SwaRon SS : F.R.I.E.N.D.S [COMPLETED]

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: binuja
That was an amazing end yaar...but sad that it did end...
Swaron are always magical...be it as besties or be it as lovers...they are always the best... 😊
Do keep writing...:)

Thanks!..oh dun be sad.. we will write something sometime, no promises though we raen't very good ta keeping them here 😆.

yeah, SwaRon are adorable!. TanHa wala SwaRon =)

Thanks for commenting 😳

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

WOW...i was waiting for this update...eagerlyyy...and the wait was worth it...i loved the fact that the confession...the events followed by the adorable confession were so different...i really loved the kind of treatment u gave to this SS...it was unique...two best frnds...realized their love for each other but couldn't confess...becoz the fear of loosing the best frnd...awww...adorable...loved swayam's reaction when she said ...she loves him...i knew it...hehe...poor guy...the ice cream date...the meet woth his love guru...how cute...

Loved the way u showed the awkwardness in the newly found relationship...both struggling to have a start the conversation...

Swayam was struggling to start a conversation started looking blankly at the road. Whereas Sharon who was in no better condition, chose to concentrate on her ice-cream. As a few minutes passed they both sat awkwardly and wishing for the other to break the silence. Finally Swayam looked at her and as cupid may have wished Sharon too turned towards him at the same time. Both looked at each other silent for a moment and then burst out laughing.

"You look cute when you are confused" Swayam said

"You look cute when you are nervous" Sharon replied.

Loved the conversation followed by this...

"You won't Swayam'This relationship will work, we will make it happen, I love you and I'm not letting you go off so easily, got it mister!" she said with a huge smile.

Swayam smiled looking her, "who's leaving you anyway, I love you and you love me!" Swayam said looking like a1 year old.

"By the way who's so brave to bear you other than me huh? ...no one!" Swayam said and got a light punch on his shoulder.

This happens when you know the person inside out...awww...finally she is his girl frnd...WOW...lovely end dear...beautiful conclusion u gave to this adorable SS

I LOVED THIS SS... will be waiting for ur next work...eagerlyyy...😳

Edited by deep_Tanha - 13 years ago

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Had fun reading the ff...

Loved how sharon said I love you which confused swayam...😃 Finally a Happy ending..

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

I loved how Sharon just blurted out the I love you cause she was so nervous and Swayam ka reaction was hilarious !! Thank God he made up for it by quickly saying I love you too !! It was a really sweet ending to the SS !!

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TANHA_H

@TANHA_H

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

awesome one yr 👏👏

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Thanks for the pm and loved the end :D wish it wouldn't have ended this soon

Nikki <3

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rega24

@rega24

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Nice update, keep going😃 And thnx for the pm😊

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

just readed chappy 3 nd last part with epilogue...
awesome part..
loved it..
beautifully written...
u r fabulous writer...
thnx for pm
sorry for late comment

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

This was just perfect end to this awesome SS. Love changes people but I am glad that that rule doesn't applies to these two. The way you showed the confusion, the fear in both of their heart bin the begining and then followd it with confession was just amazing. The entire sequnce was beautiful put and the way Sharon said - this is so cheesy when it started to rain was just amusing. Good to see the kiddo returns to finally see his pupil succeding :P And then the awkward sielnece to their playfulness everything was just perfect. The end was without doubt beautiful. Loved this SS. And totally enjoyed reading it.

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#170

Beautifully shown the new start of journey SwaRon started with. I liked how you kept the essence of your SS..the part about being friends and falling in love is bound to give some confused feeling and nervousness. I liked how Sharon just came out with her feeling all of a sudden and how Swayam reacted was nicely done.

Thanks for the PM and sorry for being late with my comments.