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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

ohh i forgot,😆 uday ko na marna...😃


will indeed try tn save uday
but no guarantee
iam so sorry
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a


will indeed try tn save uday
but no guarantee
iam so sorry



😭😕🤢😡😲😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
updated my comment on page 21 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">chapter 10:</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Part 1: The fake past: Ok so I really fell for this past andy😆, I mean I so seriously belived what Uday said, had it been real it would have made a great past😉. And Manyata OMG her love has no bound, even after Uday confessed that he still loves shasha,and he loved her only because she was like her , she still wants UV has her life partner. She is ready to be a shadow of shasha for Uday all her life😳😳,SeriouslyI so wish to see UV's love for M.And the final dhamaka that he lied to her about the past was really a blow for me😆. A very well written part andy👏👏
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Part 2: MR Shark in love: Hailaa when did this happen😲. Lust karte karte pyar ho gaya😲, OK now i really dont get this part, I had once imagined UV to be the killer who falls in love with M and cant kill her, but yaha tho ulta hi ho raha hai. But still no mercy for Mr shark, he is one pathetic, sick man🤢, and now he is going to kill Uday😕</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Chapter 10.1</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Part 1: Rohan makes a move, but fails: Loved how Manyata straight forward tells all of them with complete dignity that she is not interested in Rohan anddoesn'twish to pursue this ahead😊. I dint find it dis-respectfulin any way , but I guess rohan couldnt take the upfront rejection.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Part 2: Rohan unmasked-shows his true colors: Couldnt expect more fom this guy who has actually hired Mr shark to kill Uday 😡. Good Uday reached there and beats the hell out of him😆, Ienjoyedthis part😆.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Part 3: Manyata reveals her danger: Gosh M is in so deep love with UV, she trust him so much that she even goes till the extend of telling him what no one else knows😕. But UV's reaction to this was so thanda😕. I meancome onthe lady u love is in danger, and he casually says I have to leave fro London, let me come back and we will see to it, what if she dies before that. I really dintunderstandUV'sbehaviorhere. What teh heck, someone was tapping their conversation, it mean MR shark now knows that M is aware of hisexistenceand she is also aware ofthedanger on her life😕, now I'm confused. If the person tapping their conversation was not Mr shrak then who was it?</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Part 4: Cruelty redefined😡: Ok now I dont know who this was, coz even UV goes to the pub, but u never mentioned who this person was. And he thinking of calling M, it could be Uday, it could be Rohan too😕. And seriously couldthisget any more sick and horrendous, gosh Andy I had goosebumps while reading it. I so hope uhaven'tkilled UV😕. And whom did she call, what is Uv is alive and he is in london, so she might have called Ajay too, and said sorry for being rude to him in the club, or it could be rohan whom sheapologized😕. again a big bigconfusion.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Thanks for the PM andy🤗, update soon</font>



thank you chitra for this long and lovely comment
uday has a past which he does not want anybody to know so he lies
mr shark accidently fell in love with manyata and now he is trying to repair the damage
rohan actually loved manyata but did not realise that is why he manhandled her
yes there was a third person behind them
it could be mr sharks partner
uday had a bussiness meet planned months back so he must leave
and uday was to leave for the afternoon flight
the person killed by mr shark had hurt him in the past so he deserved that death
i know the update raises many doubts
but i assure that it will be solved very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

res😊.

edited:
Chapter 9 ... I won't waste too much time commenting on it, though it was really nice. Manyata is so in love with him. He on the other hand has has some dark secret. I liked this chapter ... but I have to admit , I missed Mr Shark here😆!
Chapter 10 ... Uday's past love story - I DON'T BUY IT!!! I think he lied. Mr Shark, too , is in love with Manyata 😲. It's getting more complicated by the chapter.
Chapter 10.1 ... very mysterious & very well written👏.
Rohan brought his parents , to fix his alliance with Manyata - THAT BACK FIRED. I liked how Manyata told them that she was not in favour of it.
Fight in her office ... I thoroughly enjoyed that. Rohan deserved it ( i'm on Uday's side😆). Now ... here is where I am confused😕 - Manyata knows that her office is bugged , yet she still confides in Uday ... and tells him everything about her family and Mr Shark. Then Uday so casually says : I have to go somewhere ... when I get back - we'll deal with it! He didn't show any concern for her safety ... I'm dissappointed with his attitude.
Mr Shark called Uday - his friend ... so I think , AJAY is Mr Shark .
Lastly the killing ... I'll bet anything - ROHAN IS THE DEAD GUY. I say this because , Mr Shark is in love with Manyata ... he must have not liked Rohan man-handling Manyata in her office ... SO HE KILLED HIM. Manyata screamed out Uday's name because he must be the 1 that she called to accompany her to that house ... Uday was with her at that moment!!!
(anyway ... it's just a guess!!!
ALSO ... when I blackmailed u about not reading your ss if u hurt Uday ... I THINK YOU LISTENED TO ME & saved our guy😳).
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

res.

Andy I have lots to say to u. But i don't have time right now.
BTW ... thanks for killing Rohan😃. I think he's the dead guy!

navi i wont update the next chapter till i read your analysis
now what makes you yhing that rohan died?
will wait for your comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏👏👏awesome...fantastic👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

navi i wont update the next chapter till i read your analysis

now what makes you yhing that rohan died?
will wait for your comment

Sorry for taking so long Andy. I PROMISE to do it tonight😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

👏👏👏awesome...fantastic👏👏👏


thank you dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...



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<font color="#ff0000">Sorry for taking so long Andy. I PROMISE to do it tonight😊.</font>


navi take your time
now when do you want the next update
tomorrow or monday?

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