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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Oh that was so sweet, the father-daughter moment between Khushi and Shashi. Shashi saw a glimpse of what Khushi once was- a happy little girl. Wonder what happened to her. I guess that's a story for another update, huh? So it was Payal who saved Khushi. Why is she so tense, and why is Shashi hiding her. Cos I'm not buying this"what woman" act. Ah the gallant Sir Arnav has gone to save the not-so-dainty lady's handkerchief. In medieval times, his reward would have been a dance or a kiss on her fingers. After the reward are we, Sir Raizada? Shyam is her friend? And not just a friend, he's the kind you hardly ever meet, but feel connected to all the time. Waiting for this story to unravel more and more. Please do invite me to your blog. BTW, I can't believe people are yelling plagiarism because you added a swanky car . In that case, half of this world's fiction is plagiarised.You write wonderfully. So please keep writing!

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missmk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Read all parts in one go
They r fab, superb
Plz add in ur pm list

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sakthi25

@sakthi25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Really, I loved the starting with the father-daughter combo...
Payal-Anamika!!!!! Must appreciate kushi's instincts...

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Arani_Kumar

@Arani_Kumar

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

lol @ khushi making arnav fetch her handkerchief...they both know how to push each others buttons...but to see arnav game was dope

love the twists in the story...keep up the good work!

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9424976

@9424976

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

ahah shyam is putting all his angst into writing! And why did Payal lie about her name? Arnav in the ring?!

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pujajk

@pujajk

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

I'm loving the first two chapters! Especially the completely different side of Khushi!

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wildandsweet

@wildandsweet

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Nice one

Loved the interaction btw father and daughter so sweet

Khushi and Shyam good friends interesting even more so that he's a writer and virgin

Wonder if he will go back and visit devyani's girls Anjali again. Will Anjali be his muse??

Looking forward to seeing Arnav in the ring Willa be interesting I'm sure Khushi will get impressed!

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Shyam Jha and a 'virgin' to top it off... poor thing!!!!

Did Payal aka Anamika cause the accident? Or is she the saviour? Somethings fishy there!!!

And Arnav Singh Raizada actually went into the ring to get Khushi's handkerchief to prove that he is chivalrous... ha ha ha. But I have always loved chivalrous men... a rarity these days!!!! (sigh)

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fanfollower

@fanfollower

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Posted: 12 years ago

#349

Love this story. What is the mystery with Paayal? How far is Arnav going with his chivalry? Interesting!Would love to follow it on the blog.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#350

Hmmm...so it was Payal who saved her...her story is not a happy one I think...

Good to know Khushi is alive and well - I couldn't bear to think of that spirit extinguished in anyway. Her and her father have a great relationship I think...poor Shashi, to think your indefatigable daughter is lying pale bedridden in hospital!

Shyam being a virgin makes me giggle...will he meet up with Anjali again?? 😆

And now Arnav steps into the ring, literally. 😆

I love this story - please do PM me when you move it to a blog.