p

Really waiting for more masala wali stry of jannat n eshaan n cheeni wali stry of edha n tej..

Hope edha-jannat n tej-eshaan Jodi hamesha aise hi frdns rahe.

Eshaan per jo ladkiyaan line maar rhi thin a di, unko mere taraf se :P

N yes tej babu- humari jannat is rockstar, 10 on 10..yo!

Ehda is sweetest-iske saath tho kuch bora nhi hona chahiye kabhi..dil se dua nikalti h sweet bachi k liye.

Alpha plus- nice name agn.

thanks for staring n sharing rtmc ff
beautiful intro n cs
so christian muslim hindu all religon are there!!
i think girl sitting at church mugz
boy in car rt
n other two r karan kartika
apt songs used!
i m ready with tissues!!

lovly & superb di. Kya story hi direct dil ko chuti hi. Sabse pahle vo jo intro tha mujhe realy rona a raha tha jab mugdha ro rhi thi. Di jannat nam kitna sona lag rha hi hamare rajat ki jannat. Ishaan or jannat kitne pyare hi dono kya ladte hi i realy enjoy their desum-desum. Ek song hi DARMIYAN un charo par starting me suit hota hi. Apka ff padne ke liye main bahut excited hu itni intresting story or first part like a atom bomb jisne to sabko hila kar rakh diya. Or tej or edha also amazing both are sweet or rtmc to hay hi .Fantastic Di plz plz upd soon. Luv u.

Thanks Ridzzi for starting new FF

@ridzzi: Nyc story!!!!😊

Originally posted by: tejjo

res😃

sorry ridzz im late

but kya karu update padhne ka tym hi nhi milta

cs is superb plus part 1 is dhansuuu

omg they all four are so cute especially our rajat n mugda oh sorry jannat n eshaan

so sweet kahan se dhunda yeh naam...jannat isse sochkar hi kitni beautiful feeling hoti

apni mugs ke liye ekdum perfect naam h

n eshaan to rt se bilkul match karta h

yeh edha n uska friend bhi accha h

mujhe edha jyada cute lagi

haye re starting me ladai jhagda

oh god inhe sadbuddhi do

waise bhi jaha pyar hota h wahi jhagda hota h

ridz love u yr for awesome start

mein kehne hi wali thi ek new ff ke liye

n u listened it

thanks it very interesting

cont soon

love u

Originally posted by: PariK

Awesome Ridzi

I really liked the names u have choosen for all characters...

Eshaan nd Jannat hates each other but no worries sooner or later they will fall for each other

Tej and Edha r matured and sensible.

Hey u know this story reminds me a film called ISHQ... 😃

Superb, do continue soon

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

Thank You Di, Nehi 4 a change yeh thanks RTMC FF or Update k liye Nehi Ha, Yeh Thanks Sply EXCEL CLG k liye ha! YES East or West Excel Is The Best, You Know Di, I Love Excel, kaas mera clg bhi Excel jaisa hota, kitna maja ataa,

Jannat- Perfect Name 4 Mugdha Di's Charecter, Unki Ek Beautiful Smile Mujhe sidha Jannat pohucha deti ha,

Eshaan- Suraj sa Teej ho Jish mein, woh hota ha Eshaan, thoda saant thoda chanchal, Rajat bohat aache se Potray kar sakta ha!

Dushman ko hum apne Dimag mein rakhte hain, unha se Dil tak jane ka bhi ek rashta hota ha, jo muskil tho hota ha but namumkin nehi,

Naafrat tho karna padta ha But Pyaar tho ho jata ha!

Owesome Update, Do Cont Soon,

LOVE YOU DI :-*

Originally posted by: chand1234

wonderful!:D