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First of all.. I am super excited.. Some writers I don't know about but the ones I know are all in my Fav list... yooo hooo... and rom com that is gonna be awesome.. I know all these writers have a great way on humour.. whoever thought of it.. i am loving the idea.. the best ones together :)
Sorry guys for the late review..
Chapter 1
Maxine.. that is something girl.. gottas on bikini.. Khushi designing Bikini and Payal's explanation on why it is beneficial economically to design bikinis.. hahaha.. you have done it..
Arnav's entry with that line.. the great ASR speaking of bhagwan.. it is hilarious and even Aman's nervousness.. i loved everything about the chapter.. now i am moving to the next one..
Chapter 2
"Her family would testify in court against that claim if needed.".. that reminded me of sheldon (big bang theory) stating that he is not insane; his mother got him tested ;)
"A giggle burst forth as she imagined small antennae on his head to go with the device with a blinking blue light."
I couldn't stop myself either from laughing imagining Khushi imagine Arnav like that.. Meera you surprised me girl.. you are best with emotions and you are awesome with humour..
Chapter 3
"You mind your… your body language!" Saying that she gestured with her eyes to him and her and the way he was holding her.
what are you all up to.. this stuff is hilarious...
"This slip of a girl had, in less than an hour, shot holes the size of cannon balls in his ego without blinking an eye."
good thing i am not in public place... there is no way I can control my laughter..
it's a date.. rasgulla... awesome update
Chapter 4
"Going out? For dinner? Why? Is the food at home not up to your standards?"
BlueMystique.. did you say rom com is your genre.. it was awesome.. with Aman flirting.. Arnav khushi fighting.. and then falling and their lips touching each other.. awesome..
Buaji is buaji..
Chapter 5
"Laad Governor, have you ever had wine before ?"
her question.. damn.. i can't sit straight.. she thought he was drunk..or couldn't handle wine after she his behaviour..
"Question?Are you crazy?Do you think your question has punctured my tyre?"
when she meekly placed his hand on the shoulder.. i thought it was to stop him from getting into a fight as the guys were not worth but then she goes ahead and says.. chulbul pande ki kasam i will handle them.. that did..
Chapter 6
I don't about khushi but you guys surprised me with this story. it is so much fun.. with khushi handling the guys and driving the jeep.. to Nanheji? it so good to see you! ;)
awesome update.. and i am loving this story.. there is no point where my face is devoid of smile.. i am continuously either laughing or smiling..
Chapter 7
This is the first I am reading your work and I really enjoyed... NK's dialogues were hilarious and so was our maamiji's.. what is with Payal.. if this was her official meeting then did he like him seeing his pic in magazines?
Sorry guys for the late review..
Chapter 1
Maxine.. that is something girl.. gottas on bikini.. Khushi designing Bikini and Payal's explanation on why it is beneficial economically to design bikinis.. hahaha.. you have done it..
Arnav's entry with that line.. the great ASR speaking of bhagwan.. it is hilarious and even Aman's nervousness.. i loved everything about the chapter.. now i am moving to the next one..
Chapter 2
"Her family would testify in court against that claim if needed.".. that reminded me of sheldon (big bang theory) stating that he is not insane; his mother got him tested ;)
"A giggle burst forth as she imagined small antennae on his head to go with the device with a blinking blue light."
I couldn't stop myself either from laughing imagining Khushi imagine Arnav like that.. Meera you surprised me girl.. you are best with emotions and you are awesome with humour..
Chapter 3
"You mind your… your body language!" Saying that she gestured with her eyes to him and her and the way he was holding her.
what are you all up to.. this stuff is hilarious...
"This slip of a girl had, in less than an hour, shot holes the size of cannon balls in his ego without blinking an eye."
good thing i am not in public place... there is no way I can control my laughter..
it's a date.. rasgulla... awesome update
Chapter 4
"Going out? For dinner? Why? Is the food at home not up to your standards?"
BlueMystique.. did you say rom com is your genre.. it was awesome.. with Aman flirting.. Arnav khushi fighting.. and then falling and their lips touching each other.. awesome..
Buaji is buaji..
Chapter 5
"Laad Governor, have you ever had wine before ?"
her question.. damn.. i can't sit straight.. she thought he was drunk..or couldn't handle wine after she his behaviour..
"Question?Are you crazy?Do you think your question has punctured my tyre?"
when she meekly placed his hand on the shoulder.. i thought it was to stop him from getting into a fight as the guys were not worth but then she goes ahead and says.. chulbul pande ki kasam i will handle them.. that did..
Chapter 6
I don't about khushi but you guys surprised me with this story. it is so much fun.. with khushi handling the guys and driving the jeep.. to Nanheji? it so good to see you! ;)
awesome update.. and i am loving this story.. there is no point where my face is devoid of smile.. i am continuously either laughing or smiling..
Chapter 7
This is the first I am reading your work and I really enjoyed... NK's dialogues were hilarious and so was our maamiji's.. what is with Payal.. if this was her official meeting then did he like him seeing his pic in magazines?
Anupamaa
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