Kriyaansh FF Aisa hai hamara pyaar...last part pge 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys here is the new kriyaansh OS...
Story same as d3...bt starting mein Rey 'll be negtive charactor
Bt ryt now Kriyaansh got Married...
Part 1...
It was their wedding night.shes waiting for him.he enterd their room after closing the door.kriya was really Happy finally they got Married.she thought Rey ne usko maaf kar diya..bt Rey ne kriya se sirf islie shaadi ki taaki usse badla le..coz abhi bhi Rey ko aisa lagta hai ki kriya ne usko sirf use kia..
Rey saw her face.she was blushing...
Rey:so Miss kriya ghai kaise lag rhe hai hamare room.bhahut bada hai naa.i knw tum isse pehle aise kamre toh kya itna bada ghar bhi nahi dekha hoga hai naa...
She was really confused...
Kriya:Rey aap mujse aise baat kyun kar rhe ho...aap toh?
Rey:aur mein kya kahoom ms kriya ghai oh sry Mrs kriya Reyaansh singhania...tuje kya laga ki mein bewkoof hoom aur mein tuje pyaaar karta hoom.agar tumhe aise lagta hai,let me Tell you meine sirf ye shaadi tumse revenge lene kelie kia
kriya:what!!ye aap kya kar rhe ho Rey mujse badla.par aapne toh kal kaha dha ki ab hum ek nayi shuruaat karegea...
Rey:really meine aise kaha...muje toh yaad nhi aa rha hai...waise mrs singhania aaj se infact abhi se Tumahari life bhahut difficulty honewale hai...
Kriya was broken after hearing such unexpected words from Rey..she was Totally broken...
Aur aaj se hum ek hi kamre mein toh rahegea, bt ek saat nahi.Tum jaake sofa mein soo jaana.actually kya hai muje sofe mein sone ki aadat nahi hai..i know ki tumhein koi problem nahi hoga afterall tum ek Middle class family se ho.
Then Rey slept.kriya stood there without any expression.she was really hurt...
Here is the first Part...pls, ,tell me how is it...
Sry no precap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing !! 😊
Edited by enrique305 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi 😊me 2nd to comment heyyy yahooo... by d way nice update👍🏼... rey in -ve shade.. make him realize wat sacrifice kriya has done for him soon.. cant c them suffer... he witout knowin d truth hurtin kriya 😡 poor kriya heart broken😭
n ya pm me ur next update.. don forget..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chaithra tu kriyansh ko khush krna chahti hai ya yeh chahti hai ki hum rey ka murder kare
wat d hell is dis
gosh ab toh esse aage padhna hi padhega
w8in 4 nxt prt
bt plz yr tu late update mt kario
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear..obviously yaar Mein kriyaansh ki diwaani hoom toh kriyaansh ke beech mein pyaar toh zaroor hoga..just wait and watch..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept...
loved d 1st part...
update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hw rude was dat😡plz nxt part updte kardo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really different rey nice oncept and now kria is broken
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Posted: 12 years ago
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different concept...loved the 1st part...pls pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I swear,sometimes I feel lik slappin Reyaansh d hardest.. Itna blood boil hota h na.. Hufff 😡
Wht is wrong wid dis guy??? In seconds,he broke kriya..
Agree kriya hurt him too but dude dat was ur good..
God knows no No,Chaithra knows how much he's gonna regret aftr known d complete truth 😆
Buh its also is interestin to c,Reyaansh in -ve shade coz dis is so not,d Reyaansh Singhania..
He wud neva hurt someone jus fr revenge sake!

So,m lookn frward to dis interestin new concept..
Update soon n do pm me :)

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