FF Virika: Forever and Ever= surprise pg. 92 - Page 59

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kays94

hi guys!!!


Thanks for all your feedback. Just wanted to let you know there's most probably going to be two more parts before I end this story. I understand this is on Virika, but sometimes the writer has some intentions thats why they have to include other people such as virman. And honestly I've was a silent reader on indiaforums for a while, and I didn't know anyone who posted their story regularly. So please keep in mind I do this in between classes, projects, and exams and try to post almost everyday. Anyways I hope you enjoyed this story.


i enjoyes it veryyy much
but will u be writing another one after it?
coz u r a fab writer 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashna1406


i enjoyes it veryyy much
but will u be writing another one after it?
coz u r a fab writer 😉


i might :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello!!!

So I was planning on posting the last part tomorrow, but I can't control myself. This is my most favoritest part in this entire ff. I've made this all entirely on Virika. It would really mean a lot if all of you guys could give me feedback on the ending. I want to have the most comments and likes on this part! I know I'm being selfish but please just go with it :) I'm really excited for you all to read it so here it goes...

THE LAST PART - PART 35

It was the last day before the Vadhera's were leaving back for India. This vacation was the most perfect rest for everyone. Once they went back everyone would be back to their daily lives and busy schedules. Manvi wasn't feeling too well today, so Virat didn't let her go anywhere making her rest as they would have a long flight to catch the next afternoon. Both of them as well as Dabbu, Shlok, Viren, Jeevika, and Gia hung out poolside enjoying the beautiful weather. The girls laid on the recliners while the guys went inside the pool. Gia got jealous as she loved the water, so Virat eventually brought his niece in as well.

viren - "Virat, I need one favor from you"

virat - "Yeah bhai, whatsup?"

viren - "Actually I planned a surprise for Jeevika tonight and I was wondering if you could keep Gia with you tonight."

virat - "Yeah bhai, no problem. But what have you planned"

Viren quietly told Virat everything making sure the two biggest gossipers, Dabbu and Shlok, wouldn't hear their conversation and tell Jeevika. Virat smiled at his brother.

virat - "Very good bhai, way to keep the romance alive. Proud of you"

Viren started blushing a little.

viren - "Okay, I'm going to go back to the room and take Jeevika with me. I'll drop Gia's bag in your room so just make sure you feed her."

virat - "Okay bhai, have fun"

viren - "Thanks!" - he said walking over to Jeevika and Manvi.

viren - "Jeevika lets go upstairs to our room"

jeevika - "But why Virenji?"

viren - "Just come with me"

Viren dragged Jeevika upstairs to their room. He got a package out from the closet and gave it to Jeevika. Jeevika looked at him surprised and opened the gift. It was a long black beautiful gown with beautiful diamond earrings in another small package.

viren - "Okay I'm going take a shower and you change into this. I'm taking you out tonight"

Jeevika just went with what Viren said. She loved the occasional surprises her husband gave her. Viren went to take a shower and as soon as he came out he saw how stunning his wife looked. The black gown made her look so beautiful. She had minimal makeup with her hair half up.

jeevika - "How do I look?"

Viren decided to answer her back with a long kiss. He often did this especially when she just took his breath away.

jeevika - "Virenji, you're looking super handsome in this suit. Even better than our wedding day. But where are we going?"

viren - "I hope so. And we are going relive our marriage"

Jeevka didn't know what Viren meant by that, but she just decided to go with the flow. Viren put his hand out asking for Jeevika's hand. She slowly put her hand on top of Viren's. The both of them walked out of their bedroom and soon exited the hotel. Outside the hotel there was a limo waiting for the both of them. Jeevika was actually surprised Viren booked a limo for the two of them. She had seen many of them in Hollywood and wanted to ride one, but she never told Viren.

viren - "Shall we?"

Jeevika smiled as the driver opened the door for her and Viren. Both of them sat in the limo. Jeevika still kept a firm grip on Viren's hand not letting go. She slowly rested her head on his shoulder and put her arms around him trying to come as close to him as possible.

viren - "You know what Jeevika, if someone where to see you they probably would think that you are a college student over here and won't believe you have a daughter. You're so gorgeous"

jeevika - "And they probably wouldn't be able to tell that my husband is one of the best lawyers, husband, and father in this world"

they both smiled at each other.

Soon they reached their destination. They were in Long Beach, a beautiful city with a beautiful view. The driver opened the door and Viren got out first. He put his hand out helping Jeevika get out. They were standing in front of this huge place that looked more like a hotel than a restaurant. It was called The Skyroom. It looked so lavish and fancy as there was a bright red carpet at the entrance going inside. Viren and Jeevika walked inside and saw how beautiful this place was. They soon reached the elevator and the bellman took them upstairs. Viren went and asked for his reseveration. Someone walked Jeevika and Viren to a private room and then left soon after. Jeevika stood there frozen observing every detail. From the roses to the beautiful table set up. The candles throughout the room. Somehow her husband always exceeded her expectations. She thought that their anniversary date two years ago when she was pregnant was so special, but this totally surpassed it. Viren just observed Jeevika feeling glad he could do something to bring a smile to her face. He then walked her over towards the giant window. Both of them stood there looking at the view. On one side they could see the ocean while the other side they could see the entire city of Downtown with the beautiful city lights.

jeevika - "Virenji, this is absolutely gorgeous. I mean this is the most amazing view and the best part of the trip so far. Thank you for doing this for me, for us"

viren - "Your welcome Jeevs"

They both went to the table then and started eating their dinner. Viren ordered a feast for the two of them. The food was absolutely delicious. And the dessert was even better. Jeevika was taking a bite of the cake when she saw something in the cake. She saw it was a diamond ring and she looked at Viren. How much more could he spoil her? Why did he love her oh so much?

jeevika - "Virenji, what's this for now?"

Viren came close to Jeevika who was sitting on her chair. He kneeled down besides her and took the ring from her hand. He was placing it on her finger.

viren - "Mrs. Vadhera, I don't know if you remember but exactly four years ago we got engaged. And I wanted to recreate that special moment in our lives again. Four years ago, you became mine forever and ever. So I thought that since we are in America, let's do it the American way. I mean in India I didn't get a chance to propose to you, well actually I did"

jeevika - "When?"

viren - "The night you came to Chandigardh for Diwali. So then I decided to propose to you the way I would have had we lived here. I don't think I could be a successful person, or the person I am today without you Jeevika. The day I first met you, you shined every aspect of my life. You gave me a beautiful daughter who makes me feel like a complete man. You gave me every happiness I longed for. I know that both of us didn't come from complete families with my dad not being there and both your parents not their in our lives. But you always managed to make me feel like I had a complete family. You mean the world to me"

Jeevika was super emotional now and had tears in her eyes. She was so overwhelmed by his words, by his feelings for her. She could barely even speak and tell him that she felt the same way. She couldn't even tell him how she was the luckiest girl in the world to have someone like him on her side all the time. For having someone like him father her child. Viren and Jeevika kept on looking into each others eyes. Viren slowly moved his head closer to Jeevika's kissing her tears away.

viren - "Care to join me for a dance?"

Jeevika smiled again and got up and went to the small dance floor in their private room. Jeevika put her hand on Viren's shoulder as he put his on her waist. The music started playing. It was the song A Thousand Years by Christina Perri. They both slowed danced to the beautiful song that perfectly described VIRIKA.


Heart beats fast
Colors and promises
How to be brave?
How can I love when I'm afraid to fall
But watching you stand alone?
All of my doubt suddenly goes away somehow

One step closer

[Chorus:]
I have died everyday waiting for you
Darling don't be afraid I have loved you
For a thousand years
I'll love you for a thousand more

Time stands still
Beauty in all she is
I will be brave
I will not let anything take away
What's standing in front of me
Every breath
Every hour has come to this

One step closer

[Chorus:]
I have died everyday waiting for you
Darling don't be afraid I have loved you
For a thousand years
I'll love you for a thousand more

And all along I believed I would find you
Time has brought your heart to me
I have loved you for a thousand years
I'll love you for a thousand more

One step closer
One step closer

[Chorus:]
I have died everyday waiting for you
Darling don't be afraid I have loved you
For a thousand years
I'll love you for a thousand more

And all along I believed I would find you
Time has brought your heart to me
I have loved you for a thousand years
I'll love you for a thousand more

After the song ended they stopped dancing. Viren brought his face close to Jeevika kissing her. She slowly put both her arms around his neck as he placed both his hands on her waist. They kept kissing as if it was their first time. It was just like their first kiss, at that abandoned house they got stuck at a few days after their wedding. Jeevika slowly put her head down breaking the kiss from Viren.

jeevika - "I love you"

viren - "I love you too"

jeevika - "I actually have a surprise for you too" she said hesitantly

Viren smiled at her.

viren - "I already know what your surprise is"

jeevika - "WAIT! What do you know?"

Viren kneeled down again and kissed Jeevika's stomach.

jeevika - "Virenji, how did you know?"

viren - "I found you pregnancy test in the bathroom"

Viren got up again and kissed her again. He just couldn't get enough of her. Actually the both of them couldn't get enough of each other. They just embraced each other imagining their coming future together. Viren, Jeevika, Gia, and baby number 2!!!!!


THE ENDDD <3 WILL BE WAITING FOR YOUR FEEDBACK
Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
First one to read it's amazing gonna miss reading ur updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
Firstly I cant believe this story is over...I loved the entire story😊
You are an amazing writer 👏 and do write more in the future...
You explain each and every little detail n the story is more real and this makes this FF more special...
Loved this last part...Viren is a sweetheart and Virika are magical and ur ending was just perfect😊
The song really suites virika ...😊
will miss ur updates...but thank you for writing a beautiful story on virika😊

Thanks for the PM...

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMGGG! Lovedd your last part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
ur stories are amazing!!!!! :D I ❤️ them!! thank you for writing these wonderful stories and showering us with virika scenes when we missed them on the shows!!!! Im gonna miss this 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant update...love ur writing👏👏
aww...wat a romantic night!! a magical ending❤️
love ur stories...thanx for writing virika FF😊
hope u continue 2 write more virika FF...
gonna miss ur wonderful stories!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow. The last update was deffo the best one! Way to end with a bang. I think I speak for everybody when I say that we will all miss your updates dearly! I think I will be reading it again just to make up for the lack of Virika lately. Thank you sooo sooo much for starting and continuing it so often! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u for all the pms
just read part 30 to 35, all r damn awesome especially last part, jeevs pregnant again just wooowww...
but its also too sad that the FF is already over :(
hope u come up with some new one when u r free
pm me any new FF u write :)

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