Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Edited on pg 3 and am really sorry for unresing so late. I do not normally do that. You can ask the authors I spam and stalk...

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Edited:

The first chapter is Khushi:

A simple, educated, girl with the so called "middle class" values who wants to taste freedom and give wings to her dreams. Probably I shouldn't generalize but this is an average Indian girl who wants to stand for everything modern and yet is rooted to tradition. (Am I reading too much here?)

The second chapter is Arnav:

A "flawed" man according to the traditional standards. Is in a physical relationship with his girlfirend, smokes, doesn't believe in marriage, etc etc. Yet is loyal towards his girlfriend, whatever he says he cares for his naani... So is traditional that way (Again am I reading too much here?)

Both your chapters are defined by pre-marital sex. Arnav's and Khushi's different takes on it helps in understanding the contrasting characterizations.

Am waiting for the next update. Hope to see it soonish.

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

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K is HERE

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Now, first things first, this a nice take on Payal and Akash, I have always felt they were a couple who could add to the core Arhi story but never got their due, no complaints here. I like your line on premarital, sounds so relatable to the thinking of a small town girl. Khushi is such a believable character here; you want her to succeed in life. I hope she has a wonderfully challenging and loving life.

Arnav is skillful and I must say, tastefully written and that will never be a cause for concern. Lavanya always gets a raw deal, but that is life, one never gets what they want in life.

Great update K, now I have to demand the next one.

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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
Edited on pg 3 and am really sorry for unresing so late. I do not normally do that. You can ask the authors I spam and stalk...

Dont worry hun. Im not too fixated on such things. So take your time. I appreciate that you took time to read and comment.

Where is Lazy Patha BTW? Havent seen her around in the last 2 dfays.

P.S- I have started reading 'Finding Solace', I'm hooked. Hope to finish reading the updates by tonight and I will comment.

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blue.kindle

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Posted: 13 years ago

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OMG! Yes OMG! Are we going to have a love triangle? I hope Viraf is Mr Right for Khushi after ASR acts his usual self, meaning a jerk. 😆

My pankhi radar picked up his name and came running to read the update. I am dying! You are enjoying this, no? Keeping us on tenterhooks. 😆 I am sold, completely. Bas. Now this is making me wish for Viraf and SI pairing even more. Why did they end the show? 😡 So much potential lost.

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boreddamsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

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res. Will read soon!

Ok, first NB, I saw you dedicated the story to my .. I mean our .. hottie 😳 Mwwahhh for that! 😃

First part:

I loved it.. this is the first story of yours I am reading.. i loved the way you write.. so detailed and concise at the same time. In the first part, you described so much in such a small part. Ok I make no sense 😆 I mean basically you have caught my attention! I am definitely hooked! 😃 Well to be honest you had me at the prologue itself.. wonder whose kid that is.. The Viraf pankhi in me hopes its Arnav's kid and Viraf is willing to accept Khushi nevertheless 😳

Second part:

Again.. loved it. One part to describe Arnav.

I am already waiting for the next part(s)!!! Hugs!

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Smriti

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Great characterization of Arnav. And the make out scene was just fine, erotic and right amount of details w/o gore. :)))

Lavanya wants more from this reltationshpi and Arnav wont give it to her. He knows he is denying her for his reasons. That gives me hope that there is a knowing, feeling human in there.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Loved those two update!!😃
Khushi's and Arnav's ideologies are so completely different.
I am glad that Lavanya is not in denial about their relationship.
Arnav on the other hand is the typical man because he lnow exactly what she wants but is pretending he does not. Don't rush the meeting, take your time😆