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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part - 1

"Come on kids get up" she screamed. And then she looked at the clock & run towards the room. She smiled looking how her kids were in asleep. She set inside of the bed and kissed there forehead. Get up meri aankho ke "TAREY", She said in sweet voice. And then Reyhan open his eyes and said, "good morning mumma"and kissed her. Good morning beta ,she replied. "TAMANNA bhi utth gayi, good morning mamma." Tamanna said and kissed tanni. She replied the same. she took both into the bathroom and put both in the bathtub and they start playing with water. After a few minute later she come and gets them out from the bathtub. She put both of them on the bed and give both there cloths to wear. Reyhan wear his cloths quickly but tamanna she was still playing with her doll. "Tamanna tum ready nahi hui? Koi baat nahi main tumhi ready hone me help karta hu", said reyhan. He start dressing her, at the same time she entered into the room and looked both of them. Specialy reyhan who is busy in dressing her little sister and making her ponytail. In afew minute both get ready and run towards the kitchen. Tamanna sat on her chair but reyhan go inside the kitchen and take a slice of bread and start putting jam on it for tamanna, his mom and for himself. He use to help tanni in every work in which he is capable. All three of them were ready to leave the house. She dropped kids to the bus stop and put them into the bus and takes an auto to her office. She work hard to fulfill the needs of his family but still with a smile on her face, koi anger nahi, kisi se nahi, na kudh se, na hi rey se. after finishing her office work she rush to her home before her kids reaches and start making food for them. "hum aa gaye mumma" both shout in same tone. She gave them a beautiful smile and hug them. Both kissed her and ran to the bathroom to take a shower and back to the table, after afew minutes, to eat there food' in the meanwhile they herd the music . they suddenly they slip down chair and start dancing cause they love dancing..

Wait for part-2

PART -2

FLASHBACK

HAPPY VELENTINE DAY REY &I LOVE U REY. I love u to tanni. Both were happy cause everyone has excepted their relationship. They were on top of the world at that time. They were laughing and senting time with each other. They spent the hole night at tanni's house cause swyam is at shwron's house Next day, TRING..TRING..

Tanni:hello

Tanni's mom:hello beta.

Tanni: hello mom. How are u? how is everyone there?

Tanni's mom:dadi ki tabiyat bahut karab hai or who bas tumhe hi pukar rahi hai kyuki tum unki ladli ho na.. plese beta come bake home.. jaldi aao beta. Doctor ne kaha hai ki dadi ke pas jyada samay nahi hai.ok.bay beta.

Tanni:okmumma. Main jaldi aane ki kosish karti hu. Bay mumma. Tanni start her packing for jodhpur. At the sametime she is trying to call rey and want to tell that she leaving for jodhpur in 4 hours but his phone is unreachable. So she cll swayam tell everything and tell him that she will leave the house in 1 hour. So she will not come to the college. She tell swayam to gave a leave application to the AVP. He said that he will do the same and inform the AVP and other team member about her leave.

Since tanni was not there swayam think that he can organize a pajama party and he invited all his friends. At night, everyone is there having fun with each other.

Tanni at Jodhpur

Tanni's dadi: beta meri last wish ye hai ki main tumhi dulhan bane hue dekhna chahati hu. Tanni want to tell everyone that she love rey but isse pahle ki who kuch bhi bool paati her mother said her that her dadi chose a boy who is ready to get merry with her and dadi also like him. Tanni has no choice. She said YES for her family's sake. The whole family is now busy in the preparation of the marriage. Swyam get the information that tanni ki saadi pix ho gayi hai. He was in shock that in sudden tanni kaise maan gayi. He want to talk to tanni but she just not said a single word. So he cannot do anything but to see all this. Tanni's family invite each her friend in her wedding. Everyone in collage were in shock. But in sab ke beech rey was missing. Actually Rey has to go to London to help his father in business for 2 months and no one is able to contact him. He is out of reach. After 1 week saddi ho gayi and tanni bhi apne husband ke sath US chali gayi.

After 2 months later, when Rey come back, swyam tell all what happen and rey got angry hearing all this. Swyam want tell something but rey gusse me waha se chala gaya. After that rey ne bhi apne sare frinds se sare contact break kiye and he get busy in his professional carrier.

2 days after her marriage, in US, tanni was all alone in the airport. She search her husband but who waha nahi tha. Her passport, jewelry, everything was stolen only a letter jo uske hand me uus time tha, jisme likha tha:

Maine tumse saddi sirf paise ke liye ki thi jo ab mujhe mil gaye hai to aab tum jaha chaho ja sakti ho. Good bey forever..

Now tanni has decided to go back but before she leave she got the news that she was pregnant. so she has no choice but to stay there and have to do some work for her survival. She start her life of self dependence. She live with a lady in her house as a paying guest who is pregnant for 7 months. They became good friends and shear everything of their life except there someone special. she is none other than our own kriya. Tanni knew kriya but kriya use nahi janti thi. Tanni ne bhi use ye baat hide ki ki jo baby uske peeth me paal raha hai who REY ka hai.kriya ne bhi use nahi bathya ki uske baby ka father koun hai. REYHAN was rey and kriya's baby. When rey and kriya were drunk at the party and got out from their they both were went to a tabela and then all this happens. But in all this kisi ka fault nahi tha cause they were totally drunk and dono mese ye baat kisi ko bhi yaad nahi ke uss raat kya hua tha baas kriya ko itna janti thi ki who raat bhar rey ke saath thi and when she got up early in the morning she find her in rey's arms. She quckily getup and run from there but rey use to kuch bhi nahi pata ki uss raat kya hua.

PRESENT {after 6 years ago}

[Tanni soch kay rahi hai tujhe yaad hai na ki tujhe Reyhan and Tamanna ko dance classes me admission bhi dilana hai, tujhe usske liye overtime bhi karna hoga. tanni thinking in her mind and kriya ko diya hua wada bhi to pura karna hai.] "mumma we also want to become a dancer" both of them said in one tone. "Sure meri aankho ke TAREY" said with a big smile. "We love u mumma" said both. "I love u to beta". Now u both go and finish ur homework ok. "ok mumma". Tanni was now busy in her office work. After finishing there homework both kids went near tanni and said that they want to learn dance. Tanni said them that she will soon start there dancing classes as she know that kids want to learn dance. Rayhan and tamanna start jumping when they heard that they will soon start learn dancing. "reyhan aapni mom pe gaya hai or tamanna apne papa pe."she said with a smile.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg dis is intresting pls update soon nd pm me :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg...dis is really amazing! =) please jaldi se update karna & PM me =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept plz pm after an update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting start, reyhan making his sisters ponytail was really cute, but his taani alone? Where's rey??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waaoo iam excited to read next part..!
update sooonn n do pm me plzz...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start..
loved the rhyan help his mother and make ponytell of his sister.

but where is rey... dear...
do cont. soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART -2

FLASHBACK

HAPPY VELENTINE DAY REY &I LOVE U REY. I love u to tanni. Both were happy cause everyone has excepted their relationship. They were on top of the world at that time. They were laughing and senting time with each other. They spent the hole night at tanni's house cause swyam is at shwron's house Next day, TRING..TRING..

Tanni:hello

Tanni's mom:hello beta.

Tanni: hello mom. How are u? how is everyone there?

Tanni's mom:dadi ki tabiyat bahut karab hai or who bas tumhe hi pukar rahi hai kyuki tum unki ladli ho na.. plese beta come bake home.. jaldi aao beta. Doctor ne kaha hai ki dadi ke pas jyada samay nahi hai.ok.bay beta.

Tanni:okmumma. Main jaldi aane ki kosish karti hu. Bay mumma. Tanni start her packing for jodhpur. At the sametime she is trying to call rey and want to tell that she leaving for jodhpur in 4 hours but his phone is unreachable. So she cll swayam tell everything and tell him that she will leave the house in 1 hour. So she will not come to the college. She tell swayam to gave a leave application to the AVP. He said that he will do the same and inform the AVP and other team member about her leave.

Since tanni was not there swayam think that he can organize a pajama party and he invited all his friends. At night, everyone is there having fun with each other.

Tanni at Jodhpur

Tanni's dadi: beta meri last wish ye hai ki main tumhi dulhan bane hue dekhna chahati hu. Tanni want to tell everyone that she love rey but isse pahle ki who kuch bhi bool paati her mother said her that her dadi chose a boy who is ready to get merry with her and dadi also like him. Tanni has no choice. She said YES for her family's sake. The whole family is now busy in the preparation of the marriage. Swyam get the information that tanni ki saadi pix ho gayi hai. He was in shock that in sudden tanni kaise maan gayi. He want to talk to tanni but she just not said a single word. So he cannot do anything but to see all this. Tanni's family invite each her friend in her wedding. Everyone in collage were in shock. But in sab ke beech rey was missing. Actually Rey has to go to London to help his father in business for 2 months and no one is able to contact him. He is out of reach. After 1 week saddi ho gayi and tanni bhi apne husband ke sath US chali gayi.

After 2 months later, when Rey come back, swyam tell all what happen and rey got angry hearing all this. Swyam want tell something but rey gusse me waha se chala gaya. After that rey ne bhi apne sare frinds se sare contact break kiye and he get busy in his professional carrier.

2 days after her marriage, in US, tanni was all alone in the airport. She search her husband but who waha nahi tha. Her passport, jewelry, everything was stolen only a letter jo uske hand me uus time tha, jisme likha tha:

Maine tumse saddi sirf paise ke liye ki thi jo ab mujhe mil gaye hai to aab tum jaha chaho ja sakti ho. Good bey forever..

Now tanni has decided to go back but before she leave she got the news that she was pregnant. so she has no choice but to stay there and have to do some work for her survival. She start her life of self dependence. She live with a lady in her house as a paying guest who is pregnant for 7 months. They became good friends and shear everything of their life except there someone special. she is none other than our own kriya. Tanni knew kriya but kriya use nahi janti thi. Tanni ne bhi use ye baat hide ki ki jo baby uske peeth me paal raha hai who REY ka hai.kriya ne bhi use nahi bathya ki uske baby ka father koun hai. REYHAN was rey and kriya's baby. When rey and kriya were drunk at the party and got out from their they both were went to a tabela and then all this happens. But in all this kisi ka fault nahi tha cause they were totally drunk and dono mese ye baat kisi ko bhi yaad nahi ke uss raat kya hua tha baas kriya ko itna janti thi ki who raat bhar rey ke saath thi and when she got up early in the morning she find her in rey's arms. She quckily getup and run from there but rey use to kuch bhi nahi pata ki uss raat kya hua.

PRESENT {after 6 years ago}

[Tanni soch kay rahi hai tujhe yaad hai na ki tujhe Reyhan and Tamanna ko dance classes me admission bhi dilana hai, tujhe usske liye overtime bhi karna hoga. tanni thinking in her mind and kriya ko diya hua wada bhi to pura karna hai.] "mumma we also want to become a dancer" both of them said in one tone. "Sure meri aankho ke TAREY" said with a big smile. "We love u mumma" said both. "I love u to beta". Now u both go and finish ur homework ok. "ok mumma". Tanni was now busy in her office work. After finishing there homework both kids went near tanni and said that they want to learn dance. Tanni said them that she will soon start there dancing classes as she know that kids want to learn dance. Rayhan and tamanna start jumping when they heard that they will soon start learn dancing. "reyhan aapni mom pe gaya hai or tamanna apne papa pe."she said with a smile.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it..
Taani ki shaadi and rey bichara...
hope they will meet soon.
do cont. soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow awesome update dear super part

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