MAYUR FF:A New Hope-A New Dawn Pg-16;Update-4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys this is me Ishika.😊Well I have written this OS on my favourite couple Mayur.😳I thought of posting it over here.Its my first attempt..If you like it then I will continue...feel free to comment😳

A New Hope-A New Dawn

Nupur's lips became white as if she had received a massive blow & her jaws trembled. But still she made her face to remain calm and composed. She just gave a bewildered look to Samrat.

"Oh really! How do you know"? asked Nupur

"Well Mayank told me! He was really very happy that at last he is getting engaged to Rashi. He didn't tell you! That's strange!" said Samrat with a curious look in his face

"That's great news!" exclaimed Nupur, not ready to believe what she had just heard."No he didn't tell me..maybe he will tell later" said Nupur boldly.

Her heart ached ..as if it has been broken into pieces. Samrat went on with his conversation. But throughout the whole conversation Nupur looked towards the ground. Her mind raced with many thoughts and so she was not at all listening to what Samrat said. At last she said-

"Oh Samrat, thanks for sharing this hot news! Mayank will definitely get a spank from me for not telling his best friend first. Now I will have to hurry or I will get late for Shukla sir's class! I will meet you later..till then bye" left Nupur with a smile.

"Okay,bye" Samrat said.

When Nupur left, Samrat thought "Why she was so quiet throughout the whole conversation? Did I said something that upset her? But she looked fine to me at first. God I cannot understand this girl sometimes" sighed Samrat and got up from the staircase.

Nupur went to the locker room. She was on the verge of collapsing but took hold of the wall to regain her composure.

"How can he do this !"cried Nupur."How can he choose Rashi.He loves me I know that!Yes I have seen in his eyes!He loves me a lot!" saying all these Nupur sat on the floor and wept inconsolably.She heard some girls entering the locker chatting and giggling among themselves."They must not be aware of all this"Nupur said to herself.She got up on her legs,wiped off the tears as much as possible."Hey Nupur,what are you doing over here??You missed Shukla sir's class yaar!"Nupur"Oh I missed it deliberately! I am not feeling well". The girls asked "what happened?"Nupur"Just headache.May be because I got drenched in rain yesterday.Okay now I am going home,will see you guys later."

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--MySecret-- thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
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To (personal joke 😆😉)
Congratulations on posting your 1st OS!!!!!!đŸ„łđŸ„łđŸ„ł
I am sooo happy i could be the 1st one to comment!!!😃😃
It was a great OS!!⭐ totally liked it...and is eagerly waiting for the next update!!!😃
Mayur is one of my fav couple too...ad i am so glad you are writting an OS on them!😳😳
Do continue it soon!😊😊
Will be waiting for your next update!! ⭐
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Edited by --MySecret-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ishiii you wrote a OS on Mayur ?

omg res!!!

Edit : sorry Ishi , I really do need a diary to keep track of my res's 😆


Coming to your OS , I didn't know you were a writer 😳 Fabulous start , who is this Rashi 😆 Continue soon 😳
Edited by likaboss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start dear...
well..looking forward for the next part...
-SupriyaluvsMN- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc start dear!😃
wud luv 2 read more!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey!!! My new buddy!!!
Well a new os on my favorite couple mayUr.. I'm very much excited..
Great starting..
MayUr are best friend and Nupur loves Mayank..
Nupur thinks that mayank loves her too, if it is so then why mayank is getting engage with Rashi???
I know I can only find my answers in your next updates..
So update soon..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --MySecret--

To (personal joke 😆😉)
Congratulations on posting your 1st OS!!!!!!đŸ„łđŸ„łđŸ„ł
I am sooo happy i could be the 1st one to comment!!!😃😃
It was a great OS!!⭐ totally liked it...and is eagerly waiting for the next update!!!😃
Mayur is one of my fav couple too...ad i am so glad you are writting an OS on them!😳😳
Do continue it soon!😊😊
Will be waiting for your next update!! ⭐
From 😆


Your comment was much needed!😃But I never expected this...we are displaying our pagalpanti to the whole worldđŸ€Ł

Thanks for liking it so much dearđŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shafyyy

nice start dear...

well..looking forward for the next part...


Thanks for appreciating😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: likaboss

Ishiii you wrote a OS on Mayur ?


omg res!!!


Oh no I knew it!😆Unres it soon😳...or...😡


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

nyc start dear!😃
wud luv 2 read more!😳


Thanks for liking it😃

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