Humko Deewana Kar Gay(prt 78 pg 127)AK ff

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~Humko Deewana Kar Gaye~

Angad:A very wealthy,rich,young & handsome man…leads a very simple life & is very kind at heart.

Kripa:An equally rich,beautiful & intelligent women…loves to live life at maximum but in her limits…very loving & a devoted person,an only child.

Raj:Kripa's father…awfully rich but kind at heart and a very broad-minded person.

Gayatri:Kripa's mother…very kind…a little possessive abt her daughter.

Om:A filthy rich man..business partner & best friend of Raj (Kripa's father)

Josh: DA VILLIAN

Prithvi:A nice young man,son of a business tycoon,awfully possessive.

Mishty:Prithvi's sister,really sensible & practical.

Aaliya:Angad's sister,a very peaceful person who loves her brother a lot!

Shabbir:Angad's best friend who lives in U.S.A

PART ONE

Kripa=K Gayatri=G Raj=R

We see a girl sleeping peacefully on her bed,the sunlight filtering thru the white gauze curtains & onto her beautiful face.This girl is none other than our KRIPA.

Suddenly her alarm clock goes off & she reluctantly closes it & looks at the time & gives out a shrill scream of horror.

K: Aray yaar mar gaye!!!

G: (frm downstairs) Kiya hua beta???

K:Kiya mama aapne mujhe jagaya kyuun nahin??ab mein late ho jaoongi!!!

G: (an unhappy look on her face)Haan haan tujhe to bas jaane ki pari hai..kissi aur ki to koi parwah he nahin hai (and then goes in the kitchen to make breakfast)

K:(irritated) ufff yeh mama bhi na…aaj meri flight hai..i've gotta go to U.S.A aur yeh hain ke…

Kripa goes to her bathroom & takes a quick shower.She pulls on a pair of jeans & a baby pink t-shirt which says ANGEL & then after her last minute packing…she heads downstairs with her luggage.

K: MAMA!!! Kahaan hain aap???aur mera breakfast?? Aur papa kahaan hain??

G: Aarahi hoon kiya ho gaya hai!! Aur tere papa ka to tujhe pata he hai..morning walk ke liye gaye hain bus aate he honge.

K:Bauhat bhook lagi hai.

Gayatri gives her the breakfast and turns away to wipe her tears bcuz she knows that its going to be a long time b4 Kripa comes back to Mumbai.

K: (she notices this)mama aap ro rahay ho??(she turns Gayatri towards herself & hugs her tightly)

G: To kiya karoon? Tu to mujhe chor kar ja rahi hai na??? achi universities to idhar bhi hain.Tujhe U.S.A jaane ki kiya pari hai?

K: Mama aap ko to pata hai ke mera shuru se he yeh sapna raha hai ke mein abroad ja kar study karoon aur itni mushkil se mujhe yeh scholarship mila hai…plzzz aap rona band karen warna mein bhi ro doongi!

At this moment,Raj(Kripa's father) enters.

Raj: Chalo bhayee…shuru ho gaya starplus ka eik naya drama…Gayatri tum bhi na..bachi ki khuishi mein shamil hone ki bejaye usse guilty feel kara rahi ho.

G: ji mein to..woh bus…(wiping her tears)

K: nahin papa mummy to bus aise he…(& she goes to Raj & hugs him)Papa im gonna miss u aloot!!!

R: I know I know beta magar hum agar aap ko bhej rahe hain to u must prove that u r the best & do gud in ur studies.

K: ofcourse papa!!I will..app ko koi shikayat ka moqa nahin mile ga.

R:That's like my daughter!!

K:waise papa….Om Uncle kahaan hain?

R:woh….woh beta…tumhein to pata he hai….tumhare uncle business ki wejah se bauhat bzy hain..un ki koi bauhat important meeting thi aaj.

K:magar unhon ne promise kiya thaaaaa!!!

R:haan beta…acha eik kaam karo…U.S.A ja kar apne uncle ko phone par larayee kerna…theek hai?

K:YES!!!acha idea hai!!!

G: ab chalo breakfast ker lo warna tum late ho jao gi…

K:yes mama.

After she is dun with her breakfast….Kripa hugs her parents gud bye & leaves for the airport in her red sports car with her driver.

MEANWHILE……

We see that a very handsome man is in his room & is getting ready.He is still in his towel & is making his hair in front of the mirror & whisteling.Yes it is none other than our ANGAD!!!

A: I better hurry up warna flight to miss ho he jayegi aur saath saath yeh moqa bhi…

A:oh ho!! Meri behan aaj bhi so rahi hai…SHIT!!! Chalo ab mein to chalta hoon…usse phone par baat kar loonga.

He hurriedly gets ready and in a jiffy he is out of his house and in a black sports car with all his luggage.

A: driver chalo!jaldi karo time bilkul bhi nahin hai..HURRY UP!!

And they also head for the airport.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEYY guyz this iz my first fanfic and ive been workin really hard on it.plzz do read it and give me ur viewz and only wid ur encouragement will i go on so plz do telll me if u want me 2 continue.I hope u enjoy it 😛 further parts get even better soo plz do reply
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great part post the next part soon
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nice part
😃 plz cont soon
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good start 👏

plz cont soon 😛
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looks really cool do cont sooon
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awesome part 👏 👏 👏

cont soon 😛 😛
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awsome fic 👏 👏 👏
cont soon 😊 😊 😊
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thanx alot guyz im gonna post the next part rite now and hope u like my fan fic as it gradually goes on!
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Part Two

ON THE WAY 2 THE AIRPORT
Kripa's car stops suddenly in the middle of a deserted road.

K:Uff yeh kiya hua..driver whats the problem?

D:madam dekhta hoon

K:Jaldi karo mere paas waqt bilkul bhi nahin hai!

The driver get out of the car & checks the engine but he cant seem to find the flaw.

D: madam kuch samajh nahin aarahi…pata nahin problem kiya hai.

K: what!?!? Ab mein kiya keroongi?yahaan par to koi auto ya taxi bhi nahin hai.

Right then angad's car slowly passes by.Angad spots Kripa and tells the driver to stop the car.The driver reverses the car near Kripa's. Angad steps out…

A: hello ma'm..may I help u in any way?

Kripa gratefully gets out of her car and shakes hands with angad.

K: well as a matter of fact yes u can.Actually I was heading 2wards the airport bcuz I have to catch a flight and my car stopped dead in the middle of this road.

A: oh wow what a coincidence.I was also heading towards the airport.Come I'll drop u.

K:(with a smile on her face) Thanku soooo much!

A:its my pleasure.

With a little bit of difficulty,they adjust all the luggage in the black sports car & head towards the airport in an awkward silence.

AT THE AIRPORT
They get out of the car and when the luggage is taken out,the driver leaves.

K: thanku so much 4 all ur help.

A: no problem at all.

K: ok then c u around.

A:ya sure.

Then they both head in opposite directions.Angad turns back & sees that Kripa is facing difficulty while putting the luggage on to the carts.He starts walking towards her to help her but b4 he cud reach her, a porter in red clothes approaches her.Angad feels quite disappointed for some reason & then heads towards the area where his luggage is to be screened.

Meanwhile the porter helps Kripa put the luggage onto the cart & leaves after he has been paid for the help.Kripa does not realize that she & Angad r standing in the same line whilst getting there baggage screened.
Later on, after getting their boarding cards checked & stamped,they head for the waiting room to wait for their flight to arrive.They r still unaware of each other's presence. Angad & Kripa head for the same seat but Angad reaches their 1st.Thats wen they realize each others presence.They both smile at each other & Angad moves to the next seat.They were both surprised at first.

A:tum yahaan kiya ker raho ho?

K:Agar mein yahi sawaal tumse poochoon to?

A: to mein kahoonga ke mein tumhara peecha kar raha hoon!

K: (a bit shocked & frightened) k-k-kiya??!!!?

A: (laughing) hey I was just kidding! Tum to sach much darr gayi!!

K:(relieved)nahin..woh to mein bus aise he…

A:whtever..mein to U.S.A ja raha hoon.

K:(surprised) wht!?! Mein bhi..wow! thts gr8.

A:ya wht a coincidence.

They both sit silently for awhile.For some reason they both feel attracted towards
eachother & want to start a conversation but they have no topic.After abt 15 min an announcement is made that their flight is delayed 2 hrs bcuz of the fog.

K:ufff ab mein do ghante kiya keroongi?bhook ke mare waise bhi jaan nikli ja rahi hai.

A:I have been to this airport many times chalo yahaan par eik Chinese restaurant hai.Let's eat.

K:ok!

While they are heading towards the restaurant which is IN the airport…..

K:I don't believe it!

A:kiya hua?

K:hum itni dair se eik saath hain but we still don't know each other's name!!!

A:(lightly hitting his head)oh wow can't believe I didn't think of that.(extending his hand 2wards her..) My name is Angad Khanna.

K:(shaking his hand with a smile on her face) My name is Kripa Sharma.

A:nice to meet u.

K:(laughing) nice 2 meet u 2. Now can we eat sumthin ya fir yahin par khare rehne ka irada hai?

A:cum let's go.

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