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Posted: 12 years ago
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superhit one😊😊luved d way u showed sharon plannin a surprise for swayam...d way she ordered him 2 do was soo cute😊😊d way sharon showed her concern- providin goodies, cold coffee...awww...plzzz update soon👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all I must say the very main concept of this OS is awesome. Awesoem in the sense as I think this is the first time I will be reading in which Swayam and Sharon who are just in a relationship are going for a vacation exclusively without anyone else along with the. So there is lot of scope and angle for the story. I am waiting to see what you have planned and how the story will proceed and most of all wil Sharon finally say I love you to Swayam. First part ws awesomely written and I really loved the Sharon planned this excursion for Swayam. Will be waiting for the update do PM me when u update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing part


loved it so very much 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am really sorry 4 being so late.lovely update.thanks 4 pm n update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you sooo much guys for soo much love 😊 😊

i will reply to each of you in some time. posing part two now 😊


res for replies 😊
unres.


@shru - thank u soo much sweetheart :)

@simi: all thanks to u baby that i ended up writing.. tune hi mere andar ke writer ko jagaya :D

@ aru: m glad u liked it.. i wrote whatever all thanks to u guys :) :)

@ sadiyaswaron: i personally too like the instruction part ;)

@ sneha (swaron 9113) : thank you sweetheart :)

@ binju: thank u darling.. and thank you for ur constant reminders too :)

@ Trupti09: thank u soo much :)

@dvmishra : dear i cant send links through pm (as m still a newbie :( ) but ill surely scrap you when i update

@ tania: thank u soo for ur appreciation baby... the phrase 'missing life' is very close to my heart, and thr cudnt be a better way to use it :)

@ joshua: glad u could visualise everything.. m delighted!! m personally too loving to explore ways sharon would make swayam feel special and get out of her inhibitions.

@ suni1986: thank u soo much suni, m glad my u enjoyed my writing and my thoughts got through you :)

@nature2: thank you so much :) awww... i miss sneha too, but m sure she is happy doing what she is doing now and we are going to welcome vrushika with as much love :)

@rumeli : thank you soo much :) m glad my thoughts got across to you :) hope you enjoy reading the next update as much and more :)

@sweetydiyafrien: thank you :) m soo sry for not posting a res for u as i am a newbie and my days limit gets exhausted :(

@tejukor: u can surely call me maggie, i love being called maggie :) :) this is my 1st work darling and hence uve not read anything before... i cant pm links but i hope uve got my scrap!! :)

@pooja12345: thank you soo much :)

@deeps : thank u soo much girl for ur support and love :) m really glad to have met u !!!

@sanstina: thank you soo much girl :)

@swaron_pk: thank you soo much! :)

@haari: thank you soo much.. :)

@lassipriya: thank you soo much girl :) glad u liked the chapter.. hope you enjoy the 2nd part too :)

@kehs1234: thank you soo much … hope u enjoy the 2nd part too :)

@tanhaforever4: thank you soo mcuh! i too enjoyed writing the instruction part a lot :D

@riafulwani: thank you sooo much girl! yes yes this is very much my 1st work :) m soo glad u liked it... there are some more yay-ness in the 2nd part, hope u enjoy reading them!! :)

@nams: haha.. i agree with u candy, she really shd read the fictions here... d3 will soar higher if she incorporates even 1% of our imaginations :) but, its their baby, we have to enjoy it they way they perceive :)

@shan16: thank you soo much :)

@mel: thank you soo much darling :) hope u enjoy part 2 as well :)

@d3fan4ever: thank you sooo much :)

@sudha - thank you soo much girl, glad u liked it.. u r one of my fav writers and this coming from u surely means a lot :)

@rose: thank you soo much.. glad u liked it :)

@abby92: thank you soo much.. have updated part 2, hope u enjoy that as well :)

@kool kanz: thank you soo much.. i too loved imagining and writng the instructions and orders :) love isnt expressed by merely saying i love u, its the actions which show the love, and her concern speaks volumes! isnt it :)

@marudar: omg shishir... i started shivering after reading ur comment..!! tune mujhe nervous kar diya... mujhe to samjh nahi aa raha tha 2nd part kaise likhu.. i hope i have met ur expections in part 2.. ur comment has made me take writing the 2nd part so seriously!! and btw i love the way u dissect everythin...so clear and so crisp!! i want to get a detailed analysis from u for part2.. u can without any hitch criticise any part u dint like too, and let me know if it really met ur expectations... ur analysis will help me grow as a writer.. this is my 1st work, i really hope i can write loads of more stories :)

@enrique305: thank you soo much.. :)

@trouble magnet: thank you soo much.. i hope u got a pm from someone as i cant access ur scrapbook also :(

@arch2012: thank you soo much.. hope u enjoy part 2 as well :)
Edited by megsy - 12 years ago
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res karna he jaldi apna post res kar na
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PREVIOUS CHAPTER



PART TWO


Swayam(softly): Yeh sab kya hai Sharon?

Sharon looked up toward him and gave him a confused look.

Sharon(softly): Yeh sab matlab?

Swayam: Yeh? Shimla?

Sharon(whispers): I wanted to spend time with you, alone!

Swayam smiled looking at her innocence. There was a slight blush forming on both their faces.

Swayam (with a naughty smirk): Kya? Kya kaha tumne? Maine theek se suna nahi'

Sharon looks deep into his eyes and licked her drying lips.


Sharon (still looking deep into his eye, with a slight blush): Mujhe tumhare saath time spend karna tha, akele!

Swayam(smirking): Ahh..!! Okay, but Shimla?

Sharon (still staring deep in his eyes): Hmm, I love this place. And I wanted our 1st holiday to be here. I have a lot of memories with Shimla.


These few months Sharon had longed to look into his deep brown eyes. She had realized that those aren't any ordinary pair. Swayam's eyes could read her like an open book. She could talk to those eyes. They did not need words. Sharon always struggled to emote verbally. And his were the only eyes in the world which could just know how she feels without the need of words. These eyes visited her every night in her dreams. She had realized that even her parents couldn't read her they way Swayam's eyes could. She often wondered how.


Swayam knew what was going on in her mind, just as he always did. He realized Sharon had finally gained clarity. He could hear her heart through her eyes. He didn't blink even once all the while Sharon drowned in them. He knew what it must have taken for her to come to terms with her feelings. He knew, he just knew that his love, has finally fallen in love, and fallen deep!

A tear trickled down Swayam's left cheek. Sharon quickly wiped it and gave him a negative nod.

Sharon: No, no more, no more tears Swayam. I can't give you any more tears. No more.

Swayam tilted his head slightly to his left, smiled and took Sharon into another hug.

Sharon hugged him tight too.

Swayam had his palms inside Sharons hair and was stroking her head slowly. Sharon pressed her head near his heart and wrapped her arms around him.

Slowly Sharon started waltzing Swayam inside the room to the rhythm of his heart, still hugging him.


Sharon had decided that she is going to open up to him. She had told herself that there was really no need for her to have any inhibitions with the man who could read her in and out. She had decided she is going to shower him with all the love she could. She had decided she is going to go out of her way for him. He deserved every bit of it. She had decided she is going to make him feel special. She knew she couldn't turn back time, but she could create new memories. She had decided to finally, let go!


Swayam's eyes were closed all the while as he moved inside the room along with Sharon. He was aware they were moving inside. He was suddenly taken by surprise when Sharon broke the hug and made him sit on the bed. She still held on to his arm. There was no way she was going to leave him even for a minute.


Sharon pressed her lips against each other, gazed into his eyes and with slight hesitance sat on Swayam's left lap.

Swayam was completely taken aback as he had never expected Sharon to come so close to him. He blinked his eyes for a few seconds to seep in the fact that all these were happening for real.

Sharon rested her head on his chest and closed her eyes listening to his soothing heartbeat. She knew its every beat was for her, only her.

Swayam's heart was pacing fast. He didn't know how to react.


Sharon could understand Swayam's state. She knew Swayam must be shocked. But she also knew all these would be pleasant shocks for him. She wanted to shock him. And she wanted to shock him more.

She took his right hand in hers and softly whispered,


Sharon: Hold me


Swayam was flabbergasted. He dint know what to do. For the first time he questioned himself if it was really Sharon!


Without realizing he spoke out loud,

Swayam: kya yeh sab sach mein ho raha hai? M sure I am dreaming. Phir se Swayam, phir se tu jaagte hue sapne dekh raha hai.


Sharon couldn't help but let out a silent laugh. She was adoring him.

She quickly got hold of his left hand and made him hold her shoulder. She then quietly went back to her old position ' head on his chest, hands in his hand.

Swayam was still in a state of shock to even think anything, though he was loving every bit of it. He couldn't believe he was this lucky.



After a while Swayam rested his head on Sharons.


Sharon: Swayam'

Swayam(still in trance): hmmm'.

Sharon: I missed you a lot

Swayam (in trance): I missed you too Sharon, I missed you too. You can't imagine kitna.


Both sat in the same position for some time, breathing each others presence. Sharon had by now put her right hand around Swayams neck and was stroking his hair slowly. She was still holding his palm with her other hand, by now their fingers entwined. Swayam was rubbing her shoulder, slowly comforting her.


Swayam: Sharon'

Sharon: hmmm'

Swayam: Kuch kehna chahati ho?


Sharon moved her head up from his chest, starred at him with an amazed expression. She tilted her head slightly and said,


Sharon: Kaise Swayam? Kaise? Tum mujhe itni acchi tarah kaise samajhte ho? How did you know mujhe kuch kehna hai?


Swayam smiled at her, moved slightly and cupped her face. He held her face with his left hand and slowly moved his other hand feeling Sharon's forehead, the corner of her eye, he tucked a lock of hair behind her ear, felt her right cheek with his thumb and placed his palm behind her head. He looked deep into her eyes and said,


Swayam: cause I love you Sharon, I love you a lot. Cause you are a part of me. Apne dil ki baat jaane ke liye words ki zarurat nahi hoti na?


Sharon was getting teary. She placed her hand on Swayam's palm and slowly moved her head and kissed Swayams palm.


Swayam really couldn't believe all these were happening for real, he really couldn't. But he was glad, immensely glad for whatever was happening. Everything was more than a dream. He had his life in his arms. What more could he wish for.


What happened next was enough to make Swayam faint!

Sharon cupped Swayams face and placed a deep peck on his forehead. Swayam closed his eyes. Sharon kissed his left eye and then his right eye. She nearly suckled them slowly. She then kissed both his cheeks. She rubbed her nose with his. Swayam had a sweet smile on his face. What he felt inside could not be described. He was getting so relaxed. He was not being able to hold himself straight up. He felt he would fall any moment.


Swayam held Sharon from her waist and slowly opened his eyes. He looked straight into her eyes. Sharon tucked his head slightly forward. She started rubbing the back of his neck. Her eyes begged him. Swayam was lost. He was dazed out. He moved his hand behind her head and slowly approached her face. Sharon slowly closed her eyes. Swayam moved a little more close. He wasn't sure if Sharon really wanted this. He waited for a few seconds and before he could react, Sharon placed her lips on his. She nibbled his lower lip. By now both their eyes were closed. Both were pouring all their love through the kiss. This wasn't mere collaboration of two physical bodies. This kiss marked the mingling of two souls, the mingling of two soul mates.


Swayams body was giving up. He couldn't hold himself up anymore. His upper body fell backwards on the bed with a jolt and Sharon fell on him. They were still kissing. The fall made them loose all their senses, Sharon deepened the kiss. She wanted to pour out all her emotions through the kiss. She wanted to let Swayam know how much she loves him. She wanted to let him know that she is his, forever. They kissed each other slowly. There was no rush, no hurry. Both had waters in their eyes. Swayam poured all his love out. He was caressing her hair all through. He held her tight from her waist with his other hand. Sharon had moved her body very close to Swayams. Sharon murmured something. Swayam moved his head slightly back. Sharon started placing small pecks on his lips lovingly. She had a huge smile playing on her lips. Her eyes were lowered and her blush expressed her happiness. She nuzzled her face in Swayams neck, just next to his left ear and whispered,


Sharon: I love you Swayam, I love you more than anything in this world.

Swayam had his hand on her back head. Tears started flowing down his face after he heard Sharon say that she loves him.

Sharon quickly nuzzled herself back into his neck and hugged him tight, still lying down. She was blushing way too hard to face him.

Both of them moved up the bed in sync and snuggled deep into each other.

Swayam caressed her hair. Sharon slid her hand inside his shirt feeling his back though his tee.


Swayam (whisper): Sharon'

Sharon: hmmm'

Swayam: phir se bolo na'

Sharon: I love you Swayam, I love you, I love you and I love you

Swayam: I love you too, I love you too.


NEXT CHAPTER

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guys, i hope you guys enjoyed reading this part as much i loved writing it.


thank you sim, binju, deeps, candy, aru for your constant support... you guys are virtually holding me while i get jitters as i get super nervous to write and post the updates 😊

love you guys 😊


guys, i cant send PM's as i am still a newbie and cannot send links. i request you to please spread this amongst your friends..thank you 😊


love,

megha


P.S.: replies on page 5

Edited by megsy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Maggie Di🤗

A tight hug to my sweet Di...well you already know how i feel about this update...the much awaited moment of their lives...they were in each others embrace ..finally ...i loved the way you portrayed Sharon POV here...it was amazingly well written...he surely read her like an open book...and her reaction to see his tears...took my heart away...

A tear trickled down Swayam's left cheek. Sharon quickly wiped it and gave him a negative nod.

Sharon: No, no more, no more tears Swayam. I can't give you any more tears. No more.

Swayam tilted his head slightly to his left, smiled and took Sharon into another hug.😳😳😳

The way she showered her love on him...awww...and the kiss...it was so so beautifully written...

He wasn't sure if Sharon really wanted this. He waited for a few seconds and before he could react, Sharon placed her lips on his. She nibbled his lower lip. By now both their eyes were closed. Both were pouring all their love through the kiss. This wasn't mere collaboration of two physical bodies. This kiss marked the mingling of two souls, the mingling of two soul mates.

The confession...for which he waited all his life...i loved the last few lines...m short of words there...

Swayam: phir se bolo na'

Sharon: I love you Swayam, I love you, I love you and I love you

Swayam: I love you too, I love you too.


Loved the entire update...the confession..the kiss...the longingness...all beautifully written..cant wait for the next part...


Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES
UNRES


Twinku Dii aapko🤗
Awesome update dii,
Loved it from the beginning to the end,
I was so lost in swaronland while reading this
Brilliantly written update,
Aap khud hi jaano aap itna acha kaise likhte ho,mujhe bhi thodi training do na…lol
This was a very unknown side of Sharon,
Would love to see this side of Sharon onscreen,
Beautifully described Sharon's emotions,
Please update the next chappy ASAP


Simren👏

Edited by sweetsimi123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update megha di
apne iski length increase krdi toh aur acha hogaya hai
waiting for next
Edited by sweetcherry95 - 12 years ago

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