Broken Crystal flower:MG OS(Based on DElhi rape)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Broken Crystal flower
I am dedicating this OS to the girl who got raped in Delhi on 16 December 2012.
That incident inspired me to pen down this OS.

Maan took an auto and rushed to the Medical College to pick up his fiancee Geet.After 2 months they are going to get married.
Geet was waiting eagerly for her Maan.He had promised to take her for a movie.That also her favourite Shah Rukh Khan's Jab Tak Hai Jaan.
Maan reached her college late due to traffic block.She is a medical student.
M:Sorry Geet...I became late.
G:It's ok Maan.
M:But we won't get tickets for first show.
G:It's ok.We will go for second show.Our parents have given us permission and they know that even if we stay an overnight together we won't do anything wrong.
They smiled.
They went to the beach.Then they had dinner from the street shop.Then they went for the film.Geet truly enjoyed the movie 'Jab tak hai jaan'.She became emotional watching the movie.Love stories always touch her heart deeply.
After the movie they walked to the bus stand to return.
They got inside the bus.There were 6 men inside the bus.
They stared at Geet.Geet found it very swakward.
She whispered to Maan:Maan...Those guys look dangerous.The way they are looking at me...I am getting scared.
Maan looked at them.
Then he whispered to her:Don't look at them.Just ignore them.Then they won't stare at you.
The bus started moving.The bus got deviated from the normal route.Maan and Geet could not understand why.
Maan reacted:Why is the bus moving this way?
The driver drove without any reaction.
M:Can't you hear what I asked?
Then those 6 men went near them.
One guy:Just ignore the driver.Let him take this bus anywhere.Let us have fun.
Geet got scared.
Maan got angry:What are you saying?
Another guy:Why are you pretening to be a saint man?You must have enjoyed this girl.Right?
Maan lost his control:Shut your bloody tongue.
He looked at the driver:Stop the bus.Let us get down.
The driver stopped the bus.
M:Geet,come..we will get down.
But the doors got locked by the 6 men.
M:Hey...what is this?
G:Open the door.
One guy started taunting them:But before that tell us what you both were doing at late night?
M:That is none of your business.
Suddenly one of them slapped Maan and dragged Geet to another side.
Geet screamed:Maan!
M:Geet!
Maan began to go after her.But he was gagged and knocked by an iron rod.He fell down unconscious.
Geet screamed:Maan!
She cried.
The bus started moving.
She saw lust in their eyes.They were thirsty for her.
G:Oh my God!What will I do?
As they moved towards her she moved backwards.
G:No...please...
One man pulled her hair.
She cried pleading:Please don't...
Another man:Close your mouth.
She kept crying.She was hit by the iron rod.
G:Please don't hurt me.
They kept hitting her with the iron rod.
She was too weak to object.Finall all 6 men snatched her purity;her precious asset from her.Then the bus got stopped.The driver came and she was shared by him too.She fell unconscious as she was physically tortured to the core.Another one went to the driver seat and started driving the bus.
After their cruel session got over,they threw the two from the moving bus.

The next morning...\

Geet was found on the road, partially clothed and unconscious.Near by her Maan was lying unconscious.The people took them to the hospital.

After a week Maan gained consciousness.
Hus parents shed tears of relief.
M:Where is Geet?
They cried.
The doctor:Geet is still in the ventilator.She is in a critical condition.Means she is in coma.There is no chance of recovering.
Maan screamed:Nooo!

After some time Policce men came for enquiry.
"Tell us Maan,what happened actually?"
Maan cried recalling that scary incident.
"Can you identify them?"
M:Yes,I can identify those beasts.

The whole city was smoking with Public protest against the rapists in New Delhi at India Gate and Raisina Hill.. Thousands of protesters clashed with police, overturned cars, and battled Rapid Action Force units.Some of them were arrested.

Finally with Maan's help the Poilice men traced the rapists and they were arrested.
The court's decision to give all the 7 men capital punishment.They were surrounded by the Police men.Unexpectedly Maan took out a gun from his pocket and shot all of them.
M:They tortured Geet in front of me,but I could not do anything to protect my Geet.So I killed them.At least that much I should do.Right?
Maan cried.His parents also cried.
Maan wiped his tears suppressing his depression.

M:I am willing to accept the punishment the court decides for me.But before that I want to see my Geet.

The Police men too Maan to Geet's room.
Geet seemed to be a broken crystal flower.The wound marks which remained on her body made her look like another girl who has lost charm and glow completely.
Maan's tears fell on her forehead.
Maan took a pinch of vermillion and put on the parting of her hair.
Then he came out of the room followed by the Police men.
He looked at Geet's parents.
M:I know that you will take care of my Geet.One day I will return.From then onwards I will look after my Geet.Because she is my wife.I married her.
They were confused about Maan said about marriage.
Maan was taken out by the Police men.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg omg😲
ye b koi baat hui bhala
u made me cry😭😭
mujhe laga hi tha geet ke saath kuj bt after reading
dont know how a girl will lead a normal life
bt i also feel jo b bast*** aise kare
should be killed 😡
my maanu did the w8 thing by killing those racs****😡
girls always became victim😭😭😭
bt dare u made me cry again😭
n dont do this with my maaneet again
no way😭😭
Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry dear..i wiill not like dis post of urs..its not like dat i dont like ur writing..its jus dat i. m very much angry wid the happenings n late judgement of d case...
i luv ur work bt i hope d bas***ds rascals get their punishment the same way maan gave to them...
sorry..if u feel offended...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvu4ever143

sorry dear..i wiill not like dis post of urs..its not like dat i dont like ur writing..its jus dat i. m very much angry wid the happenings n late judgement of d case...
i luv ur work bt i hope d bas***ds rascals get their punishment the same way maan gave to them...
sorry..if u feel offended...

I don't care abt the likes.I will be satisfied if my OS was able to touch the heart of my readers.U read it and commented.Thank ou 4 that
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U kno wat!! i am feeling sooo angry coz of those rapists...being a girl i understand what it means for that girl... i sooo wish those guys get a proper punishment...its high time our country shud provide us girls a safe place where we can roam without fear of such incidents...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely
Insha Allah they will be burn in bottom layer of hell.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I WISH THAT SOMEBODY CAN PUNISH THOSE GUYS LIKE MAAN DID HERE
THEY DONT EVEN DESERVE TO HAVE A TRIAL
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u made me cry not because this OS but I was remembering that girl...

this is really very less u have written than what she went through...

u know --- when those b*****ds were raping her she tried to slap one and he got so enraged that after raping her repeatedly he put his hand inside her v****a and pull out her uterous and threw it out before throwing the girl and boy out of bus...next day police men were searching for her uterous also...

that is why drs. said that she can't have sexual life or bear any children in her life...

sorry dear I can't say I like it...just we should pray that how u show Maan having strength to marry her and shoot those guys...in reality also it should happen...

when we were living in Andhra Pradesh...one incident happen in Vellore... 3 guys threw acid on 2 girls because one of the girls was opposing one of the boys advances...the main girl died and second's face was burnt...
police catch those guys and then SP of police shoot all of them in encounter...next day all school and collage girls and ladies went to police station and facilitate that brave officer and tied Rakhi to him...

kaash sab jagah kum se kum ek officer aisa ho...I salute him...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul


I don't care abt the likes.I will be satisfied if my OS was able to touch the heart of my readers.U read it and commented.Thank ou 4 that


thanku dear... i have to comment on this os.. its important.. u expressed d vulnerabilities of their situation truly... i know its jus an os..bt it holds the truth which we girls have to suffer jus becoz of few moments of pleasure for others... i hate this... sorry if i over reacted bt after reading dis..i have strong feeling to share my thoughts...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very sad OS yar,i'm feeling so bad for poor delhi girl.

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