SwaRon SS : F.R.I.E.N.D.S [COMPLETED] - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

WOW...i was waiting for this update...eagerlyyy...and the wait was worth it...i loved the fact that the confession...the events followed by the adorable confession were so different...i really loved the kind of treatment u gave to this SS...it was unique...two best frnds...realized their love for each other but couldn't confess...becoz the fear of loosing the best frnd...awww...adorable...loved swayam's reaction when she said ...she loves him...i knew it...hehe...poor guy...the ice cream date...the meet woth his love guru...how cute... Thank you SO much!!.


Loved the way u showed the awkwardness in the newly found relationship...both struggling to have a start the conversation...



Swayam was struggling to start a conversation started looking blankly at the road. Whereas Sharon who was in no better condition, chose to concentrate on her ice-cream. As a few minutes passed they both sat awkwardly and wishing for the other to break the silence. Finally Swayam looked at her and as cupid may have wished Sharon too turned towards him at the same time. Both looked at each other silent for a moment and then burst out laughing.

"You look cute when you are confused" Swayam said

"You look cute when you are nervous" Sharon replied.


Loved the conversation followed by this...

"You won't Swayam'This relationship will work, we will make it happen, I love you and I'm not letting you go off so easily, got it mister!" she said with a huge smile.

Swayam smiled looking her, "who's leaving you anyway, I love you and you love me!" Swayam said looking like a1 year old.

"By the way who's so brave to bear you other than me huh? ...no one!" Swayam said and got a light punch on his shoulder.


This happens when you know the person inside out...awww...finally she is his girl frnd...WOW...lovely end dear...beautiful conclusion u gave to this adorable SS Thanks!

I LOVED THIS SS... will be waiting for ur next work...eagerlyyy...😳 . Thanks =)

Thanks you SO much for that adorable comment Deepika 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA

Had fun reading the ff...

Loved how sharon said I love you which confused swayam...😃 Finally a Happy ending..

Thanks a ton =)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ABBY92

I loved how Sharon just blurted out the I love you cause she was so nervous and Swayam ka reaction was hilarious !! Thank God he made up for it by quickly saying I love you too !! It was a really sweet ending to the SS !!

Was waiting for your comment. Thnaks for the reviews =).
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TANHA_H

awesome one yr 👏👏

Thanks! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazingly ended the perfect relationship's beginning.

Thanks a ton for the PM! :D

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