Pyaar tune kya kia...kr ss...Pt 2 PG 11

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Sooo m here vid a new ss...hope u all lyk it...


I wont update dis b4 finishing sm of my works!!!...


Soo scroll down for character sketch!!!...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH

Kria ghai



She was a sweet cheerfull girl...a diva of her school..her passion was dancinging and singing...was very kiddish with her friends and family...boys used to die to talk to her...but she loved only one person her boyfriend and bestfriend reyaansh singhaania...people think she died in a car accident!!!...

Angel kapoor (above pic is for kria as well as angel)

In reality she is kria ghai...but has hidden her identity...loves rey alot and is hurt to see her rey shattered... she prefers to stay alone and still loves dancing and singing..she is still kiddish from inside but acts mature from the outside only her family knows that their daughter kria and angel are the same...

Reyaansh singhaania..


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The cool dude of his college...was an ever-smiling guy but lost his smile when he got to know that kria was no more... .sharon is his cousin and the only person who knows about his and kria's relation...he has many times felt that angel is his kria but shrugs it off as angel's behaviour is completely diffrent from kria!!...cares alot for angel and helps her out whenever she is in a problem...dance and singing is his passion jst lyk kria...

Sharon raiprakash...



The diva of her college..loves only one guy and thats swayam her boyfriend...has a gut feeling that angel is kria and is always behind her to find some clue but dosent get any...missess her bestfriend kria alot and is sad the way angel ignores her...dance is her passion...

Swayam shekhawat...



A boy next door...dosent know anything about who was kria and dosent bother...rey is his bestfriend...loves sharon alot...is always their for angel whenever she needs help and rey is not their...treats her like his small sister...and can shout at anyone even the principal *:P* if they shout at angel...dance is his passion...

Hope u all lyked d cs..

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago
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Umm few things b4 d update..

1.Mein angel nd rey ko kriyaansh hi bulaungi...cuz i cnt find any name fr bth of dem...and dt goes fr krisha and kriyam as well...
2.The blue part is flashback...


~~PART 1~~

It was another new day in st.louis..rey and swayam were talking in the locker room...while the other boys were doing nothing just sitting...on the other hand...the girls were talking about the latest fashionable clothes and vishakha as usual was out of all these things...sharon who got irritated by their fashions talks went and sat beside vishakha...

Sharon-Maana i love to be up to darte in things about fashion but that dosent mean ki jab dekho iss nanhi se jaan ko fashion mein yeh in hain and fashion mein yeh out hain ke questions puchte puchte tang karo!!...
Vishakha laughs...at that time angel came inside...she as usual was lost in her own sweet world...sharon saw that and went to her...

Sharon-Angel!!...
Angel looked at sharon and walked to her locker..
Sharon-Hey toh bol dia karo miss.sad girl!!...the diva is talking to you!!..
Angel closed her eyes and turned making an angry face...
Angel-Yeh diva attitude apni bestfriend ko dekhana mujhe nahi!!!...

Saying so she went...but had come back to take her things...the girls had now stopped talking...sharon dint see her and was lost...she slowly said...

Sharon-Bestfriend ko hi toh dekha rahi hun...lekin jab wahi nahi maanti toh meri kya galti hain!!...

Angel looks down...a tear escapes her eyes...but she wiped it and took her books ignoring sharon's words...she went away...she was sad and dint see rey coming from the other side with swayam...and even reyam dint see her as they were talking to each other...and due to this kriyaansh clashed and angel was gonna fall but landed in rey's arms who had immediately held her...swayam smirked seeing this..angel opened her closed eyes...and looked at him...they both were having an eyelock which was broken by swayam...kriyaansh look at him and then at their position...angel's hand were around rey neck...rey made her straight and she moved back...

Angel-Thanks...
Rey-Your welcome...
Swayam-Angel...tum ro rahi ho??...kissi ne kuch bola??...
Angel nods in a no...
Angel-Aakh mein kuch chala gaya pakka...class ke liye late ho raha hain bye...
Rey-Hum logon ko ek hi class mein jaana hain kri...*he stops and angel looked up in shock*..angel!!...
Angel-Ya chalo...

They all went...angel as usual sat behind...swayam sat next to her in front of them was sharey...sharon was lost in her own sweet world of swayam...while rey was lost in angel and kria...and swayam was lost in sharon's world...while tears were rolling down angel's cheek...suddenly swayam turned and saw that...

Swayam-Angel...
Sharey came out of their dreamland and look at kriyam...they saw the tears in her eyes...swayam wiped her tears...
Swayam-Angel...kya hua??..
Angel-Kuch nahi swayam...i swear...
Swayam-STop lying...bestfriend maanti ho na mujhe??...
Angel nods...
Swayam-Bolo kya hua??..
Angel-Lag gayi haath mein...yeh dekho...
She showed him a small cut...
Swayam-Angel...your so kiddish dara dia na mujhe!!...

Hearing the word kiddish angel stiffs...while sharon and rey were sad...the three went into flashback...

Kria and sharon were talkin with each other in sharon's room..they were in class 9...kriyaansh had not confessed their love till now and just thought that they were bestfriends...rey was chatting on his phone...when kria screamed...rey looked up and ran to sharon's room...he saw kria crying and ran to her...

Rey-Baatcutter kya hua??...why are you crying??...
Kria-Haath mein lag gayi!!...
Rey-Kaise??...show me your hand...
He takes it and saw a small cut...it was not even bleeding...
Rey-Kria??...chote bacche bhi itne chote cut se nahi rote...
Kria hearing that starts crying more badly...
Kria-Your mean rey!!...mere haath mein lagi hain rey..
Sharon-Haan rey,...dekho kitna dard ho raha hoga isse...*in a sarcastic tone*...
Kria pouts..
Kria-Mat baat karo mujhse tum dono...mein jaa rahi hun...

She got up and was going when rey went to her...
Rey-Arre baba...sorry...*holding his ears*..
Kria-No..
Rey-Kria please na...
Kria smiled at him and hugs him...rey holding her tight...
Rey-Your so kiddish!!...
Kria hits him playfully...while sharey laughed...

Abhi toh itna hi likh paayi..next mein can love happen twice hi karungi...
Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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character sketch are amazing and loved ... 😃😃😃😃😃... update res soon...
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amazing CS
1ST PART PLZ JALDI
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WOW Awesome 👏
Update Soon & Plzz PM Me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice cs.. update soon. pls update cn love happen twice ..?? eagerly waiting 4 any of ur updates..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting cs...
plz update soon n plz pm me...
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very awosm 😃
waiting 1st chp update soon plzzz 😃😃
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Superb cs and thanks for the pm :D can't wait for you to continue

Nikki <3

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