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Heya😃
I liked yesterday's episode. Last two episodes were quite paced from story point of view but I have some grievances from direction and dialogue writing. In high drama situations, like yesterday, dialogue writer writes some heavy dialogues. For example yesterday Aarti's dialogues with Mrs. Mehta. The Mumbai scene where Yash-Aarti met Mrs Mehta, started off so well and then IDK why I lost the anxiety in between. Direction could have been better when Aarti was shown convincing Mrs. Mehta with those backword steps.
PV director is maestro with dramatic scenes. I still remember Ansh kidnapping, flood scene etc. They all were amazingly directed and executed. Execution by actors is always good but with heavy and bulky dialogues at times when person should use quick and convincing words. It make actors somewhat less convincing.
Dialogue writer seems writing best dialogues for Yash-Aarti conversation in personal. I really like their bedroom scenes and their personal chats. There I see some freshness. They don't deliver heavy dialogues to express concern or love. They all are so realistic.
But in drama, I think that there is some lag in good dialogues. Just my observation!!
Plus courtroom scene could have been much well directed. Paridhi's courtroom hearings seemed more convincing to me when they weren't shown and only end results were conveyed through Pankaj. Yesterday we saw actual proceeding and it disappointed me. Just a flaw I found. Nothing much.
That's all!! Just wanted to draw out!!😳
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