FORBIDDEN LOVE (SS) ch 6 - page 31

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Hi all ... I'm sure by now , everyone knows me and my VERY FAMOUS OS which the moderators "BUTCHERED" ... but that's the past ! I'm sure you all heard the saying : EVERY CLOUD HAS A SILVER LINING!!! Well , the dark cloud that was hovering over my OS has dissappeared giving way to a brand new SS (still entitled : FORBIDDEN LOVE!) Just a small warning ... this is a very sad story, so have those tissues ready😉!!!
PROLOGUE :

What happens when your father FORBIDS u from being with your TRUE-LOVE because she is "classes" below you?

What happens when u are FORBIDDEN from being with your TRUE-LOVE because ... you are married and have a wife?
What happens when u are FORBIDDEN from being with your TRUE-LOVE because her mother blames you for the condition they're in?
What happens when FATE dishes out the cruelist of hands to your TRUE-LOVE ... and SHE FORBIDS u to be with her?
TRUE LOVE IS SUPPOSED TO LOOK BEYOND PHYSICAL BEAUTY!!! Is it just a saying ... OR , is there TRUTH to it???Join Prince UdayVeer Singh ... in changing his fate. Read how he convinces the
that their love isn't a
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Character Sketch + ch1 + ch2 + ch3 ... Scroll down😊
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BASIC CHARACTER SKETCH : * UdayVeer Singh ... Prince of Jaigarh. Only child of Maharaj Giriraj. Extremely sweet & caring person . Is a righteous guy. Loves his college sweetheart to the fullest ... will do anything & everything for her. * Manyata Roy ... sweet , innocent girl , who was intentionally handicapped because she fell in love with the "wrong" guy. * Niyantra Roy ... identical twin sister of Manyata. Has given her life to serving God - she is a nun. Loves her sister dearly ... and will do anything to see her sister happy again. * Komal Roy ... mother of the twins. Loves her girls immensely and will protect them with her life , if she had to. She blames Uday to be the cause of the destruction of her family. * Neetu Prakash ... maasi of the twins. Loves the girls as if they were her own. * Maharaj Giriraj Singh ... King of Jaigarh. Father of Uday. The reason behind the fall of the Roy family. He is the person responsible for "crippling" Manyata. * Princess Jaynandini ... Unfortunate wife of Uday. * Unnati Sharma ... best friend of Manyata. * Shannon Travis ... nurse / care giver for Manyata. * Dr Karan Malhotra ... Manyata's physician. **************************************
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CHAPTER : 1
Uday belonged to a Royal Family , but his father thought it fit to educate his son amongst his own people ... the people , he would 1 day ; rule. Uday attended an "all-boys" school which was neighboured to an "all-girls" school.
It was for many years that Uday was smitten by a beauty from the girls school. He , however was unaware that , that girl too ; shared the same feelings. Shyly, both would steal glances at each other. Soon , their friends found out about this secret love that was germinating between the 2 ; and they intervened.
Both schools combined for the "end of year" dance & both became the other's date ... thanks to their friends intervention. Both Uday & Manyata , were of the quiet type ... & both waited for the other to start a conversation. Needless to say - it became a somewhat silent date.
Manyata & Uday danced together for every song that was played , be it a fast track or a slow, romantic 1. They thoroughly enjoyed each another's company. Who said words needed to be said ... who said confessions needed to be made ... IN THE LANGUAGE OF LOVE ; THE EYES SPEAK VOLUMES!!! And in that night , Manyata & Uday read the love that they had for each other in their eyes.
School closed the next day. 1 Of Manyata's friends delivered a letter to Uday , in which Manyata FINALLY confessed her love for him. "I love you , Uday" , was all it said. By the time Uday could send her a reply ... she already boarded a bus and left.
Unbeknownst to Uday ... his father , the king ; Giriraj , had already "fixed" his son's engagement to his friends daughter - PRINCESS JAYNANDINI. When Uday heard of this , he was most annoyed. "How can u do that , Dad?" , he growled at his father. To which Giriraj , calmly responded : "Why my son ... do u not like Jaynandini? " Uday glared at his father in anger , Giriraj understood. "Is there somebody else Uday?" "There is - her name is Manyata , she is .." , but before Uday could complete his sentence, Giriraj did it for him : "... she is POOR". "DAD!!!" , Uday yelled and caught his father by the collar. Giriraj slowly removed his son's hands, straightened his attire , sat himself down on his throne ... and replied : "Uday - I sent u to THAT school , so that u would appreciate this royal life that u were so lucky to have been born into. I sent u there so that u could differentiate between the LOWER CLASS ... and the UPPER CLASS , to which we belong. I did NOT send u there to befriend boys that would 1 day become your driver and drive u around the city.I did NOT send u there to FALL IN LOVE with a peasant girl ... WHO YOU COULD STILL HAVE TO SATISFY YOUR CARNAL DESIRES WHEN U TIRE OF YOUR WIFE!!!" That was it for Uday - he punched his father hard in the nose.
Uday made several attempts to find Manyata , but it was in vain. It was as if , she just dissappeared from the face of the Earth. He was sure , his father had something to do with it.
Within a few weeks , Uday married Jaynandini. But the marriage was just a namesake. There was NOTHING between the 2 of them. Princess Jay tried every seduction method she knew to entice her husband , but Uday remained cold towards her. He was a broken man ... who lived ; just for the sake of it.
2 Years passed when : "Uday - I want u to take this cheque to the monastery down the road." Uday looked confused , so his father pointed out the large- domed structure at the end of the street. Uday knew of that place , but he never actually went there. Once a year , every year ; Giriraj would make a donation to the local monastery - but he would often do it himself. This year - he asked his son to carry out that task. "Oh ... and take Jay with you", he added.
Uday & Jai met with the matron, MOTHER CHRISTINA. They presented her with the Royal Family's annual donation cheque , which she graciously accepted. "Sister - would u take this please!" , she called out to another nun who was passing by.
The nun took the cheque from the matron's hand & turned to go , when ... Uday got the shock of his life. It was Manyata! HIS MANYATA!!! She even courtsied in front of the Royal couple , which deeply hurt Uday. Uday could not leave there , without talking to Manyata. He sent Jay back to the palace , whilst he waited secretly at the monastery grounds. He had so much to tell Manyata and there was lots , he needed to ask her.
It was nearing evening time ... Manyata was making her rounds with a lantern in her hand - when Uday grabbed her from behind. "AAAH" , she started to scream , but he covered her mouth with his hand. He dragged her to an open field and turned her around to face him.
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CHAPTER : 2
"It's u !", she cried in an ANNOYED tone. "Yes - me - your .." Before he could say anything more ,she cut him off. "Have u no shame in touching a nun in that manner!" Uday was taken aback. "But" , he started to say , but was again interrupted. "Ssshhh! - I don't know who u are but u bringing me out here ... is unacceptable." "U don't know me - IS THAT A JOKE?" "Of-course , I don't know u ... I only saw you giving Mother Christina a cheque of donation - that's as far as I know u!"
"Manyata - stop this!" The nun looked at him in shock. "MANYATA", she repeated. "U think I'm Manyata - I'm not!" Her eyes were starting to fill with tears , which Uday noticed. He moved closer to her, in order to hug her. She backed away. "I said before ... I'M NOT MANYATA! ... I'm NIYANTRA - Manyata's twin". This news shocked Uday. "But Manyata never mentioned a twin ... Please tell me where's Manyata? I've been searching for her for 2 years."
Niyantra stared at him for a while, then answered in a whisper : "Manyata is dead". Uday was stunned momentarily. "Sister ... isn't it a sin for u to lie , please Sister tell me where MY MANYATA IS?" " ... but who are u? " , she asked Uday. "I am Yuvraaj Udayveer ... Manyata & I used to love each other."
"But u are married now - what do u want with my sister?" Uday hesitated in answering her. She understood. "Fine! Pick me up tomorrow morning ... I will take u to her." Uday was most grateful and thanked her for it. The next morning , bright and early ... Uday landed at the monastery to pick up Sister Niyantra. He was so excited to see his beloved.
She directed him to an old, run-down apartment. The place reeked of dampness and mould. He got very distressed knowing that Manyata was living in such conditions. Before Niyantra entered that flat , she told Uday : "Don't expect Manyata to come running into your arms!" He couldn't understand at first , but was soon going to find out.
"Stay here", she told Uday as she entered the flat. Uday stood at the doorway. He could see a girl sitting on the couch but her back was facing him. "Good-morning Manyata". She bent down & hugged Manyata who remained seated. She carressed Manyata's hair. "It's wet Sweety ... do u want me to dry it for u?", asked Niyantra. "Maa will do it", replied Manyata. Uday smiled on hearing her sweet voice.
"BTW - where's Maa?" "Maa and Neetu Maasi are in the bedroom , changing the sheets ... phirse ..", she sobbed. Both sisters hugged each other. "U know it's NOT YOUR FAULT!", explained Niyantra to her sister, but Manyata failed to give a response.
Niyantra gestured for Uday to come inside. "Somebody wanted to see u Manya ... so i brought him along." He was shocked when he saw Manyata. She looked pale , weak and sick ... as if she were terminally ill. Manyata gave him the tiniest of smiles before tears started to drop from her eyes. "U shouldn't be here Uday - U must go now!" , she tried being stern.
Uday slumped down on the floor in front of Manyata. He cried seeing her state . "How did this happen, Manyata? " She couldn't answer him but someone else did : "ASK YOUR FATHER!" Manyata's mother had come into that room. Uday stood up immediately. He extended his had towards the mother and started to introduce himself : "I'm Uda .." "I know who u are!" , she grunted. "U've seen my child ... now u can leave", she pointed towards the door. Uday stood at his spot stubbornly : " ... not until I know what happened to my Manyata!"
Niyantra began telling the story ...
Flashback to 2 years ago ...
The twins were playing chess , while the parents were cheering them. There was a knock on the door. The father opened it. Their guest was the king himself ... Maharaj Giriraj , who just walked into the home before being invited in. He saw the girls there. "Hmmm - twins ,,, so which 1 here is Manyata?'' Manyata stood up and bowed in front of Giriraj. He grabbed her hair in his hand and pulled at it. "AAAHHH", she yelled in pain. Her parents quickly came to her rescue. "So , u are the bitch that's bewitched my son?"
"Maharaj ... what is the meaning of this? " , asked the father. "Well u see, your daughter has done some black-magic on my son. He believes that he is in love with her and will marry her". "No - this is not true", said both parents in unison. "Oh , but is is true ... ask the s**t?" They turned to the child and Manyata gave a slow, single nod. "See - she admits it! I'M NOT GOING TO STAND FOR THAT!!!"
He grabbed Manyata's wrist and started to twist it. Her 3 family members tried in vain to release her. "Please leave her ... we'll make sure she never sees your son again", said the parents. "I'm not taking that risk ... I'll destroy her , before she destroys him!", barked Giriraj. He pulled Manyata out of their house , down the corridor and stood on the topmost step ... before flinging her down the flight of stairs.
Manyata rolled down the many steps before coming to a halt at the bottom. Giriraj crossed over her life-less body and left. Her parents rushed her to hospital ... but the damage had been done. Manyata had injured her spine and had LOST THE ABILITY OF HER LEGS.
The family was shattered and to add to their misfortune ... Giriraj stripped both parents of their jobs. He also ensured that they will never be employed by any reputable company. The shock affected Manyata's father immensely.
Searching continuously for a good job so that he could pay for his daughter's medical expenses , drained him emotionally. Unknowingly 1 day , he stumbled onto the road and was knocked and killed by a truck. Since then , life was never the same for them. They lost their house because they couldn't afford the rent. Manyata's mother became a maid and they moved into this dingy place.
End of flashback ...
Uday cried uncontrollably. The mother was fuming with anger after being reminded of those memories. She held Uday's hand and pushed him towards the door. "The last time , u were in my daughter's life ... she became crippled ; if I allow u back into her life ... she will surely die!"
"I love her ... I WILL TAKE CARE OF HER!!!" , he announced. "Oh really ... do u know what I was just doing?" He shook his head in a NO. "I was changing her sheets ... because Manyata wets it every night!" Fresh tears started to fall from his eyes.
"YES - my answer is still yes ... I will look after her" , he answered with authority. She slammed the door on his face , but it didn't shut and creaked open just a little. He peeped inside . Manyata called out to her mother: "Maa - bathroom". Niyantra, together with the mother lifted Manyata and placed her awkwardly on a torn , rusty wheel-chair ... and wheeled her to the toilet.
Uday's anger was building on his ride back to the palace. On entering, he screamed for his father : "MAHARAJ GIRIRAJ" . Giriraj walked up to his son : "What's happened Uday", he asked innocently. "U are the most despicable person I know ... in fact - I doubt; you're human" , Uday spat.
"How could u do that to her? She was so sweet , so beautiful , so fragile ... AND U BROKE HER ... I WILL KILL U for hurting her!!!" , Uday punched his father in the eye. He grabbed him by the collar : "U better pray , that she will be normal again ... otherwise I promise u - you'd wish u didn't have me , for a son!" He took a couple steps but turned to face his father again. "Despite what you've done to her ... she's still - THE LOVE OF MY LIFE!!! and I'm going to her now - to be with her forever".
He had almost walked out of the palace when Jai stopped him. "I didn't know that u already had somebody in your life. If I knew ... I would've stopped our marriage. However it is too late now! And divorce amongst Royals , is not even an option. U can still marry your beloved ... I permit u to take a second wife !!!" Uday continued staring at Jai, even after she had walked away ... only 1 thing ringing in his mind ... "a second wife".
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Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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CHAPTER : 3
"Jay - have you lost your mind? " , growled Giriraj. "Do you even realise what you said to Uday . I thought you had more sense in you!!! U permitted your husband to go marry another woman ... and not just any other woman ; but a lower-class , handicapped girl! I just can't believe my ears. I truly wonder if you are Brijraj's daughter ... U ARE A VERY STUPID GIRL!!!"
Giriraj continued rambling , whilst holding an ice-pack over his eye. Jay was not perturbed one bit. She had a sly smile adorning her face , which irritated Giriraj even more.
"Dad - why don't u just relax ... let me ; YOUR FAVOURITE DAUGHTER-IN-LAW handle everything" , smirked Jay. Giriraj's anger grew even more. "Let YOU handle everything??? Are u serious ? I've just witnessed what u HANDLED! I'll take it from here , THANK U VERY MUCH !" , yelled Giriraj.
Jay shook her head from side to side. "Dad - do u REALLY think that I'm THAT foolish to give my husbands hand to somebody elses hand? WELL I'M NOT!!!! This is MY way of getting Manyata out of the way ... and getting my husband back where he belongs ... IN MY BED!", she said with gritted teeth.
"Sorry Beta ... I don't follow ", replied a confused Giriraj. Jay started explaining her plan to Giriraj. Both began laughing evilly. "Beta - I don't know why I doubted you ... u truly are Brijraj's daughter" , said a proud Giriraj , while placing his right-hand over her head ; in blessing.
Uday sat in a bar and ordered drink after drink. All the events of that day , rang in his head. Manyata , HIS MANYATA , confined to a life like that ... was completely unacceptable to him. He knew what he wanted to do ... HE KNEW WHAT HE HAD TO DO. He needed to see her again. "Another scotch", he ordered to the bar-tender. He gulped it in 1 go , grabbed his car-keys off the counter ; & wobbled to his car. His eyes were almost closed , due to his drunkeness. Recklessly he drove on the road ... & after many near-accidents , he reached Manyata's apartment.
It was really late at night , and all were fast asleep ; when the knock sounded on the door. Manyata's mother wrapped a gown around herself and went to answer the door. She was not pleased to see Uday there at that part of the time ... and more so , because he was so drunk that he could not stand up straight. "What do you want? " , she asked coldly.
"I ..I ... I wa .. I want ... to .. " , he slurred because of his stupor. "Go home Yuvraaj ... I do NOT have anything that u want!" , she replied and pushed him backwards in order to shut the door. From the other side of the door he screamed : "I WANT TO MARRY MANYATA!" All the lights in the flats started switching on 1 by 1 , when they heard the shouting going on. Some residents even came outside to see , WHO WAS THE IDIOT THAT WAS PROPOSING MARRIAGE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT!
Manyata's mother quickly opened the door and pulled Uday inside before he created more of a scene , leaving the neighbours very dissappointed. "U want to marry my daughter? ", she asked and he nodded. "And , did u forget ; that u are already married?" "She .. she's permitting me .. me to remarry". "Oh , I see ... my daughter will be your second wife", she mocked. "Just like the fairy tale : THE KING & HIS MANY WIVES", she said sarcastically.
"Aunty ... I lo-love M-Manyata . I-Iwill never st..." . Uday passed out on the floor. The lady shook her head in annoyance. "Just what I needed ", she mumbled , "..ANOTHER HEAD-ACHE!" She held his arms and pulled him , leaning him on the sofa. She left him in that position.
She headed back to the room , where she & Manyata slept. Manyata's sleep had been disturbed , because of Uday & her mother's very loud conversation. "What is it , Beta? ", her mother enquired. "Maa - was that Uday?" "Yeah ... your HERO can't even stand on his own 2 legs ... yet he came to marry you", the mother laughed. "I have to admit ... the boy's got guts! I actually never thought we'd see him again after he found out about your condition".
She kissed Manyata on the fore-head , tucked her back in and walked over to the her bed which was also in the same room. That night , the mother slept peacefully ... she used to always worry , that if something happened to her - who would take care of her child? Tonight a ray of hope entered her life ... SO WHAT , IF HE WAS PASSED OUT AND SLEEPING ON THE FLOOR IN THE NEXT ROOM!!!
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Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow

now we get another ss from you
so looking forward for chap 3
update it soon 😃
looking forward for it
so are you planning to make uday divorce his present wife ?
so uday can marry manyata
you better make manyata better soon ok😛
Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!! another SS!! :D

the continuation!

aahh!! i love this SS lyk anything this is sooo touchyyy
Must tell u something.. u r a Brilliant awesome Fantastic Writer.. i knw.. Many must hav complimented thsi and thsi isnt anything new to u but still cant stop my self :P


huhhh J yahn bhi bitch! par acha hi hai.. can Never imagine J as poor ans sweet sweet Princess who Dsnt love Uday :P thats next to IMPOSSIBLE

hate GR!
hmm thsi bitch n GR making evil plans.. let them.. i knw their plans will make them fall in a pit!
awweee!! my prince confessing/proposing late night in Drunk condition 😊[ but still i love this drunk Prince]
i want M to recover soon!!
aahwww Sharmila Ji likes UV.. and dsnt hav any grudges towards my prince! ahah she said Your hero cant stand on 2 les an want to Marry you :P but still Uday 's impression on his MIL is a Drunkard and he wants to marry her daughter and wants to take care of her! cutee! isnt it ?


i knw the Reason y ppl are JEALOUS of u & complain /report ur SS to Mods :P

khair mitti dalo un muon par .. par i wnat Cute n Romantic ManVeer Scenes :D
do cont sooon
muuah!

Edited by thejazzgal - 12 years ago
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res! Will comment after the first chapter.
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WOW another SS by Navina !!!
Awesome
update soon dear
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reserved for comment on chapter 3


edited

Awesome update
uhuh Evil J
not much of a surprise
J toh hai hi kamini
I wonder wats cooking in her mind
but i sincerely hope all her plans fail I HOPE
UV M get married

loved this line

WHO WAS THE IDIOT THAT WAS PROPOSING MARRIAGE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT!


y our very own Yuvraaj Who else
i said our Yuvraaj😳

cont soon dear




Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago

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