TANHA HEN HUM...updated part 13 pg 53 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago

UV: RISHI today i will kill u and start hitting hm and rishi starts

runing

Rishi while runing : are yar Uv is me meri kya ghalti he . Mujhe thori na pata the k u didn't wish hr yet .

He hide behind geet: geet yar tu mujhe pit ty hove dekh rai he bachana yar apne is rakhshas bhai se.

Uv: princess samne se hato aj tu is ki kher nai

Geet: dada maaf kardo na bichare ko ghalte ho gai age se nai ho gi.

Uv: ye or bechara iski tu me

And again try to hit hm

Geet: dada plz or apne mujhe wish b nai kiya.

Uv making sad face: ok

Geet: i love u

And kiss hs cheek

Uv smiles and hug hr: my cute little doll , happy birthday and love u to

Uv breaking hug

Ok let me meet hm atleast itne dino bad aya he let me hug hm.

He said this while giving a dadly glair to rishi and a cute smile to geet

While rishi was gulping hard and shaking hs head in denial

Geet : ok ap baat karo

And she went to meet hr brothers

Rishi try to run but Uv holds hm in a bone crushing hug and squiz hm hard

Rishi was unable to breath: uv. . . kya kar raha he . . .yar jaan le ga kya.?

Uv breaking the hug: beta tu mujhse tu bach gaya par tujhe princess se kon bachai ga?

Rishi: kya matlab?

Uv: wo tu tujhe abi pata chal jai ga

Uv came towards geet: princess u know rishi gets award for his last project, that is why he was gone to mumbai.

But why i m telling this to u tumhe tu isne sab se pehle bataya ho ga hena

Uv smirk knowing very well what is going to happen next and mouthed good luck to rishi.

Rishi cursed hm for ruining hs surprise and making it all worse

Amy to vicky: now rishi bhai is gone .

Geet goes towards hm and start hitting hm : u dhokebaz, donky , ullu, monkey , u said that u r going for personal work and this was ur personal work .

You kanjoos mujhe treat b nai di mujhe bataya b nai ehsaan faramosh mene kitni help ki thi tumhari os project me and u.. I hate u for this

Still wakcing his arm

Rishi: are geet me tu tujhe . . . OUCH. . surprise dena chahta tha par is uv ne sab bigar diya sorry. . . Ouch. . . sorry maaf karde yar plz

Geet still wacking hm: no

Rishi: sorry plz yar

Geet stop hitting hm and turn away still angry

Rishi: geet tu jo treat mange gi na me wo donga or tu chahe tu mujhe punishment b dede par plz maaf karde na.

Geet still angry

Uv came towards hr and said something in hr ear . She smile an evil smile and bichara rishi , he knows that he did a big mistake by asking punishment.

Geet : u want me to forgive u ?

Rishi nods hs head like a kid

Geet: then do sit ups

Rishi : WHAT!!!

Geet: yes or wo b yahan sab k samne

Rishi: geet if u forgot then let me remind u that i m Rishab Rajwansh the famous bussiness man and u want me to do sit ups wo b sab k samne yar meri reputation ka sawal he log kya kahen ge

Geet ignoring hs talks: 10 sit ups

Rishi : me nai karne wala

Geet: 15 sit ups

Rishi panic: geet no plz yar

Geet: 20 sit ups

Veer , amy and vicky came to hm

Veer: rishi time waste mat kar yar warna 100 tak phunch jai gi.

Amy: come on bro just 20 sit ups hi to hen

Vicky: yes bro wese b ye body shody kis din kam ai gi

Geet: 25 sit ups

Rishi: ok ok i will do it.

Geet : hold ur ears and do it

Rishi holds hs ears and start doing sit ups while uv and every one was enjoying and all the other people were giggling at hm.

After making lots of promises and doing extra work out (sit ups) geet finaly forgive hm

Maan reached hs mansion in paris which he bought reacently

He thought about the kiss and touche hs lips

He can still feel her soft petals on hs lips .

A smile covered hs M shaped lips

Maan: Geet i know u still love me agar tum mujhse pyaar nai karti tu mujhe ese apne pas na ane deti

But i know it will take time for u to bleave me, to bleave my love

Par me tumhe apne pyar ka yaqeen dila kar rahon ga and that is my promis to u.

Geet reached home

Geet: Mumma ... Mumma

Swati came and hug her tight and wish her: happy birthday angel

Geet receprocating her hug: thank u mumma and missed u so much

A voice came from behind: han han mujhe tu koi miss hi nai karta hena.

Geet: dad

Geet runs and hug hm tight and he to receprocate lovingly

Dad: kesa he mera bacha?

Geet: i m fine dad

Dad : happy birthday bachha

Geet: thanks dad

they all sit in the living room

pata he me wahan par bore ho gai thi or mene ap logo ko kitna miss kiya . Bro ne tu wahan. . . . . .

And she gose on speaking anything and everything while all the family members listen to hr enjoying hr talks.

After alot of talking they all bid gud night to each other and retired to there room.

Precape:

Maan and geet meeting again

Maan without shirt

Party at the disco

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
loved it
Rishi getting punishment
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
geet has move on with her life
nd poor rishi have to do 25 sit ups in front of public
nd maan scene was cho cheewt
love that scene
all the best maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update...so geet has move on with her life.😊
nice writing...continue soon.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
So Rishi is Vivian.cool.loved his scene.it was funny.Thx4 updating this.precap is so interesting.plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Precap ke liye waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Missing my maan 😭 Pls next time give more of him.

Well,otherwise loved d ruthna,manana,teasing and masti of Geet and friends.
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Posted: 12 years ago
haha..rishi did situps in public..
nice part
all pampering geet..
precap..interesting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update dear
it was nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm

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