Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143 - Page 23

absolutely amazing collaboration.. keep up the good work...

bth d chptrs wer amazin.:)

first d lady Dabangg..:D

den d chilli powder n rakhi part..dt was hilarious..

den d jeep..

den d kiss part ..

ol wer amazin..

bt ol trnd wrong in d 7th chptr,:(

Khushi slappd him n shwed him sum reality..

n Payash stry has emerged..

NK's olso doin d bhangra part,..

wndr wt wud Arnav do nxt..

loved it..:)

thnxx..:)

awesome update!
its taken the story forward, introduced new characters, brought in a bit of confusion (akash, payal and mami)... LOved NK and as for Arnav and Khushi... well a leopard doesnt loose its spots now, does it? It had to happen, Arnav HAD to be horrible to Khushi...its better that its sooner rather than later. Khushi should not forgive Arnav and his behaviour anytime. Well done you!! you've balanced humour, emotion, confusion, new characters...everything so well!

Congrats on the new thread.. :))

Arnav acted like a fool once again..😒

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Unres: 🥳 🥳 Awesome update!!! 😆 First of all Nk's "lota" was 🤣 !! N secondly whats a shrew?? N why was sarita using the word for her ex bf's current gf's ex bf's sis's mil??? 😆 😉 !! Dont tell me khushi tied a rakhi on nk's hand as a friendship band 😆 !! Arnav seems like the sea before the storm...what is going on in his mind?? N what is khushi's batti jalafying idea 😛 !! Hazaar saaal wala guarentee guy has knocked on kkg's door!! Wonder what happens next!!! *eee* cant wait!!! ❤️ Brilliant writing yaar 👏 Edited by swat.g - 11 years ago

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edited* Yes, I feel so proud. I caught up with the whole story last night. Thank you for recommending.

Now update!
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I loved it!

Poor NK. Arnav practically choked him and scared him to death 😆 But NK's 'lota' was very cute!

I liked Arnav and Anjali's conversation.

What can I say about Khushi-Buaji-Payal's conversation!? 😉
I guess Khushi has got her nautanki from Buaji 😆

And I'm eagerly waiting to see what awaits Khushi at 8 in Arnav's office 😉

I like your sense of humour. You have not included the comedy aspect just for the sake of it. You have blended it well with the serious conversations.




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