Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143 - Page 23

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I loved it!

Poor NK. Arnav practically choked him and scared him to death 😆 But NK's 'lota' was very cute!

I liked Arnav and Anjali's conversation.

What can I say about Khushi-Buaji-Payal's conversation!? 😉
I guess Khushi has got her nautanki from Buaji 😆

And I'm eagerly waiting to see what awaits Khushi at 8 in Arnav's office 😉

I like your sense of humour. You have not included the comedy aspect just for the sake of it. You have blended it well with the serious conversations.

Loved the part where Payal fainted and Aakash poured a jug full of water on her face. Mami had to find her on his bed. Very funny part.

that was freaking hilarious
can't wait to see what happens next
you guys are so awesome

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Edit: firstly I am extremely sorry that I'm this late... I wanted to read and unres soon, but my days have been pretty busy.
Okay now coming to the chapter...I must say that you have handled it extremely well. I mean the end of the last update scared me a bit. If i had been in your spot, I would have had a writers block I'm sure. But u handled it to perfection.
Also I really loved the 'hazar saal part'...kind of cute, must agree. Also, wow, that jalebi thing wasn't expected, but I was pleasantly surprised :-)
Now...I'm lookin forward to the next part.

You did a wonderful job :-)

Gah, I'm so late!!! :(

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Ok finally. Shiz, I've already expressed my love towards this chapter, but I'll say it again!
You managed to put a bit of everything in your update, it flowed so well!

I honestly love reading about the angst between Arnav and Khushi, his feelings were described so well. You could almost feel his self control slipping during the small conversation they had in front of the family before she left. And Khushi will be herself! Even during her conversation with Payal, I love her jolliness and self confidence when it comes to Arnav! Oh Payal, the poor girl can't get a break! Lets hope things get better for her and Akaash :)
And NK, I love him! He's just like he was in she show - all smiles and the happy-go-lucky type!
And lotas 😆 that was hilarious. Oh the end ahhh, what now?! A possible office track? I'm loving it, you rocked your part <3
I can't wait to see where Zehra takes this, I know it will be amazing!

Originally posted by: -Emma.K-

Gah, I'm so late!!! :(

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Updated comment on page 35 😊

Thank you for the PM...i m really missing IPKKND...thank you for your good work...we are back to the tom and jerry game