Maneet,Do you remember ( fiction)Chp 20 pg 34 - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 18 ..lovely Update
Maan falling for her😉
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chp 20 :The first night in our home
Part 2

First time after marriage is on of the unforgettable memory to eny couple, it the first time when the couple are left alone on the room that will embrace all their future moments together 😉




Flashback

Maan enter their room while Geet was in arm , all the way to the room he keep looking at her with smile thinking " How funny she is looking down and blushing " when the servents close the door behind them ,
Geet say " Ok they had closed the door Maan please put me down now " she was feeling so embarrassed on his arms her heart was beating like a crazy ,
then Maan say with an evil smile "Why ? you are not that heavy "
Geet look at him and say " Maan please "
He then put her down , and keep looking at her, she try to escape his looks and the crazy beat of her heart so she say " O god its realy hard to be a bride , all this clothes and jewels, i feel like im a walking shop "
Maan just laugh and shake his head then Geet look at him thinking " His laugh is so beautiful , o god focus Geet focus "
Then she ask him " My bags , where the servents put my bags ? "
Maan " On your dressing room there "
Geet " Wow , i have a dressing room ? "
Maan " Yes, in this room there is 2 dressing room one for you and the other one for me "
Geet look around and say " Wow, this room is huge and so beautiful , i feel like im one of the palace of some movie like " Jodha Akbar " i love that movie, "
then she start walking and looking around "but the lighing is dim , and its full of flower here, i think they try to give us a romantic mode for tonight " then laugh ,Maan was just looking at her, then he hear her saying " Outch , i think i hit something , its a small table and realy cute one, could you please turn the light on , i hardly can see on this dim "
Maan " Are you ok ? "
Geet laugh " The table and i are ok dont worry"
He decide to go to open all the light, Geet was heading to his direction to ask him about the bathroom on her way to him she trip again due the carpet and fall on him ,
Geet was closing her eyes like she was falling from a cliff , Maan smile on her weird expression and say " Open your eyes Geet"
Geet open her eyes to find herself on top of Maan, and they were on the floor
Geet " O my god , im sorry Maan realy sorry " then when she try to get up , her necklace was stuk on Maan clothes that she just go back to his chest, and she could hear his racing heart beat , but then she hear him saying " Geet, you are geting heavy, could you please stand up "
Geet then free the neckless and stabd up, and Maan too , the poor guy was trying to controle himself since their fall has realy affect him so, he turn the light on and say with a firm voice " Im going to take a shower first " then he went on hurry trying not to look on Geet's eyes, since if he do she will see his lust , and he enter the bathroom closer the door so violently, that shock Geet who was thinking " Whats wrong with him ? i have said sorry , and what the hell? a room this huge with 2 dressing room , 2 big plasma , huge bed , a few sofas and tables has only one bathroom ? i have the say the architect who design this room had realy a dirty mind "

then she went to the dressing room, she open the door and
say " Wow, is this just a dressing room ? a family of 4 could live here , o my bags are here "
A few bags were on the middle of the room she opened it thinking
" I dont think that the clothes that i brough with me will be enough to fill this room "
Then she open the other bags thinking " But i have enough space here , for video games ,my dvds, monopoly, karaoke system and my draw's tools, and i will still have space for eny new stuffs , realy cool room "
Then start to arrange her clothes and stuff on the room thinking
" I still hear the shower that mean he still on the bathroom whats taking him this long ?i realy want to pee damn it , as a bride i didn't have the chance to eat a lot , i spend the whole time drinking soda im so hungry too "
After she put everything on place, take off her jawels,and take the clothes that she was the wear after shower , and her towel, she get out of the room , put her clothes on the bed thinking " O my god he is still on the shower " she look up to pray god to make him get out soon but her eyes fall on the beautiful roof so she keep looking

Meanwhile Maan was on the shower thinking " That girl will drive me crazy "he then close the shower put his red towel and get out from the bathroom the find Geet standing on the middle of the room looking at the roof , he keep look at her for seconds , she was looking like a princess, with her bride clothes on the middle on that room , she was look on the roof with a big smile with her eyes wide open , Maan come stand next to her and say "What are you looking at ? "
Geet was on her own world that she answer him while keep looking at the roof " The beautiful inscritions on the wood, it just outstanding "
Maan smile and say "My mother design this roof, infact the roof was empty when she came here for her work as designer ,"
Geet say " May her soul rest on peace this work is just .. "she was talking then look at Maan to complete but she stop talking , put her hands on her eyes and say "For god sake Maan put some clothes on ,why you are hanging out on the room like that ?"
Maan smile she was puting her hands on her eyes like a kid the he add " Like what ? im puting my red towel , o i forget you are a virgin you cannot stand a shirtless man specialy with this perfect body "
Geet look at him and say " What perfect body ? i have seen much better bodies on" magic mike ""
Maan look at her confuse " Is that a title of a po*n movie ? "
Geet " How dare you , its a title of a movie "
Maan came close to her , till their eys meet and they were only a step away from each others and say with a deep and saxy tone " Realy ?"
Geet become all red and say " Im going to take a cold shower .. i mean a hot shower , .. no i mean a normal shower with normal heat , i mean
temperature ,like the one that all the people who take shower take "
Maan blast laughing saying " Thats a realy long and weird sentence"
Geet just take her clothes and rush to the bathroom , Maan keep smiling looking at her then went to his dressing room
Geet enter the bathroom close the door and think " That boy will drive me crazy " then she look at the bathroom and say " Wow, its a huge bathroom , a shower, wait a minute it that a japanese toilet cool, also a jacuzzi , a TV , and a music system of the bathroom , all this remind me of my trip to japan in that cool hotel , o the design on the wall are so beautiful too and its on blue cool "

Meanwhile Maan has already on dress up and he was siting on the bed working on his Ipat , review some files , then after a while he think "what taking her this long ?" then he hear the music come out from the bathroom and Aarti singing too
" ....Oh I wanna dance with somebody, I wanna feel the heat with somebody with somebody who loves OOO..."
Maan then think
"wait a minute is she singing, ? she turn the music loud and now she sing with it too, that girl need help
"
Then he keep working , Geet then walk out the bathroom and see him working she just stand infront of the mirror that was close to there bed and start drowing her hair with her blue towel , when she move her hair to the other side some drop of water,fall on Maan , he then look at her with anger but before he could start screaming, his voice just stuck and he keep looking at her , she looked more pretty on her pink night saree , and after she took all her make up off, her natural beauty just shine, he just keep staring at her , after a while she turn to look at him and find him staring so she smile and say " I look hot with my wet long hair right "? and start to laugh
He then look at his ipat and say with a cold tone " Stop your jokes , there a hair dryer on the bathroom on the second inset , go and used it ,the drop of water from your wet hair fall on the floor "
Geet then went to the bathroom saying " Ok, wow there is a hair dryer too, that bathroom is realy cool "
Maan just shake his head and keep working ,when Geet finaly back with her hair draw , she go to her side on the bed and find out that Maan has put some pillows between them , she look at it and keep laughing
Maan " What ? "
Geet say jocking" Thats a lot of pillows Maan are you that afraid of me ? dont worry i have a big respect for men " then keep laughing
Maan " Ha ha so funny, im afraid that you rool to my side of the bed and wake me up "
Geet take her place on the bed start the put to cover on her saying "Dont worry i dont rool while im sleep , my sleep is awesome, i dont snore or open my mouth , or take the cover i sleep like the women on the TV "
Maan with sarcasm " How can you be that sure ? "
Geet " I film myself with camera one night "
Maan was shocked from her answer " And why did you do that ? "
Geet " I did that after i saw paranormal activity , on the end of the movie , i wonder " What happen during my sleep ? "so i film my self sleeping and i find nothing except i sleep perfectly "
Maan confused " What ? wait a minute you did that after watching an horror movie and .. you know what its usless to talk to you just go to sleep tomorrow we have so much things to do "he then put his ipat on the
stand next to him and turn the light off
Geet put her hear on her pillow and said " Good night Maan " but Maan did not answer so she turn the light on , set up look at him and say " Maan , Maan "
Maan was trying to sleep he then turn look at her and say " What now ? "
Geet " I say good night to you , you should say good night back but you didn't "
Maan look at her confused then she add looking him like she cut him doing something wrong " Wait a minute , you dont want me to have good night ,ah thats mean "
Maan " What the hell ? ok good night and sweet dreams happy ?can you stop talking and sleep "
Geet with a big smile " Good nigh a gain Maan " she turn the light of put her hear on the pillow and colse her eyes , Maan too turn oposet to her and sleep thinking " Crazy girl "
Geet was thinking " O god i forgot to take my medicaments, great , its ok its just one time, i will take it tomorrow mornning , im so tired now "
she then close her eyes to sleep , with a warm heart since she was happy of the fact thet the man that she love sleep next to her , her last thought before going on deep sleep was " I love you Maan "
Edited by kholita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jst loved d part... D way geet handled emotional moments were unquie & lovely... Waiting eagerly to see hw maan wil fal 4 geet so hard... Cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 18 Superb ...
continue soon ...
Thnxxx 4 PM ...
Edited by trishadcute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet k masti
n maanus anger wow
maanu getting j seeing geet with other good
lvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 19 - loved the part
so maan watching her purhcases on card and he may not know that whatever she purchased was all for others and nothing for herself
loved the bidai part
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Part 19 Wonderful ...👏
continue soon ...
Edited by trishadcute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet n her family fun time woww
it was great
she reslly too good yaar
finally both married
n theirfrst night
know nothibg gonna hapenrofl
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
crazy geet loved her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it so cute and sweet loving this crazy bubbly full of life geet awesome update thanks for the pm

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