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shivanie

@sweetvanie

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#331

ok wowww so payal lied about her name ???? something is up... Shyam my dear is still a virgin ... how Rolf ... lolz ... now khushi and arnav part is comming up ... this is getting more interesting ... would so love to read more ... plzzz upppdddaaattteee sssooonnn...

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Why did Payal lie about her name??why did she seem so scared??

And Shashi is hiding things too...is Payal Shashi's illegitimate daughter?

And Shyam turned out to be Khushi's friend.who is well accomplished writer and a virgin...Interesting ...

And lastly we have Arnav going to the ring...I can't wait for the next one!

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MinYoung

@MinYoung

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

OMG can't wait to see what will happen in the ring!

Your written style is so good!

Hope to read another chapiter soon :)

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soppy

@soppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#334

you have done such an amazing job at arnav and khushis characters!...they are such strong characters that when ever they meet it is explosive!

i am confused about why payal lied about her name?

and shaym seems like an interesting personality!

please update soon!...and add me to the blog please...soppymalhotra50@gmail.com

Edited by soppy - 12 years ago

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lostintheashes

@lostintheashes

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Hi! I just read all the 6 chapters at once and I must say they are a absolutely intriguing to read. :)
I love the dark grey shades you have painted in your story as well as the tender touch to it :).
And DAMN you slay me with your cliffhangers. Mighty dangerous they are. ;) :D
I am very much interested to read more. :)
I know that you will now be updating this story in your private blog but I would love to read more. :D
My email is uniquepritha@gmail.com
do add me if you like to :)
I would be delighted! :D

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happypeace

@happypeace

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

just came across ur storyand hv read two chap... awese going i must say...

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#337

the father-daughter scene was so cute

chatting like they were catching up over coffee rather than after an accident in a hospital

so anamika is payal who saved khushi..but why is she hiding her identity and is scared i wonder

khushi and shyaams friendship banter is cute and funny

khushi is one smart girl, definitely, and how she was i assume trying to provoke arnav but got shocked that he actually entered the ring, and now that he has entered he has to fight his way out

looking forward to the next update😊