Ek Anjana Sa Rhista _Last Part pg178 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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whoa.... intro is very good ...please continue...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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please continue soon...its really good and different...cant wait to see waht happens when bani comes back... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳 🤗 oh thanks guys....great now i know that u guys will enjoy it i will write....gosh my head is just flowing and my hands are not keeping up with the pace...
honestly yaari should quit working and become a full time writer 😉

will update later this afternoon or early tomrw...promise 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I loved it.
Atleast Bani won't be considered middle class and be toseed around by every one.
Whats Jigs's probblem with 3 teenagers?
Great ff.
Yuks
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Posted: 18 years ago
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🤗 awwwwwwwwwwwww
i luved it hun
pls cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
i love it
great FF
nice idea or concept

good job
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was great.superb intro.really good.cant wait to read more. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hello lovely people...i just logged in to see how many responded and so many...thank you thank you 🤗 i love you guys too

okay here goes Part 1

enjoy 😉

Part 1

Life for Bani and her sisters was good in Chandigar…Masi toh jaise doosri maa hi thi ….bus kami this toh mummy aur papa ki joh hamesha yaad ati thi Bani ko….Pia aur Rano ke liye Bani thi toh unko kuch janata nahi tha…..

The girls joined the private school in Chandigar and started their new life. Rano ek book worm …Pia ghar ki trouble maker aur problem aur Bani very reserved around strangers…magar akele meh saab ki jaan thi…kaun chandigar meh usko nahi janta tha….saabhi ki dil meh thi Bani….teeno bhen bilkul alag magar bhouth pyar tha beech me….

Masi har saal do ya teen mahino ke liye Mumbai jati thi Jai ke saath waqt guzarne….saath saath Rano ko lejati thi kiu ki Rano was the youngst…

Jai had insisted that she move to Mumbai but Masi kept delaying it….

Jai Rano ko bhouth hi pasand karta tha…not shy to speak her mind and always talking about something smart…she was so smart that she could straighten a university graduate with her knowledge…jai ke liye toh who uski best friend/sister jaisi thi…..while in Mumbai Jai was exactly what Bani was to her in Chandigar…Jai would know all the happenings in the girls lives as Rano would keep him updated….

Bani ko Jai Walia se badi dar lagti thi…jab bhi woh Chandigar ate the she would never come infront of him…she eat in her room and never cross his path..patani kiu darti thi…..

Aur Jai ko Pia bilkul pasand nahi thi….uske liye uska status aur khoobsurati was everything…she was always insisting on getting what she wanted and the only person who could control her was BAni….woh Bani ki baath kabhi nahi tal ti thi

It was some 3 years later that Bani's 18th birthday came up and Masi ne socha ke chandigar meh badi se celebrate kare……Jai was to be in town that weekend too and Friday was holi…followed by Bani's birthday on Saturday night.

Jai's came up to the Haweli…. Sabhi aur rangoli aur rang se ghar saja tha……

Jai to the caretaker: yeh rangoli kisne ki hai sabhi jaga…

CT: jee Bani bitya ne…..aaj Holy hai na

Jai: aur saab hai kaha …

CT: mandir gaye hai pooja ke liye phir sabhi log yaha arahe hai holy khelne….

Jai: aur Masi

CT: jee Bani aur Rano Bitya ke saath mandir se anewali hoge….

Jai: aur woh doosri bhen

CT: jee apne college ke trip par Goa gai hai…agle hafte ayegi…

Jai: theek hai…saman rhakwado aur mere liye chaye…

CT: jee huzoor

Jai in that 3 years had brought Walia Industries top in the market and the single running monopoly for the entire hotel industry…no one came close to it…he was known for his business brains and hardwork…no employee of his was spared until the required task was achieved…at the prime age of 28 he had achieved a lot that man don't in their entire life…..

Bani and Rano laughingly came into the Haweli….

Jai on top in his corner was siping tea when he heard laughter…one he recognized was Rano and the other he never heard……as he approached the stairs sipping his tea..he looked down to find a girl ….no not the same fragile girl but a beautiful grown up girl with long black hair…beautiful body and that smile…that would bright up ones day……

Bani Dixit had turned out to be a stunning beautiful young woman…….her hair all open clipped by slides on the sides of her head…. …..small black tikka on her forehead…. bali in the ears…..churidar kameez light pink….only a faith colour of light pink on her lips…..smiling at Rano and with thali in her hand……running both came in gasping for breath

Masi: yeh ladiyon mujeh maar dalege…meh phele jaise jawaan nahi rahi samjhi

A giggling Rano with her glasses wearing skirt and top….laughing and BAni holding her…..

Bani: Masi aap bhi na…agar aaj bhi taiyar hokar mhephil meh jaye toh khalas….hooo khalas…..doing the actions of the song...cracking Masi up who was lost for breath

The caretaker came to inform them of Jai's arrival…

Jai observing all this with a hint of smile playing on his lips….

CT: Sahiba (to masi) woh

Bani: shh uncle…phele Prasad…giving the Prasad….phir ….holy hai…spraying it on the caretaker ….and than Rano...the remaining on her hand she threw all on RAno making her red and purple......Rano chasing bani as she ran upstairs towards her room…..Rano with colour on her hands….BAni places the thali next to the stairs table and kept running…..her hands all coloured …..Rano chasing her with some more…

Rano: Didi ki bachi ruko na

A laughing Masi as the caretaker told him that Jai had arrived….

Bani running looking at Rano teasing her bumped into something really hard….her hands on something hard……..looking infront she saw a huge frame infront of her looking down at her….her smile gayab….his teacup on the floor not broken but empty with the tea on the rug and the color on her hands on his kurta infront……Bani bumped onto the great Jai Walia

Jai just looked at her….from so near Bani even looked more innocent and beautiful….her lips fuller……she hand completely changed…a tad bit irritated yet curious ….

Bani: looking down hands down…mujhe marf kardijiye…woh meh..im so sorry…playing with her dupatta.....almost on the verge of crying……im so sorry….

Jai: looking at her…ghar meh holy khelte hai kya??? Not really mad but his voice was so stern that she just ran away from there….

Rano watching all this and than ;hey buddy what are you doing here…???

Jai smiling : hey little champ holy ghar meh khelte hai kya??

RAno; looks like it…..indicating with her head to his clothes..and than spraying the one in her hand….Holy Mubarak and running away….leaving Jai standing there as Masi greets him…

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hope u guys liked it
cheers
R 😳 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG. i have THE biggest smile on my face.. i luved it luved it luved it. i luv how u made rano/jai best buddies - that's sooo cute.. and d fact that he HATES pia - that's more betta.. and d fact that he sees bani fo d first time.. admires her beauty.. luvedddddddddddddd the way they bump into each other - its just PERFECT!!!!!!!!.. that was mindddddddddblowing.. update part 2 soon!!!!!!.. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow hun!! AMAZING FF 👏 👏 👏 i love it 😃

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