Originally posted by: jumrulzz
Ok firstly Beautifully Penned down, and the emotions were Really amazing! i love to read ur works because it never consisted much of any misunderstanding, and i wish you continued, but it was a beautiful ending, sorry i didnt comment earlier, was a Bit busy with some works, but i had read and kept it before! i just forgot to comment *RES* or reply, but amazing Update! Loved it! first from the *"Kiss"* to the End of rey wonders! and vicky, nilesh, amar and bharat scene.. The confession.. the Argument.. The grieves sharon struggles to prove swayam her love.. Everything was simply *Mind-blowing* !! i love to read your works mainly because it never consisted any Misunderstanding of each other (Unlike the cv's) and it always Consisted of Sizzling Romance.. and beauty! your usage of all Vocabulary was amazing, i could feel each and every Emotions on the way you penned them! i Seriously wish you continued, but It was an Amazing And a "Never Forgetting" Ending! really enjoyed reading it! the Whole while, seriously it was amazing to note swayam to step out of her life if she is uncomfortable with him having on her around, and it was Really unexpected that swayam would even *NOT TALK TO HER* if she is uncomfortable.. seriously! u have Portrayed swayam in a AMAZING manner from an Insane psycho Majnu to an Intense wala Bhai! and now.. to a Person who care*D* a Less bout sharon.. and even was ready to NOT TALK TO HER A SECOND ALSO ! but deep down.. He is all only hers! but i seriously enjoyed both of your works!! dis SS And "lost at sea to rekindle love"! I never was so Calm and quite and smiling all while on reading an SS (especially based on swaRon i mean i only read SwaRon ff's / ss's /os's !! nothing other den SwaRon) i usually get Tempted on reading any SS's or FF's because they always consist of TWISTS and TURNS! but in urs i wasnt so tensed! infact i was a LOT Happier reading ur wrks in ur style.. and that too i was super - duper Excited to see a New SS on a very "Enraging" scene of swaRon episodes Till date! and Was excited to read more! but it ended so quick !! but a Serious Beautiful ending! I (STILL) wish u continued!!
sorry for the Inconvenience !!
im really sorry for a big Comment! but its something that i have been thinking of to tell to u.. :)
and Pleasee pleaasee Make anothr SS or FF! i really wanna Read ur Stories !! It calms me down for the day after watching d episode or reading any TWISTS AND TURNS of other ppl's Updates, Please pleasee.. start a new SS! i will be waiting for it! As i love reading ur SS's ! i really really am Desperate to read more of ur Works! :) Please pm me Once U start one..
and yea im ALSO a huge FAN of ur Writing!
Please Start a New SS, i will be waiting, and Im super sorry for the Long comment ! :)
- jum đ
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