Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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Nutcase

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Mixed reaction!

i mean I liked the Payal- Akash scene- pouring whole jug of water over her face was hillarious..but what i don't understand how Payal knows Akash before and...whats the story there?? I don't remember reading it b4...

Arnav-Khushi scene was bit confusing...what was the need for fighting? got me confused..but one for sure--- i loved the way how Khushi blasted off Arnav...but didn't understand the need for it..

NK's bhangra was wonderful! :-)

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riddhima11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

absolutely amazing collaboration.. keep up the good work...

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reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

bth d chptrs wer amazin.:)first d lady Dabangg..:Dden d chilli powder n rakhi part..dt was hilarious..den d jeep..den d kiss part ..ol wer amazin..bt ol trnd wrong in d 7th chptr,:(Khushi slappd him n shwed him sum reality..n Payash stry has emerged..NK's olso doin d bhangra part,..wndr wt wud Arnav do nxt..loved it..:)thnxx..:)

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Venicestar88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

awesome update!
its taken the story forward, introduced new characters, brought in a bit of confusion (akash, payal and mami)... LOved NK and as for Arnav and Khushi... well a leopard doesnt loose its spots now, does it? It had to happen, Arnav HAD to be horrible to Khushi...its better that its sooner rather than later. Khushi should not forgive Arnav and his behaviour anytime. Well done you!! you've balanced humour, emotion, confusion, new characters...everything so well!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Congrats on the new thread.. :))

Arnav acted like a fool once again..😒

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InvisibleSmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

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swat.g

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Res:
Unres: 🥳 🥳 Awesome update!!! 😆 First of all Nk's "lota" was 🤣 !! N secondly whats a shrew?? N why was sarita using the word for her ex bf's current gf's ex bf's sis's mil??? 😆 😉 !! Dont tell me khushi tied a rakhi on nk's hand as a friendship band 😆 !! Arnav seems like the sea before the storm...what is going on in his mind?? N what is khushi's batti jalafying idea 😛 !! Hazaar saaal wala guarentee guy has knocked on kkg's door!! Wonder what happens next!!! *eee* cant wait!!! ❤️ Brilliant writing yaar 👏

Edited by swat.g - 12 years ago