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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 24

(past in RED)

Geet : Maan..let me sleep na.. please…


Geet cuddled more into his arms. It was the most peaceful sleep she ever had after 7 long years. Maan lovingly took her into him and wished tat he could just keep her like this but he could not. His fingers softly traced her facial curves making her smile with his touch. He waited for her to open her eyes but she just smiled moving closer hugging him like a small baby.


Geet: sone do na.. please..


Maan: Mishti... please na.. you can sleep later.. open your eyes Mishti..

Geet: Na.. Mishti..wannna sleep more..


Geet pulled him more and slept keeping her head on his chest making Maan smile wrapping his hand around her and the moment his hand reached her waist he smirked and said.


Maan: Mishti.. if you don't get up right now.. than don't blame me for wat I will do..


Geet: hmmm..


Maan smiled and slowly started tickling her near her waist. It was so soft tat Geet smiled snuggling more closer but the moment his fingers increased the pressure she started to wriggle and shove off his hand. Maan smiled seeing her and held her hands tight in his making her lay down while he on top of her and started to tickle her making her laugh and scream with it.


Maan: I told you.. either you open your eyes or..


Geet: Ma.. Maa. Maann.. leave.. pl.. eas…eee… le..ave.. na…


Maan: na.. I had given you enough time but now you will pay….


Geet: pl….ea…… Ma.Maaannn..


Maan kept troubling her and the moment he saw tears in her eyes he stilled the way he was just staring at her. His eyes staring at those tears while his heart accusing him again.


Maan: M sorry.. Mishti…


The moment the pain in his voice reached her ears, her eyes shot open to see him in tears just looking at her.


Maan: Mishti…


His fingers now reached her tears to wipe them off but his tears wetted his own face making her to cry more.


Geet: Maan..m not crying Maan… its not you.. please..


Maan: Na.. I m the cause for them.. i.. i.. these tears..


Geet instantly pulled him on her body and hugged him tight while his hands held her tight.


Geet: You remember.. I always get tears when you tickle me Maan.. you know na.. m ticklish.. than why sorry..


Maan: but m the cause na.. I always bring tears in your eyes.. i..i..


Geet: sshhh Maan.. you promised me tat we wont cry.. and now if you do than I swear Maan..i will turn back into Geet Handa back…


Maan raised his head from her nape looking deep into her eyes that only had love for him. He could not understand tat how could he fail to read them but now he knew tat she was well versed in hiding his Mishti behind this Geet Handa.


Geet: and believe me Geet Handa is very bad for Maan Singh Khuranna.


Maan smiled placing a soft peck on her forehead followed with eyes making Geet to smile and remembering their sweet past.


Geet: Maan.. can you do it again.. please..


Maan: Tum bilkul nahi badali na Mishti…..


Geet: Kaise badal sakthi hoon Maan.. this is my right and I always need more of it to get up from bed.. You know na.. unless and until you would kiss me like this Mishti.. would never get up..


Maan smiled: Haan.. now up… we need to go..


Geet: where..


Maan: the place tat always missed us Mishti….


Geet pushed Maan as soon as she heard it sitting on his stomach kissing all over his face making him smile.


Geet: I Love you.. I love … love.. love Youuu Maannn…



Maan felt a soft hand on his cheeks bringing him back from his sweet past. He touched and kissed those small fingers making Mehar to giggle with his kiss while his eyes looked at his Mishti who was sitting next to him in the car playing with his mobile.


Mehar: Dadda.. wherl ..arel we gboing…


Maan: A place tat always missed Dadda – Mumma and now it will be your place too.. Her Mehar's place..


Mehar looked confused not understanding his words. Maan looked at her from the mirror and said.


Maan: Mumma – Dadda.. has a place.. a place tat Mumma loves very much..


Mehar: Dadda…


Maan: Haan .. its Mumma – Dadda's place Mehar.. the Temple which is longing for us.. the eyes which are waiting from long to see their Maan – Geet together. To see Their Maan getting their Mishti to them.


Mehar: Dadda… arel we.. gboing to Temble..


Maan: hmm.. but for Mumma – Dadda.. its home Mehar.. a home where their Krishna – Radha is waiting to see their Maan and Geet together again.


Mehar: Krishal… Radhla.. who arel they Dadda..


Maan: you want to see who they are…


Mehar: hmmm..


Maan smiled hearing her as she was just like him while saying tat " hmmm." His eyes reached his Mishti to see if she was hearing them but she was all-busy with his mobile. His heart had tat unknown happiness as today he would just not take his Mishti but her Mehar to the most sacred place where they always felt safe. Today her Mehar would get the blessing from them who they admired all the years. He smiled sadly knowing tat Geet was still not back to him even if she was with him. He drew the car in his own thoughts but his heart very well knew where to stop and the car stopped exactly at the place where it had to be. He was shocked to see tat his legs and hands had stopped the car in front of them who were waiting to see their Maan and Geet. He slowly brought Mehar out carrying her in his arms, opened the door for Geet and moved holding her tight by her waist.


The moment Geet's feet touched the first step of the Temple her heart beats fastened to an unknown speed while she held Maan's hand tight. Her eyes looked up to see and a faint memory flashed in front of her. Maan looked at her face and the moment he saw her eyes he knew tat his decision of getting her here was right. He climbed the steps holding his two angels close to his heart and the his eyes shone while his ears happy hearing the bells ringing as if they were welcoming them back after 3 long years. Geet was all lost looking straight and the moment her eyes fell on the idols she jerked Maan's hand off from her body and walked straight looking at them. Her eyes did not leave a second from staring the two idols which were pulling her towards them. Maan looked at her and than at the idols knowing tat they had done their part of pulling her towards them. Mehar looked at Maan and asked fearing for her Mumma.


Mehar: Dadda.. Mumma.. Mumma.. hurt na..


Maan: Na.. Mehar.. Mumma.. is very much safe here… you see them Radha – Krsihna… they know tat their Mishti is back.. they know.. tat their Maan brought her back to them.. and now.. they know tat they should give their Mishti.. back to her Maan and her Mehar..


Mehar was just looking at her Dadda who was speaking some words which went above her head but yet se smiled hearing them. Maan took Mehar near the idols where Geet was all standing and watching them. The panditji who had a big smile seeing them could not believe tat he actually saw them. His eyes glistered with tears while Maan bent down taking his blessing letting even Mehar do the same.


Panditji: Uski.. parchayee hain.. just like her..


Maan smiled hearing it but his eyes showed tat pain which did not go unnoticed by the pandit ji..


Panditji: Yeh hain.. jo.. tumari hain.. she will fight against all odds in your destiny.. she is the one who is sent by them for their Maan – Geet. Uski ek hasi.. tumari taqat hain.. she will protect you too.. Bringing her back... uski.. zindagi.. tumari zindagi.. ki roshini hain yeh..


Pandit ji smiled while blessing the little one who just kept looking at him with her doe eyes.


Pandit ji: Yahi aapki taqat hain Maan.. aap dono ki taqat hain.. she will fight to get back you both. Uski ek chuan aapki saashe wapas la degi.. woh saashe jo aapki saath chod degi.. she will fight with him to get you both back..


Though Maan heard, but his words did not reach his ears as he was busying staring at Geet who was touching the idols with her soft fingers and smiling at them. The wind played its magic ringing the bells from there giving them the most beautiful welcome. Geet turned and saw Maan looking at him. she just pulled him with excitement and Maan smiled seeing and remembering the past as Geet used to just pull him like this and for a moment he felt tat she was back.. his Mishti was back but next moment he was brought back to reality with her words.


Geet: Angel.. You know.. I know them.. I saw.. them..


Maan: I know Mishti.. I know tat you know them..


Geet: aaggghhh.. no you.. don't.. how.. angel.. know.. Mishti.. never said na.. you know.. I saw them.. haan.. I saw them when I sleep..I remember.. I saw them.. when I sleep.


Maan could not believe tat she had seen them in her dreams. He looked at the idols and smiled seeing Geet now moving all around them with Mehar in her arms. She held Mehar so tight and was speaking something to her while Pandit ji came closer handing him the Prasad and saying.


Pandit ji: tumari zindagi.. jald tumare paas hogi Maan. shayad uski shuruvat ho juki hain… kuch aisa hoga jo… sabse parye hain.. kuch aisa hoga jo.. yeh masoom.. ladh jayengi.. aap dono ke liye…. Uski neev shuru ho juki hain Maan.. shuru ho juki hain ... aap dono ki kismat badal degi yeh.. badal degi ush uparwale ne jo leekha hain.. badal degi..badal degi aapki… buri kismet ko..


Maan just looked at the pandit ji but his stare was broken when he heard a sharp cry from Mehar. He turned to see but there was no Geet and only Mehar crying calling out for Geet and looking straight. Maan looked at Geet who was running down the steps and without wasting time he ran to hold his life.. his Mishti and the moment he held her he could feel the violent behavior in her body. She pushed and kicked him. she hit him digging her nails into his skin while her lips kept saying.


Geet: leave me.. leave me.. Maan.. Maan…. Maan.. vicky… Vicky… Vicky.. Maan.. my Maan… Maan..


Maan just kept looking at her while his hold tightened. His ears were shocked to hear her taking his name and calling out for Vicky. He smiled hearing it but was shocked as he could sense tat this was not an attack of her madness but something else. He knew tat she never took his name when she had a violent attack as if she hears his name she would turn more violent but here she herself was taking his name. He just kept thinking making his hold a bit loose and the moment Geet felt she pushed him running calling out for Maan and Vicky.


Geet: Vicky… my Maan.. Vicky… Vicky… I need to see him.. Vicky…. I need to see Maan.. he is not safe Vicky… Vicky…. Vicky…. Vicky…..Maannn..


Maan ran only to see Geet lying down on the ground. He ran closer and saw her all unconscious but still her lips moved calling out for Vicky and him. He scooped her into his arms, carried her to the car and came back to take Mehar with him. Mehar was all scared and shivering seeing her mother like tat. She hugged Maan and cried wetting his shirt with her tears.


Maan: sshhh.. Mumma.. is fine.. Mumma is fine Mehar…


Mehar: Mu.. Mumma..Dadda.. Mumma..


Maan: Sshhh.. Mumma just sick Mehar.. see she is all sleeping na..


Maan made Mehar to see Geet who was all-sleeping on the seat. She touched Geet and cried while Maan made her to sit on his lap and drive the car towards KM.


Precap: Maan making love to Geet….

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, emotional part
loved it
meher is really angel for maaneet and came to save them and their love
continue soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update

It was emotional n painful for Maan to see Geet like this

Mehar scared wid her Mumma behaviour

Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
maan can't bear geet tears even he did it unintentionally
geet recognizing few things in temple
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome di cant say anything right now just waiting for the precap now
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ur all works r wonderful pls never stop writting n continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope jaldhi geet thik ho jaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update i hope geet will be fine
precap seems past😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update ...I hope geet will be fine ..Is precap past
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb!!!!!!!
Loved it a lotzzz :):)
Emotional part ...
waiting for the next update :)

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