FF Discussion: kaamchorni's FF... - Page 2

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Sheesh ji, you have done justice to someone far greater than I. I am truly not worthy of such words.

I believe true greatness lies in how much one inspires another Zarin ji.

I suppose I am nobody to argue with your beliefs, Sheesh ji.

I have fallen in love with your words, not because I believe I deserve them but because of their simple, indisputable beauty. It has been proven again today that you can weave a masterpiece from anything.

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

😳 Now you have me speechless. How did you know?

Rofl. One Brat identifies another you see🤣

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I suppose I am nobody to argue with your beliefs, Sheesh ji.

I have fallen in love with your words, not because I believe I deserve them but because of their simple, indisputable beauty. It has been proven again today that you can weave a masterpiece from anything.

Arre! 😲 , This is your thread Zarin ji. You are not allowed to embarrass your fellow inmates in here.
And you are accusing me of flattery??
Maine apne dil se likha tha 😭

^ Dil se likha? Meine socha Keyboard se likha (Type kiya) hoga😆
Ok I am getting lost no need to glare :P

Originally posted by: TheBrat

^ Dil se likha? Meine socha Keyboard se likha (Type kiya) hoga😆
Ok I am getting lost no need to glare :P

😡 Yaha bhi start teri nautanki? We are supposed to behave in here. See the instructions in the first page.

^ Rules are meant to be broken Jaan-e-mann. Bu the way TM is busy and probably won't be checking 150+ threads she created. How would she know that we are chatting?😆

There are rules? 😆 I don't mind the chatting and I am the guest of honour, right?

Originally posted by: glassdoor

Arre! 😲 , This is your thread Zarin ji. You are not allowed to embarrass your fellow inmates in here.
And you are accusing me of flattery??
Maine apne dil se likha tha 😭

Kshama kijiye, Sheesh Sahiba. Doobara aisa nahin hoga 😉

Originally posted by: palindrome

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would update after Jan 20

Edited:

I was going to edit this "reserved" after Jan 20..and Its Jan 23 today..Since last three days I was putting much strain on my "cerebral hemispheres" to find some "words" to praise Zarin's "Gehrayian"..But still I am not successful in my task and my "cerberal hemispheres" are about to burst now...!!!

Hence all I am going to write below is coming from my "Atrium and Ventricles"..!!!

She is most "Eloquent" writer on IF..

Her characters in Gehraiyaan are "Simply Complicated"..Actually they are complicated but zarin's words makes them "Simple" enough to "Connect" with them as a reader..I did not say "to understand them" because they are little difficult to understand..However this "Difficulty" doesn't avert you from them but makes you crave for understanding them and their problems..!!!

Her "writing style" would involve you in the story to such extent that with each chapter you would wish for "magic wand" to fix everything..

Its easy to connect with "happiness and fun" in a particular story for me but Zarin is the only writer who can make your heart and brain involve in "Problems and complications"!!!

Hats off to you zarin!!!!👏You should write professionally...!!!!

Palin, from now on I suggest you don't strain your cerebral hemispheres since your atrium and ventricles are more than capable of churning out the most wonderful things 😊

I have no way to thank you for your kind words but it would be criminal of me to not thank you for all your contribution to the story. Without you and everyone encouraging me, analysing the chapters and characters, the story would not exist. So thank you and keep reading, analysing and critiquing 'Gehraiyan'.