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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

First off...I love you Vee!❤️

Second - I love Glitter!!! :D

Okay...now back to the chapter.

I loved it. Again...shades of Khushi Klepto Gupta showed.

The caring, loving daughter...I loved the scene between Shashi and Khushi. It was perfect. And I loved the part about wrinkles! :D

And then the heiress when she's out in front of the public. :P

But why is Shashi...and Payal herself, so bent on concealing her true identity from Khushi?What will happen if Khushi does get to know the truth?

So Shyam's here. He shares a different relation with Khushi. :) And I can't wait to know more about this writer!

"Everybody wanted to know him, and he wanted to know nobody." This for me, is the most intriguing line about Shyam for me.

Oooh...Arnav is going to be 'chivalrous' now..is he?

Now waiting to see what 'sparks' fly out of this ring. :P

Great Chapter Vee!! :D

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Arati

@RTlicious

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#323

That was some update...i never in a million years thought that the woman who saved her was Payal...but what i don't get is why is payal so worried??

Also, i can't wait to see what Arnav would do in the ring...oh and the father daughter scene was very well written...loved the part about wrinkles and botox!

Also, please email me your blog add if you are updating there...i absolutely love this FF!!

my email is : rtlicious@gmail.com

Thanks!

xoxo

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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

why did payal lie about her identity?
shyam,a writer who is a virgin interesting

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ashask07

@ashask07

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Hey i jus found ur ff today and its sorta intriguin, i lik it , u think i can access ur blog?

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niharika111

@niharika111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Hi Vee! I am sorry I have not commented as profusely as I had promised. My Ph.D defense is around the corner and my life is a mess right now (in every possible way). But I do try to catch up with some of mt favorite stories, whenever I can squeeze in some time.

Anyways, great update. Glad Khushi is sound and safe. That accident did scare me and for some reason (I can't remember why), I thought that the woman in question had been Anjali. Or is Payal getting trained to be one of the D-girls and Anjali was in fact with her that night? I think you know what I mean when I say that me head is messed up. I think I have to go back and read the story all over again. But please do send me the blog link...!!!

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

I so did not expect that girl to be Payal but then this is the first thing i have come to realise of this FF , expect the unexpected!! I was thinking her to be Anjali...

Shyam a virgin !!!😲 another jhatka ,,,,

Finally ASR ... chivalary at its best !!! 😆

Cant wait to see what happens in the "ring"!!!

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AnuMouli91

@AnuMouli91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

That was some update! I can't wait to see what Arnav is going to do in the ring! It'll probably be ASR at his best. Payal seems to know Khushi well, and Sashi too; considering she ran away before Sashi knew she saved his daughter.

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arshiyakanishka

@arshiyakanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Loved the father-daughter convo in the beginning...his daughter lay, bandaged and... beautiful. She always managed to do that - look beautiful in the most absurd of situations. You could find her in the middle of the jungle, with tendrils of leaf sticking out of her hair, and she would still look beautiful. Like a nymph of the woods.Don't all fathers think that.😊

The reference that Shashi saw glimpses of happier Khushi makes one wonder that maybe somethng happened in their past which has made her the kind of person she is.

What is Payal so scared of?Of getting reported about the accident or is it something else?

Shyam is Khushi's friend...that too an acclaimed writer and a virgin.So he visited Anjali for gaining experience but at the last moment was too shy to go through it.

So Khushi is testing Arnav about his claim of being chivalrous...what will happen in the ring?I am sure he's not gonna fight...that would be too predictable and mundane for your Arnav...he surely gonna retrieve Khushi's hankerchief without getting dirty.

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#330

wow, amazing update, the father-daughter moment was good, it is hard to portray those, and it was written well. Shyam was an interesting twist, liked it.

Made ASR go into the ring didn't you...