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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey..guys..m back wid d update..n thnx to all...fr u lovely comments..
N here u go..

Part-4


In d Mrng kriyaansh wer peacefully sleeping n Rey's sleep was disturbed by a phone call.

Re: hello

Voi:hello Rey gd Mrng dude..

Re: haa swayam gd Mrng..

Sw: soh raha hai... Okk but happy new year dude..

Re: happy new year swayam.. Hw r u?? Aur Sharon kisse hai

Sw: haa mein tekh hoon aur Sharon bhi tekh hai aur madam soh re hai...

Re: haa yaha kriya bhi soh re hai

Sw: yeh Dono behan hai na... Seriously man... Bahut tang karte hai

Re: haa yaar...

Sw: sry yaar Rey itni subah subah call karna pada

Re: ya it's ok Bol kya baat hai... N starts moving 2wards d balcony..

Sw: Rey woh kya hai ki kal humari company ka ek client New York se aaya tha usse humare signature chahiye surity ke liye toh meine karli bus tere baaki hai

Re: ohh kaun woh mr.sumeet kapoor..
Sw: haa woh he aaya tha.. Rey yeh bahut important papers hai issliye yaar nahi toh Tum logo ko disturb nahi kartha

Re: hey swayam it's okk yaar mein kal raath ka flight book kartha hoon aur padsoh tak pahuch jayege..

Sw: ok yaar chal bye...

Re: ya bye
N cuts d call

Rey starts thinking hw 2 tell kriya tht dey r leaving 2 india 2 morrow n roams here n der in balcony n sits on d couch. Suddenly he feels someone huging him by waist. It's none other thn kriya.

Kr: kya soch rahe ho mr. Singhania

Re: haan haan... Kriya kuch nahi bus essehe

Kr : toh fir itna tensed kyu ho baby..

Re: kuch nahi sweet heart n keeps his head on her lap n hugs her by waist

Kr: Rey aaj kya plan hai

Re: ummm... Mein soch raha hoon ke aaj ke din esse he tumhari bahoo mein rahoon.

Kr: Rey Tum kitne boring ho. Really Tum na humesha kab romance karna ka sochte rahte ho

Re: arey meine kiya bus aapne biwi ke saath zyaada Tym spend karna chahta hoon bus

Kr: par Tum toh humesha romance, pyaar, kaam pe lag jate ho... Thoda adventurous bano Rey... Mr. Chabilal

Re: Accha madam ko ab adventurous bana hai

Kr: mujhe baneki zaroorth nahi hai bus aapko baneki zaroorth hai

Re: oh oh mujhe ab toh adventurous baneke liye training Lene padege

Kr: haa... Kyun ki mein already adventurous hoon.. Aapko yaad hai hum 2 years bck dance fest ke pehle raat ko saadak par lete te

Re: haa mujhe yaad hai... Kitna Maaza aaya tha na

Kr: toh mr. Chabilal thoda adventurous bano na mere liye

Re : hello mein already adventurous hoon ok.. Aaj mei tumhe adventure ke liye leke chalta hoon ok

Kr: haa ok dekh teh hai...

Re: dekh Lena mrs. Singhania.

Kriya was thn so super excited fr d adventure. Soon dey got ready n started fr d destination..

Aftr a long journey, kriyaansh reached a hilly area,mountainous..

Kr: Rey yaha pe kaun sa adventure karenge hum

Re: baby jusz wait n watch.

Kr: Bolo na Rey (excited)

Re: kriya wait rukho tho
A person I mean a guide welcomes dem..
P: welcome sir... Welcome maam..

Kriyaansh: hello

P:welcome to dis beautiful place in Sydney. Sir, ma'am dis place is famous fr mountain treking n mountain climbing

Kr: mountain treking... Wow...

Re: wow... Meine toh yeh except nahi kiya tha... I thought ke woh thoda dar jayege par essa reaction he nahi Milan

Kr: ( in mind) aap soch rahe honge ke mujhe dar nahi lag raha par kahu tho mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai.
Par kriya tu nahi darenge agar tu dar Gaye na tu haar jayenge aur Rey jeet jayega okk... Be brave kriya

Re: baatcutter kya huwa kya soch rahi ho... Dar lag raha hai kya??

Kr: haa dar aur mein impossible ... Mujhe kyun dar lagega...

Re: ohh okk thn let's do it

P: sir dis treking is gonna be fr 15 km up n u need some safety measures to be taken... so please make sure if u r alright n der's no problem thn we can proceed.

Re: kriya is dis okk u can right

Kr: yes it's okk fr me letz go

Re: r u sure kriya..

Kr: yes of course baby...

P: okk thn sir letz go...

Re: yeah

Kriyaansh along wid d person start der treking n it had many ups n downs n was very difficult enough to climb. Dey first went fr about 5 km n stopped fr a while..

P: sir if u go more 3 km der's a waterfall in between so we can stop der n enjoy

Kr: wow waterfall tht so nice... Par 3 Kms Jana hai kya?? Oh no...

Re: kya huwa kriya r u okk it's seems lyk ur nt okk

Kr: haa Rey I'm a bit tired ..

Re: okk thn com I'll take u up der..

Kr: Rey par hw can u... ( cut by Rey)

Re: comm on kriya chalo letz go n
He lifted kriya on his bck n started climbing... N finally aftr 3 Kms dey reached d place whr der was a waterfall... Kriya could hear some sounds of waterfall n got down n started running 2 wards it

View of waterfall


Guyz imagine d beauty of a waterfall..dis way..

It is a perfect scenario..it was soo peaceful n realistic..
the scenario of a waterfall would be the most beautiful scene on this world...its natural beauty and soothing effect is always exceptionally beautiful n vry peaceful experience... The beauty and charisma of this waterfalls is so immense that no one can resist saying 'wow'!
That waterfall looks like the ones in the fairy tales - the water has broken into a mist of tiny droplets and falls down like a soft silk. And to this beautiful scenario was filled with the playful sun's rays and an unbelievable tint of peace and beauty.
The sight is so marvelous and relaxing that even the worst thoughts disappear in no time.
its a place were there's no sorrow, no weariness, no heavy thoughts.

kria slowly stepped towards the waterfalls...she was almost drenced in d waterfall n d thriling n exciting mood burst out wid d water flowing... on her.

rey was juszz admiring kria who was completely enjying every part of it.. his admiring section was distubed by kria..

kr:rey yaha par aaona...its juszz awesome..

re:ya ya im comin... n he headed towards d waterfall...

both started playing with water n slashing on each other..
After sometime..kriya notice a cave near d waterfall..rey too followed her..n both headed towards it..

K:dekho rey It's beautiful naa..

Rey just pulled her towards him..by her waist n started licking her water drops..on her neck jawline..she was just moaning his name in pleasure..he moved his hand under her tee..n started making designs..she closed her eyes..n was feeling d pleasure of his desires..
Kriya realises dat it's nt d correct place..as both wer loosing their senses..

Kr:rey yaha se chalte hai

Re:nt so soon baby(smirked)

Kr:confused

He just took her lips into his..she was shocked by his sudden move..bt soon reciprocated to d kiss..both wer kissin passionately..it was a soft smooth..kriya was d one to break d kiss..

Kr:rey let's go..

Re:(pouted)nah..Abhi nai..

Kr:rey chelo..n she dragged him..frm der..



Phew..hogaya..

Sry..agar acha nai laga tho..

Plz do hit d like tab..n share u reviews..
M expecting 45+likes n nxt update on pg 40

Luv ya..
Deepsha
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing
kriyansh ...hayeee

Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES
UNRES
hey di...dis shalu ur cousin...
do u remember me..???
di i read all d parts n dey wer amazing...
comin to d update...its jusz awesome...
ur such an amazing writer ya...
update nxt part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
the way u described the waterfall part was superb...
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm part...

loved kriyaansh's romance part...

update soon...

thnx 4 the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
aweesome update
loved it very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..loved the waterfall part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
suprbbb...
loved it...
adventrous nd all...
thanxxx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update..
Romance with Adventure! Wow! Luvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago

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