Fan-Fic: Swept Away / Pg. 1&5 (Completed)

WOW !! MT that was fab !! Amazingly Awesome...!! how do umange to do it hun...!! jst lovee the storyline..and teh way u present it was amazingg...Such ggrr88 talentt...!! i knww using the word Gr8 - wudnt be justicee to ur wrk...! butt it was mind - blowing !! wooww....!!! awww Jai should paid a lil attention towards Bani..adn perhaps this wouldnt have ahppened...!! butt it feelss ggrr8 to read..the protectivee side of Jai ! wooww !! !

aww...hunn i hopee they reach their homee.....safely and securely..adn would jst lovee to read wht happens next !! do upatee soon will be waiting EAGERLI OR SHALL I SAY GREEDILY ! ...thnksx hun ! 👏

Wow MT! I'm blown away...your words are vivid.

BTW you seem to be very familiar with Malaysia and Singapore...have u traveled there? I grew up in KL and
was in Singapore for a few years ...and i found everything described so perfectly...I could see it...

Infact I think I did see the cruise ship parked at the harbour in Singapore...from over head cable car ride to Sentosa island just this summer...

please continue...i'd love to read more.

Gia

Great fanfic!!!
Please continue soon and also contiue your other fanfics!!!!

wow!
that is great MT!
plz contiune soon!

Bani vomiting on JW.. 😆 MT your FF was great...KNPH came to mind.. both castaway on a deserted island with no Jigyaasa around I hope!!!!

I can just see Jai and Bani doing the Titanic thing on the bow with their hands stretched out.. 😆

PS... How do you get this ideas.. We did exactly same itirinary in 1996 from Bombay to Singapore on Rennaisance cruise!!!!

Great.. Can't wait to read what happens next......

wow MT...........Where do you get your ideas from?!

That was an abaloutely awesome part.........can just imagine the workaholic Jai Walia!😉...........and the whole sea episode was very descriptive........I could imagine the whole thing!😛

great job... it reminds me of a story I read at Portkey once. But yours is
shaping up to be quite the romantic adventure. 😳

hopefully you will update soon and not leave us poor saps out to dry to
long.. 😆

Wow!Amazing,it's like I'm reading one of Nora Roberts novel.Plz continue 👏

Originally posted by: giaa

Wow MT! I'm blown away...your words are vivid.

BTW you seem to be very familiar with Malaysia and Singapore...have u traveled there? I grew up in KL and
was in Singapore for a few years ...and i found everything described so perfectly...I could see it...

Infact I think I did see the cruise ship parked at the harbour in Singapore...from over head cable car ride to Sentosa island just this summer...

please continue...i'd love to read more.

Gia

Thank you guys for the comments! Gia, I have never been abroad in my life, hoping to go there very soon, if my Passport comes in time!😃 But I know a lot about these Cruises ect (Lots of Advts in our Daily Newspaper, it describes the whole route) so I just took it from there! Glad you guys liked it!

Yeah, LT....I made Bani vomit on Jai😆 Wait till I make him get food for her, cook for her and then do a Tribal Dance Performance for his Wife by the Fire.....and yeah, also save her from Sharks, Whales Ect!😆

Oh, btw...It is not at all an original idea...I am the next Kaavya Vishwananthan of IF....😉😆

Cheers,

MT