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Posted: 12 years ago



so at last Geet told her Daadi about her love for Maan...

loved Maaneet moments and Geet faking leg pain to make Maan lift her...

I think Maan will himself create problem in his love story because of his inferiority complex...

here Maan is engrossed in his own guilt that he snatched Dev's love for Geet but there Dev already got his love as Jeevika...

hope Maan get to know this and remove his guilt feelings...

yaar one thing I am surprised that u always make Maan very confused and inferior in ur FFs...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
part 4
nice part...
Maan feels hes hiding a big thing from Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved a lot
continue soon
waiting for next
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..both pairs got their love..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Is first love last love? Part 5
Broken Crystal flower:MG OS(Based on DElhi rape)
I thank Ratna for this beautiful banner.

Indira showed the photographs of some boys.
Jeevika reached her house.Her Nani Savitri came.
S:Jeevika...
She was suddenly shocked when she saw Dev coming from behind.
J:Nani...this is the singer Devji.I always tell you about him.Right?
Savitri was not able to understand anything.She kept looking at them to clear her doubts.

Dev touched her feet.Her hands shivered while blessing him.
D:Naniji...I love Jeevika.I want to marry her.
Savitri was shocked:But...

D:Please don't say 'no'. I really love her.Since I am a celebrity don't think I am just doing all these for fun.Please...
Savitri became emotional:Jeevika has always adored you.You were her Prince Charming in all her dreams ever since she saw you.If your love for Jeevika is true why should I oppose?
Dev and Jeevika became very happy.

Dev's parents visited Jeevika and they fixed the date for engagement.

Geet rushed to Maan.
G:Maan...Dadima has fixed the date for our engagement.The coming 7th.
Maan was excited:Really?I am so happy.
Suddenly he became emotional:Geet...promise me that you will always be with me.I am an orphan.I have only you.
Geet became emotional: I will always be there with you Maan.
M:Whetever happens you will be with me?
G:Yes Maan.Nothing can reduce my love for you.Time can only strengthen my love for you.
Maan became emotional.
He said in his mind:Geet...if you know the truth about Dev's feelings for you,will you leave me?How will you react if you come to know that i hid Dev's love from you purposefully?
Maan got tensed.
Geet kept her arms on his chest:I can feel your heart beating for me Maan.I know how much you love me.My heart is also beating for you and it will beat for you till the end of our lives.

They smiled at each other sweetly.
G:Ok...I am going.
Suddenly he pulled her towards him and wrapped his arms around her waist.To get grip she held him tight.

M:Can't you stay here for some more time?
Geet blushed.
G:Wait for some more time Maan.
She ran away.He just smiled.


Dev and Jeevika met at the temple.
J:This temple is so special.This temple only united us.
He smiled.
D:I came here to take you for the engagement ring shopping.
J:Shopping with you?Oh no...
D:Don't be scared.I won't misbehave with you.
J:I trust you.But Naniji won't like it.
D:Please don't refuse Jeevika.It's our engagement.So i want you to wear the ring you like.Please.
She was still confused.
Finally she nodded her head making him smile.


Geet rang up Dev.
G:Hi buddy,where are you now?
Dev smiled at Jeevika who was standing next to him.
D:I am with Jeevika at the jewellery shop.We came here to select engagement rings.
G:Cool.We are also going for shopping.Maan is not good at jewellery shopping.So I will manage it by myself.But for clothes shopping we both are going together.Then Dev...you know that our engagement is on the same day at the same place.Don't tell this to Maan until that moment comes.I want him to be surprised.
D:Sure sure.As usual you are a prankster.
She giggled.
G:Ok bye.I am not disturbing your shopping romance.
She cut the call.
Dev and Jeevika looked at the engagement ring collection.

D:Jeevika,which ring did you like the most?
J:Whatever you chose will be the best.So you choose.

He picked up a ring.

D:Did you like this?I guess it will look lovely on you.
She smiled:Yes,I liked it.
D:Ok.So your ring selection is done by me.Now it's your turn to select a ring for me.
She never expected it.
D:Come on.
She chose a ring.
J:Hope you liked this.
He smiled at her from the bottom of his heart:Lovely like you.

She blushed.
Dev told them to pack the rings.They packed it.
The girl who stood there:You both look lovely together.
They became shy.


Maan and Geet went for shopping.
Geet selected a shervani for Maan.
G:This will make you look damn handsome.
Maan smiled.
G:Now we will select a dress for me.
She was walking in a hurry.Her leg slipped and Maan held her preventing from a fall.
M:You always have a tendency to fall down.If I had not held you,you wuld have fallen down and hurt yourself.Then the engagement would have been postponed by dadima.
Suddenly he saw a curl lying on her forehead.He touched it and tucked it behind her earlobe.
Feeling his magical touch she closed her eyes.Maan noticed it.
In a sweet voice he tried to wake her up from the romantic dream world:Geet!
She opened her eyes and moved her fingers towards his face and ended up caressing his cheek.
They both were lost in each other.
Geet 24th August: Geet hui sabse parayi €

Their eyes pampered each other romantically.
Mahi...Mahi...
Slowly they came back to their senses breaking their eye lock.They were shy.
They walked to the engagement outfit section.
Maan chose a beautiful Indian attire for Geet.
G:I will try wearing this in the changing room.
M:Ok.
Geet went to the changing room while Maan stood outside the room.He was very impatient to see his darling in that outfit.Finally he lost his control and opened the door and got inside.
M:Geet!
She had worn the dress.But she had not worn the shawl.She looked sensuous in her sleeveless dress.
Maan's eyes touched her completely.Geet was very shy.
She looked far better than he expected.
She covered her front with her hands.Maan realized that she was feeling uncomfortable to stand like this in front of him.
M:Sorry Geet...I should not have entered the room without knocking at the door.
Geet looked down as she was shy to face him:It's ok Maan.
Maan saw the shawl lying on the chair.He took the shawl and covered her with that.
M:Now everything is alright?
She smiled:Yes.
M:Can I tell you something Geet?
G:Tell.
Maan looked at her romantically:You look gorgeous.
She blushed.


Broken Crystal flower:MG OS(Based on DElhi rape)
Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update

but maan still feels guilty for not tell geet the truth
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
but maan is still in guilt for hiding the truth
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.
Everything going fine except Maan's guilt.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it waiting for more plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
all is smooth but maan's guilt

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