TANHA HEN HUM...updated part 13 pg 53 - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry girls
but will update soon
i m stuck up with my Examination form
but don't worry
next update will be coming soon and love u all for 56 likes
thank u so much
Edited by ylaraib - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi np...studies come first! Will wait! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

updating today may be at night
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 11

Morning sun rises in Paris making everything shine with his glory

Tossing and turning on her bed she open her eyes irritated with the rays falling on her face making her

Look more beautiful with her messed up state and pouting face.

Maria close the curtains I want to sleep more.

Geet said to her maid while turning away from the rays.

Maria did what she was told and left the room

Geet felt a soothing touch on her head.

She smiles snuggling closer and closer.

Good morning princess said swati creasing her head

swati

Good night mamma she replied playfully and shifted in her lap giggling a little.

Swati smile at her and try to wake her up

Princess wake up see it's getting late for breakfast.

Mamma bas 5 minutes more

Geet u didn't had ur dinner also beta and everyone else is waiting for u at the breakfast table.

She get up lazily ok mamma u go i m coming in 5 minutes. Swati leave the room and Geet goes to get ready.

She came down after some time.

Good morning

She wishes everyone at the breakfast table

Lo a gai mahrani. Ye hamesha late karti he geet kisi din teri waja se hum sab bhoke mar jain ge said rishi to irritate her.

rishi

He loves to see her changing expression one minute angry, one minute happy one minute irritated. And

next minute pouting like a cute baby.

Oy bhikari tere ghar me khana nai milta he jo tu har waqt yahan para rehta he. She said taking a seat

beside him

Excuse me ye mere uncle ka ghar he tu meri marzi me jab b yahan aon tujhe kya he said indicating towards her dad

Dekh she said pointing butter knife towards hm

Dikha he said leaning towards her

She picks up glass full of water and throws it on his pant

Geeet

Chhichhora

All laugh seeing them fighting like kids

Uv interrupt princess aj ka kya plan he and what kind of party u wont

uday veer ( UV)(dada)

Geet immediately replied no party dada.

Everyone was shocked specially the brother

WHAT!!!

No party said veer

veer(bhai )

No celebration said shivam

shivam(bro)

No fun said Amy and Vicky

VICKY (champ)
armaan (amy)

Yes said Geet but why princess ask uv

Dada I don't want to share my birthday with strangers so I decided that we all will go to disc and will do

party and celebrate my birthday among us only.

Yes screamed Vicky and Amy

Princess u r to good and that is an awesome idea said Amy

Par disc, princess are u sure said shivam not liking the idea of Geet going to a place which is full of boys

Loll bichara can't say no to her nor could control on his possessive nature

Uff bro why r u taking tension I m not going alone u all r coming with me so chill

Ok princess but disc me select karon ga said shivam

Geet roll her eyes ok bro as u wish and bhai u r also coming with us to disc so no bahana

Ab tu jana hi pare ga tumhari birthday jo celebrate karni he said veer

Ok so i m going to call shriya, tamy and sia said geet moving towards the stairs but stop and said to rishi

and u Mister wet pant u r also invited but plz pant sukha kar ana dekhne wale ghalat sochen

ge kahen ge itna bara ho gaya he lekin bachpan ki adat abi tak nai gai.

All burst out laughing

Geet tu aj gai said rishi and start running to catch her while Geet also ran towards her room laughing

Later sia, tamy and shriya came to RM (Raizada mansion)

They were selecting dresses for disc

Yar geet i think this black dress will look hot on u what say sia said shriya but before sia can answer tamy intrupt

sia(UV's fiance )

No yar why dress i think we all should wear pants and tops this golden top will look nice on Geet

tamanna(tammy)

Oy hum disc ja rai hen geet ki birthday party me teri birthday party nai he jo hum pagal bhotniya ban karjain

shriya(shivam's GF)

said shriya while snatching the top from tamy's hand

Oy meri birthday party teri party se tu achhi hoti hy kum se kum os me log bikini pehen kar tu nai ate

Tamy fight back

Just shut up or else I will. . . I will . . .han i will stitch your phata hova jeans shriya said eyeing her jeans

Dare u touch my jeans i cut it with blade and it took me whole day to cut it like that and this is fashion u

bimbo said tamy

U called me bimbo? U. . . U. . . Grrr geet look tamy is irritating me she complained to geet but geet

was lost in her thoughts i dont love him anymore. He dont affect me now. He was wrong. Un k hone ya

na hone se mujhe koi faraq nai parta. I m happy without him and i will prove it tonight haan

i dont love

hm, I don't love him

She is struggling with her feelings, she still loves him madly but don't want to accept it. She wants to

prove it to him and others that she is happy without him, but the truth is she is unable to prove it to

herself so how could she think that other believe on her lai.

Geeet shriya scream in her ear

WHAT!!! Said geet coming out of her thoughts

Geet shriya tujhe kab se awaaz de rai he kahan gum he tu said sia

Nai kuchh nai bas party k bare me soch rai thi she said moving her hair behind her ear. Sia saw her

ring but before she can ask her shriya scream

OMG geet it's so beautiful she said taking her hand so that she can have a clear look on her ring

Where did u get it from she asked. Geet look here and there don't know what to say. She can't say

that maan gifted her

woh . . . woh. . . Han Mauritius se li thi

She pats herself mentally.

Wow geet it's so pretty. Can i wear it for the party today plz plz ask shriya

WHAT!!! She snatched her hand back no way this is mine. Tum koi or le lo mere pas is se b

pretty rings hen but I m not going to give this ring to anyone. Said Geet, getting hell possessive

for the ring.

Geet this is just a ring yar plz just for today shriya pleads

No no No a big no Geet replied stubbornly

Lekin kuo shriya asked

Now Geet was fully trapped she don't know what to say. She even don't know why she is feeling hell

possessive for this ring. This ring is gifted by Maan na so according to her she should hate it. But how

could she hate it. How could she hate the first gift of her love? She accept it or not but this is a reality

that she still loves Maan. But she is hurt because of his past act and his heart wrenching words which he

threw on her innocent heart. But her heart is not listening to her. Her heart wanted to feel the love which

she saw in Maan's eyes, her heart wanted to trust him again, wanted to give him a chance.

Geeet where are u shriya shook her u didn't tell me the reason

Woh ….. Woh…. It's not coming off.

What … but before shriya can complete sia interrupt

Yar plzz continue your talks later. Now decide what to wear

Geet tell me u want to wear pants or dress

Geet think for some time and said

girls today you select a short dress for me but remember it should look hot on me ok

Geet are u all right. kahin tujhe fever tu nai he na said sia getting concerned and checking her forehead

Cut it out yar I m perfectly all right. Ab drama band kar and tell me are u all going to help me or not

Hell yes geet. neki or poch poch said shriya getting excited

geet thought . I know that maan will defiantly come to disk but I will show him that he is wrong I don't love him and I m enjoying my life without him and then he will go away and will never come back

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So my kiwi fruit is going to celebrate her birthday without me... hmm to bad jaan

But don't worry. MAAN SINGH KHURANA does not need any invitation to meet his kiwi fruit.

maan was sitting on sofa seeing geet's picture and listening her talks with her friends through the

microphone which is hidden inside her ring . A sweet smile was playing on his lips listening the lies she

was saying to protect the ring .

see u at the party jaan and I love u

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yar ye larkiyan itni der kun lagati hen said rishi to all the brothers

they all are ready to leave for disc but waiting for their princess and all the girls from past 2 hours but as

usual they are busy grooming them selves

shut up rishi said uv getting irritated with his continues cribbing

yar tu ja k on ko………. but his words stuck in his throat seeing geet descending down😲

shivam was laying on the couch but seeing geet he falls on the ground😆

chalen dada we are ready

said geet standing in front of them

but all were so shocked to react seeing their little sis in this much revealing dress😲

Rishi's mouth fell open and he was staring at her as if seeing her for the first time

Shivam look at him staring at his baby doll. He ran and put his both hands on rishi's eyes

U idiot stop staring at her😡

All came back to their senses

Bro lets go we are getting late said Geet getting confused with their behavior

Geet u r not going anywhere in these cloths said shivam getting angry

Geet was too shocked. No one ever get angry on her and especially on her birthday

She was going to cry any time but uv give a glair to shivam and said immediately

Princess this dress is not looking good plz change it

Par dada ye tu achhi lag rai he said geet checking herself again

Plzz princess mere liye bhi nai change kar sakti said UV

Now how could she not listen to her brother

Ok said geet running back to her room to change

They all took a relief breath😛

Shivam gave an angry glair to shriya knowing that it was all her efforts😡

After half an hour geet came down

Now princess is looking like a princess said uv to chair her up

It's better than before thought shivam giving a smile to geet but she look away showing that she is

angry with him

shivam give a puppy pleading look to uv asking for help

but uv shook his head saying he can't

they all went from there to disc

precape : maneet face to face again


also added CS as u all are getting confused


hit like and comment and if u want to give suggestion than u r most welcome

Edited by ylaraib - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ...
Lovely story ...
continue soon ...
Add me 4 PM pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting to see Maaneet meeting.

Thanx for d CS again.
Its also nice to see how Geet is possessive abt d ring.

Gr8 update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
ossum part..
geet want 2 prove maan she is happy without him
but she is madly in love with him n cant hide it
the ring part shows it..
lol..maan has hidden microphone in her ring..
brilliant
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for giving after a long time nd a big update
update was
geet want o prove maan that she is not in love with him
but wo kise buddhu bana rahi hai she love him a lot
nd she hell possessive about his gift too
love risgi nd geet scene
hope rishi geet se pyaar na karta hoon

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
maan hide a camera in geet;s ring!!!!!!!!!!
geet possessive for ring..
loved it...

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