Kriyaansh FF Aisa hai hamara pyaar...last part pge 23 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Amazing strt
but feel lyk murdering reyansh...ugh...😡
hw culd he...
updte nxt part soon nd pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
lovely concept
Luv d part
Pls update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Chapter 2
chapter 2...
Guys bhahut jaldi diya naaa...ok seeda update...
Nextday early morning...kriya wokeup...Rey still asleep...she smiled heartly...bt suddenly her smile vanished.she remembered what happented last night.
She walked to her cupboard nd took a beautiful saree then entered wash room...after a cold bath,she entered wearing that beautiful saree...she looks really hawt that too in wet hair.she started combing her hair...bt unfortunately water drops are fell on Rey's face.he got disturbed his beautiful sleep...he opened his eyes nd cheked his face...WATER DROPS...then he looked his room...
There she stood with a beautiful saree with wet hair.he shocked after seeing kriya in this avtaar.
Rey Mindtalk
WTH Rey apne aapko control karo.ye mat bulna ki usne tumhein sirf use kia hai.tumhein chode chali ghayi.bt woh itni hawt lag rahi hai mein kya karoom.
Kriya:Rey...Rey...Rey...
Rey:haa...haan...
Kriya:kya hua aap aise kyun dek rhe ho..
Rey:Tumse matlab..mrs singhania,ye mat bulna ki ye mera room hai.mein jo chahe dek sakti hoom,meri Marzi...samji..
Kriya was hurt...
Rey:ab muje kya dek rhe ho jaawo yaham se.
Kriya:sry Rey...mein jaa rhi hoom
Rey:ruko.jaake mere lie coffee leke aao.aur brkfast ke bhare mein baad mein bhatawooga now leave..
Kriya:teek hai
kriya entred kicthen where her saas making coffee for everyone..
Saas:beta tum itni jaldi uth ghayi..
Kriya:haan maa...mein brkfast bhanathi hoom.
Saas:aaj tum kuch meeta bhanana beta ,aaj tumhari pehla din hai iss ghar mein...
Kriya:teek hai...
Guys here is my chapter 2..acha laga toh pls do cmnt...
Precap:gheer...WTH ye kisne bhanayaaa...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
God chaithra mera rey ka toh pta nhi bt tjhe marne ka mann kr rha hai
kya yr rey romantic hero hai
angry young kyu bna diya usse :-(
bt d/f story n interestin too
w8in 2 read further
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Rey 😡 pehle se hi tumhara khoon karne ka mann kar raha tha...ab toh argh!!!
Chaitra awesome tha continue soon...
Pehle teek hai but after rey ko sach pata chal ne ke baad usse itna tadpao itna tadpao ki he shud suffer...
N thoda jealousy si bi add kardo reyaansh shinganiya ko suit karta hai..
n precap zaroor rey was shoutin at kria ...kria ka kya hoga 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
😛 Awesome 😛
A totally different concept...Negetive rey
But liked it a lot...its too interesting
But poor kriya.felt bad... 😭 ..how could
rey tell all those nonsense to his baatcutter 😡
Continue soon n if possible send me pms also
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
awsum
Poor kriya
Rey is behaving so rudely
Pls updata next part soon & pls pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Amazing one
u noe mujhe abhi rey ko pitne ka man kar raha hai...
baad mein bahhut pactayega rey
chalo koi ni negative character interesting
updte soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Inna chotu update???:( nt fair..
Whts wid Reyaansh.. Dude its always gud to listen to ur heart..
Ye jo ego h na.. Il c baad mei kya hota h..
Seriously,itna tadpana Reyaansh ko na ki maza aa jaye!
I'v one req.. Dun portray kriya such weak coz she is one of d strongest char.!
I wana c d fiery cool way to go kriya...
Update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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[Font]Chapter 3[/FONT][Font]Chapter 3[/FONT]Chapter 3
rey and his dad entered for brkfast.then his dad said
R'dad:wahh...aaj toh ghane ki bhaht achi khusboo aa rhi hai hai naa Rey.
Rey nodded
mom:kushboo kaise nahi aayegi aaj brkfast toh kriya ne bhanayi hai..
Dad:great...kriya beta aawo tum waham kyun ghadi ho.
Kriya:ji dad
mom:beta sabko serve karo
kriya:teek hai maa
Rey:WTH...gheer kisne bhanayi
kriya got scared...
Mom:beta calm down gheer toh kriya ne bhanayi hai.waise tum chilla kyun rhe ho tumhein toh gheer bhahut pasand hai naa.toh aaj kya hua..
Dad:haan Rey what happened?
Rey:woh...woh...muje sirf aapke hath se bhanaya hua gheer pasand hai..
Mom:lekin Reu kriya itni pyaar se bhanayi hai nd Trust me iske gheer ke saamne meri gheer kuch bhi nahi hai...tum thoda toh peeke dekho..
Rey:actually mom.muje aaj ek important meeting hai.ok mom bye..
Dad:meeting..aaj konsa meeting muje toh nahi pata...
Rey:woh...woh mere frnd ke saat dad..bye...
Mom:aare lekin...
Rey:bye mom luv u..
Kriya felt bad.
Mom:woh kya hai naa beta... Rey
kriya:its ok mom...
Kriya entered their bed room and started crying...
Kya Rey muje itna nafrat karte hai,par mein toh ye deserve karti hoom meine uska dil thod diya dha.chahe aap muje kitna bhi gussa karo Rey mein aapse bhahut pyaar karti hoom bhahut pyaar...she wiped her tearers..and stood up nd started arranging the bed,cupboard almost she cleaned her room.
At night...
Rey is back.he was really tired..he went to his room.he was shocked to see his room looked very clean nd beautiful.he smiled.
Rey mindtalk..
OMG ye mera room hai...lagta hai kriya ne kia...that time kriya entred,,
kriya:Rey aap aa ghaye
rey:kyun,tumein acha nahi laga..
Kriya:aap aise kyun bol rhe ho muje kyun bura lagega.
Rey:whatever...
Kriya:aap sone jaa rhe ho,par ghana..
Rey:mrs singhania,muje kab ghana hai kya ghana hai mujje pata hai.so dnt waste your time.
Kriya:lekin ?
Rey:meine kaha naa aur tumein aur koi language mein samjaawoom?
Then he started working on his lappy...
Suddenly mom entered their room.
Mom:beta ab Rey bhi aa ghaya ghana khalo.
Rey:isne abhi tak ghana nahi ghayi?
Mom:nahi beta woh tera intzaar kar rhi dhi.
Mom:aawo kriya ghana ghawo
kriya:actually maa muje bhook nhi hai
mom:aare aise kaise
Rey:mom usko kyun force kar rahi ho agar usko nahi ghana hai toh..
Mom:tum ye kya keh rhe ho Rey kriya ne tumhein itni dher tak intzaar ki aur tum, chalo donom ghana ghawo..
Rey:actually mom mein ghana ghake aaya hoom..so im nt hungry.
Mom:what ye aadat kabse shuru ho ghayi ,tum toh roz ghar ka ghana ghate hona toh aaj kya hua.
Rey:kuch nahi mom,insaan ka charactor har ek situation mein change hote hai.
He looked at kriya...
She looked down.
Kriya:maa aap jaake soo jawoo bhahut raat ho chuki hai..
Mom:lekin beta
kriya:lekin wekin kuch nahi...aap jaake soo jaawo.
Mom:teek hai beta jab bhi man kare gha lena.
Then she kissed her forehead..
Rey was shocked ...WTH saas bahu ke beech itni pyaar...woh bhi meri mom muje gud nght nhi bola usko bola..hhh...
Suddenly lights gone...
Kriya was scared coz usko darkness se bhahut dar lagta hai..
She hugged him tight..he shocked usko pata hai ki kriya ko andhere se dar lagta hai...
Rey mind talk..
Ab mein kya karoom isko hold karoom ya nahi..Rey zyada socho mat remember usne tera saat kya kia.bt feels really good she is just like feather...arghhh stop it Rey..
Suddenly ligts came back.bt kriya koi respond nhi kar rhi hai..
Rey:hello...mrs singhania..i knw ki har ladki ko Reyansh singhania ki bhahom mein rehna pasand hai after all im a prince charming... But tum muje aise hold kare i hate it.chalo...mrs singhania...aare isse kya hua hello madam utho...aare
mrs...kriya...kriya kya hua..now he really tensed...
Kriya tum teek toh ho
but there is no response from her
phewww here is the 3 rd chapter...
Ab lamba lamba cmnts plsss...
Precap:tuje kya zaroort dhi yaham aane ki mrs singhania...

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