Just two things!! :)

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Heya😃
I liked yesterday's episode. Last two episodes were quite paced from story point of view but I have some grievances from direction and dialogue writing.

In high drama situations, like yesterday, dialogue writer writes some heavy dialogues. For example yesterday Aarti's dialogues with Mrs. Mehta. The Mumbai scene where Yash-Aarti met Mrs Mehta, started off so well and then IDK why I lost the anxiety in between. Direction could have been better when Aarti was shown convincing Mrs. Mehta with those backword steps.

PV director is maestro with dramatic scenes. I still remember Ansh kidnapping, flood scene etc. They all were amazingly directed and executed. Execution by actors is always good but with heavy and bulky dialogues at times when person should use quick and convincing words. It make actors somewhat less convincing.

Dialogue writer seems writing best dialogues for Yash-Aarti conversation in personal. I really like their bedroom scenes and their personal chats. There I see some freshness. They don't deliver heavy dialogues to express concern or love. They all are so realistic.
But in drama, I think that there is some lag in good dialogues. Just my observation!!

Plus courtroom scene could have been much well directed. Paridhi's courtroom hearings seemed more convincing to me when they weren't shown and only end results were conveyed through Pankaj. Yesterday we saw actual proceeding and it disappointed me. Just a flaw I found. Nothing much.

That's all!! Just wanted to draw out!!😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thabs

woow so nice analysis...

Thanks😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very well put... keep posting your analysis...
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nice post... 👏

i personally liked only two scenes yesterday - the gayatri-paridhi scene and yash-aarti fooling the watchman... we have seen some really good writing and execution in PV and i hope yesterday's episode was just a one off and we get better episodes this week...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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i did'nt notice it much coz i watch only aarya scenes & hear aarya dialogs deeply😳
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Originally posted by: anushaarja

very well put... keep posting your analysis...

Thanks😊
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Thanks😊
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Originally posted by: aanyakunat

nice post... 👏

i personally liked only two scenes yesterday - the gayatri-paridhi scene and yash-aarti fooling the watchman... we have seen some really good writing and execution in PV and i hope yesterday's episode was just a one off and we get better episodes this week...


Thanks...😊
I too liked Parishi-Gaytri scene a lot.😃
Yeah!! I believe we will get bettwe episodes in this week...one or two flaw can be overlooked... 😳
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Thanks😊
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Originally posted by: Iluvkanha_GCian

i did'nt notice it much coz i watch only aarya scenes & hear aarya dialogs deeply😳

awww...😳
AarYa scene was superb..😃

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