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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 10- temporary happiness

The morning was bright and beautiful. But for manyata it was not. The whole world seemed to have lost its glow, maybe it was just for her .she was woken up in the morning by a maid who asked her to get readt by 7 am for breakfast..now it was 6 50.she decided to go down

At the breakfast hall uday was already seated reading his newspaper. She joined him. Nobody spoke for some time. Finally uday spoke

U: princess iam sorry about last night, I am just sorry. Please try to understand why I said so.

M: does not reply😔

U: you are a royal blood and iam a commoner, a nobody, how would the society accept this relation, lest your family

M: is my status a drawback? Just because iam a princess I cannot marry you? If I was just manyata would you have accepted me?

U: its not like that princess,

M: then like what?😳

U: listen princess, let me explain

I was once in love with a girl who was from a rich family- sasha. We loved each other dearly . we were ready to die for each other. Her family somehow came to know about it and they warned me . but since I was 16 ' young and arrogant I defied then. But I did not know what price I would have to pay for my arrogance. Her father hired a local don and asked him to wipe of my family. I was out that night for a group study at my friends house.

Next morning when I came home I saw my family slaughtered. Killed mercilessly. I was alone since that day

M: what about sasha?

U: she was shipped out of the country and then I didn't have any information about her whereabouts then.

Today she is happily married and living with her husband in Italy. I met her when I went for a business trip. She didnt recognize me or acted as she never knew me

M: what? (clearly shocked)

U: (his sound was broken)yes🥺. I am scared to commit since then .when I become very close to any girl I remember how my family was brutally killed because I loved some one

m: I am so sorry uday, I never knew it.

but why uday ? why? Why did you become close with me ? why?😡

U(:not looking at manyata and says,) you remind me of her- sasha your smile,your mannerisms and mant other features

M: do you still love her?

U: a barely audiable , yes

M:why uday? Why are you scared to commit. My family will never come in the way of my happiness. Today you are not that ordinary uday who could be frightened by goons your powerful in your own way

Uday I never ever felt like this before. I never loved any one before. Uday you make me feel complete .you give me happiness uday. Please uday don't leave me please

U: princess I need time , please atleast give me sometime to get rid of my fears

M: I am ready uday. I will wait for you

U: thank you princess

and he hugs her, she also hugs him back with equal passion.soon they approach each other for a kiss. They kiss with passion like if they stop the world would end . they just could not stop. However they had to stop to catch their breath. They had finally confessed their love. It was like the seventh heaven .

they sat down on the coach never leaving their eyes from each other.they would have continued to do so till eternity, when manyatas cell rang

it was rohan

m: hallo rohan,

r: where are you mayata? Where the hell are you (clearly angry)😡

m: cool man, why so angry? I told you I would be visiting the sight for the school😊

r: I remember but that was yesterday for heavens sake, where were you last night?

M: is it necessary for me to tell you everything that I do? (she was now getting irritated)

R: manyata I am asking for the last time whre are you

M: ok fine , iam at udays place . last night the meetings ended so late I could not return home, so I spent the night here and iam now about to leave

R: ok and he cuts the phone

M: I think I should leave now , uday I wanted to talk something in private with you are you free tomorrow

U: sorry princess tomorrow iam leaving for London . I will be returing only after 2 weeks

M: then can I meet you today please?

U: ok I pick you from office dear

Uday kisses manyata on her cheeks and asks his driver to take her home

As he watched her leave he says to himself

U: sorry princess I lied to you

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Rohan was fuming. Manyata spent the night in udays house. God knows what happened between them

Its time he implement his plan or he should see his dreams fly away in the wind. He got ready as he wanted to visit devgarh

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Mr shark was annoyed with himself. 😡He had just found out that he loved manyata

No it was not possible, no it cant happen

I only lust her , no said another part of his mind

God , I should not love. Love makes you weak .

how could the lion fall in love with a lamp

Stop it . it is just lust it must never be love

He had never failed till date

He would not allow any stupid feelings to stop him from completing his mission

He took the photo of his latest pray

He stared at the picture

He knew his prey very well too well and his passion for hot chicks

Uday was his best friend who knew him inside out

Isn't it ironic. Uday was very very close to him and now he had to kill him

Mr shark laughed 😃

It was time to separate business from friend ship

The person must die today

he took a red pen and crossed the photo

Today he would disguise himself as a woman

A simple make up and hot dressing and he was ready

He stared himself on the mirror it was perfect

The lady staring him was a beauty her hands and legs were waxed .she wore a read gown cut in all proper places. she looked well build but not bulky the curves were perfect. Make up could do wonders

Before that he needed to see his second prey manyata

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chapter10.1 on page 21
Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Chapter 10.1 a killing

Manyata had finished her bath and was sitting in her study when rohan and his family arrived

Brig raj: array what a pleasant surprise, come in come in😊

Ram: (rohans dad )thank you we came to see you for a special reason

Manyata was listening to the conversation bbut did not join tthem

Ram: oh komal, how nice to see you .

K: yes even I am happy to see you all

Ram: I am not delaying the reason for which we have come here . we would like to cement our relation further.

My son rohan loves manyata and wants to marry her. 😃

B: that a wonderful news I am so happy😊

But I am not, said manyata as she entered the room

M: sorry uncle and aunty I am not interested in this marriage. Please don't force me

Rohan is my best friend but that does not mean I can accept him as my life partner.

I can never see him in that way. Iam sorry

Rohan deserves someone better than me

If you excuse me I have to leave now

Saying this she left that place

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Manyata was resting in her office when rohan stormed in the office . he literally lifted her from her chairad pushed her to the wall .he pinned her to the wall

M: what are you doing rohan , leave me , I said leave me now

R:so that you can spent more time in that udays bedroom, entertaining him😡 eh(he said this grinding his teeth)

M: (shocked hearing this talk from rohan)what?

R: don't act innocent manyata. Then what were you doing there playing snake and ladder

M: what is the problem with you? Why do you bother what I do?

R: I will bother. there is nothing you can do about it

M: your hurting me😕

R: I enjoy it

M: rohan leave me before I call the security

R: I not leaving you . not until I take revenge for insulting me and my family there manyata you are becoming arrogant nowadays its time to stop it

Saying this he tries to kiss her and manyata is struggling to free herself. Suddenly he was pulled from her and then

BAAAM

He fell on the floor

Don't you ever touch her😡, shouted uday

Manyata goes and hugs uday and he hugs her back

Rohan gets from the floor ands tells

S: so mr lover is here. Don't you have any other girl to be with? She is mine only mine

U: leave now before I kick your butt out of this office

R: you will suffer for this

U: I said leave .now.

Rohan left the office.

Manyata was still hugging him ,tears in her eyes. He slowly rubs it of

U: its ok princess don't cry. Its over

M: oh uday, saying this she again starts crying

U: manu , cheer up what is the thing you wanted to discuss with me

Manyata soon wiped her face and took him out of her office and told him to take her away

They go out . soon they reach a restaurant

Manyata and uday sit and uday order for them

M:uday my life is in danger

U: what?

She then narrates to him on how she found about the killer and how some one in her family wanted her dead and how her office was bugged how rathode had found about the bugs and how he was nearing the end of his investigation . and soon mr sharks identity will be brought out

Uday was shocked hearing this.

U: my god I cant believe this

M: even I did not believe it initially but the evidence says so

M: uday I am scared I feel that I am being followed by some un known force who wants me dead

U: I don't know what to say, I must leave to London tomorrow as soon as I return we will sort this out

M: uday that lady in that red dess is staring at me for a long time

U: maybe she is thinking what a handsome man like me is doing with a girl like you

M: what! (shocked)

U: chill I was just joking your just worried about this

Unknown to them someone was tapping their conversation and capturing their talk with a telescopic camera

Soon they left the place and uday left for the disco after leaving manyata home

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Mr shark entered the disco and soon spotted his prey .

The person was thinking of conversation with manyata when he saw a beauty approach him. She was not his usual type, she was very tall and wore a red dress her curves were however very perfect

Girl: can I sit here

Prson: sure

He continued to stare her and she noticed it

She placed her arm on his leg and looked seductively . he loved it

G: will you buy me a drink

P: sure

He thought of manyata and felt guilty but now it was time to enjoy

Soon they were talking very animatedly and his hands kept touching her and she did not mind

G: your place or mine

P: mine

They left the place and went to his house. No one was over there. Servants were given 2 days off

They soon became confortable he was trying to kiss her but she moved away shyly

He placed his hands on her hips and tried to lift her frock

She stopped him and said what about a drink

As she fixed their drinks she added a powder in his drink and gave it to him both enjoyed their drinks but suddenly he went numb he could not move his body he was paralyzed. She soon removed the knife she had conceled in her dress and approached him

His eyes revealed fear

Her voice changed

G: hallo I wanted to meet you for a long time iam mr shark😆

Mr shark oh god I just cant move . god save me

Mr shark: lets start

and he cut away his fingers 🤢

Victim could not even cry out as he was paralyzed

Ms: with this hands you touched manyata so iam taking it away

Ms: with this tongue you talked to her so

And he cut his tongue🤢

You were trying to be intimate with manyata for this iam removing your balls

And he removed it and stuffed it in his mouth🤢

(this Is not my idea I borrowed it from Sidney sheldon ; but iam not sure which book)

Soon he severed his head from his body

Mr shark face was covered with blood and he soon washed it of

He removed all traces of evidence from that place and wiped his fingerprints from the glasses

He left the place

Mr. shark's work was complete

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Next day manyata received a call from the police .a person was murdered .it was her friend

Police: it was early morning that the maid found the body

M: can I see the body

P: ok

Manyata called a number

Person: yes

M:iam sorry for every thing i said please will you come with me . he got 😭 killed

P: what ? I will come soon😲

They went to his house the place was surrounded with police cars

She held his hand as they entered the house

Lying in a pool of blood was the body the head was severed from the body.

The fingers were missing

She felt like retching seeing that scene🤢 . she held his hands tightly and cried

UDAAAYY…………………………………………

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And all went blank

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Guys first of all a big sorry I had to kill him

Please don't throw anything on me

The story demanded the killing

Please hit the like button even if you hate it please

The next chapter: SHOCKING REVEALATIONS

Manyata will know mr sharks identity and will confront him

Please I want your comments please

Do tell your suggestions about manyata's meeting with mr shark

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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 10:

Part 1: The fake past: Ok so I really fell for this past andy😆, I mean I so seriously belived what Uday said, had it been real it would have made a great past😉. And Manyata OMG her love has no bound, even after Uday confessed that he still loves shasha,and he loved her only because she was like her , she still wants UV has her life partner. She is ready to be a shadow of shasha for Uday all her life😳😳, Seriously I so wish to see UV's love for M.And the final dhamaka that he lied to her about the past was really a blow for me 😆. A very well written part andy 👏👏

Part 2: MR Shark in love: Hailaa when did this happen😲. Lust karte karte pyar ho gaya 😲, OK now i really dont get this part, I had once imagined UV to be the killer who falls in love with M and cant kill her, but yaha tho ulta hi ho raha hai. But still no mercy for Mr shark, he is one pathetic, sick man 🤢, and now he is going to kill Uday 😕

Chapter 10.1

Part 1: Rohan makes a move, but fails: Loved how Manyata straight forward tells all of them with complete dignity that she is not interested in Rohan and doesn't wish to pursue this ahead😊. I dint find it dis-respectful in any way , but I guess rohan couldnt take the upfront rejection.

Part 2: Rohan unmasked-shows his true colors: Couldnt expect more fom this guy who has actually hired Mr shark to kill Uday 😡. Good Uday reached there and beats the hell out of him 😆, I enjoyed this part 😆.

Part 3: Manyata reveals her danger: Gosh M is in so deep love with UV, she trust him so much that she even goes till the extend of telling him what no one else knows 😕. But UV's reaction to this was so thanda 😕. I mean come on the lady u love is in danger, and he casually says I have to leave fro London, let me come back and we will see to it, what if she dies before that. I really dint understand UV's behavior here . What teh heck, someone was tapping their conversation, it mean MR shark now knows that M is aware of his existence and she is also aware of the danger on her life 😕, now I'm confused. If the person tapping their conversation was not Mr shrak then who was it?

Part 4: Cruelty redefined 😡: Ok now I dont know who this was, coz even UV goes to the pub, but u never mentioned who this person was. And he thinking of calling M, it could be Uday, it could be Rohan too😕. And seriously could this get any more sick and horrendous, gosh Andy I had goosebumps while reading it. I so hope u haven't killed UV😕. And whom did she call, what is Uv is alive and he is in london, so she might have called Ajay too, and said sorry for being rude to him in the club, or it could be rohan whom she apologized😕. again a big big confusion .

Thanks for the PM andy 🤗, update soon


Edited by chitra_rao - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...uday ko mar dala
plzzz...bring him back
urghhh...rohan is sooo..
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
res 😃


unres
sorry😭😭

cumin 2 d updates
both d chapter 10, 10.1 wer awesum
loved them
ohhh udays past was heart touching

plz the person killed is nt UDay na?????😭
Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Both your chapters were brillinatly written Andy!...perfect..Chapter 8 about the sespects. Poor M...How can one survive with the grave thought of being killed God knows when...
How can you suspect your family. true..

Chapter 9 was also a nice progress..Specially at least for sometime, this chapter lessened the tension growing in the environment with the killing thing...

The mystery now is WHo is the criminal who wants M dead and who is Uday actually?...what past does he have?...I don't know why I have a doubt that UV is the shadow here😕

Update soon Andy...you are doing a good job
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Posted: 12 years ago
uday is mr shark! i really do think that!
overall a nyc update...😃
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Whaaattt😲...You killed my Uday!!???😡😡...U are joking...I won't let this happen...Andy plz bring back Uday...U can't do this...Kill Rohan instead...😆..No i shouldn't be laughing but plzzz nooo😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
andy tunay jutay khane wala kam kia hai 😡
ku mara uday ko wo b itni berehmi say...urrgghh...
I feel like hiting u with the belan on ur head...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swetsurati

OMG...uday ko mar dala
plzzz...bring him back
urghhh...rohan is sooo..
Update soon...


thanks dear
yes someone is dead
rohan is very bad here

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