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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am posting my first OS. It also doesn't includes any intimate or first night event.Want your feedback.

A, S and shekhars arrived at Kesarbagh after marriage. All rituals are done. Life is going on its pace. A enjoying her new life with Shiv and family. She is liking the atmosphere which was totally opposite of Singh's. She was very happy. Shiv was on leave for 15 days due to marriage. Now 15 days period is over and it's time to go back to Jetsar. Day before final day, all shekhars were sad bcoz alogwith S, A will also go. They will miss her. Ghar ki chahal pahal khatam. Everyone was thinking if it is possible to A to spend some more days wid them. Let S go but CM insists now it would b difficult for S living W/O A. But daddu took initiative and asks S if it is possible if A can stay back for some more days. Abhi Mann nahi bhara. S first hesitates but later on agreed that A will stay back for 10 more days and he'll go. He'll b back after 10 days to take back A. Everyone is happy except S and A but they're keeping their family happy. S arrived Jetsar and involved in his job. Singhs were taking care of him but he was missing A badly. Same was happening to A. Shekhars were keeping her happy but A missed S badly. During the period of 10 days, A realised her feelings towards S, understood how difficult for her to live W/O S. 10 days over and S was coming back to take A back to jetsar. He called Mahi to convey all that he'll reach udaipur by night. Mahi conveyed. Everyone is happy and A was super happy. She was eagerly awaiting for the night to come. But this wait was diff. S called Mahi again that he will reach by noon and he wants only A at house and nobody else. Its Mahi's duty to take all members out leaving A alone at the house. He'll call Mahi back home later. Mahi said ok but how to persuade A to stay back at home. S said it's ur problem. Think and do. After one hour, he'll reach Udaipur. U can tell this to all and think any plan but let A know that he's coming early. Mahi agreed. He took daddu's help nd everyone decided to go out leaving A alone. It was diff though as A was also eager to join but daddu ordered her to stay back as she's to pack her stuff nd prepare dishes for Shiv. All gone. A alone at house started packing her stuff but alone was terrible for her as feeling of S coming home excited her. She was flying high due to her happiness. Suddenly door bell rang. A opened door. S was standing there. A rubbed her eyes if she was dreaming but no S was actually there smiling at her. she couldn't controlled her feelings and hugged S with tears in her eyes (Khushi ke tears). S was not expecting this. S gave surprise to A and in return he also got surprise from A and that so lovely suprise. S hugged her back. A suddenly came into senses and said" sorry for that i forgot to even let u inside, to give a glass of water". S has also his eyes moist. He entered the house thinking abt whatever happened. A went towards kitchen suddenly S hold her hand and dragged her towards him. He hugged her back tight and lift her up. Both were lost. S said this judaai was terrible. Everything, everyone was there but not u. Now i wont let u go far from me. U will stay wid me 24*7*365. I wont let u go far from me for a single day. Then S called back Mahi to come bacl. Shekhars came back. All were happy. Next morning, A and S started their journey towards jetsar to lead a life with each other forever.

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Chinmay92 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey that was so nice and cute yaar. I loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey... Its very sweet, simple nd beautiful os, 👍🏼 , very good start dear 👏 ,aisehi sweet os likhte rahena
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Hey its sweet dear😛 do continue😊

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