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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
totally different n awesome concept..loving it..specially da flashback👏 update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsm cs n chap...
loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyccc concept ishana... continue sooon...

srry late comment krne ke liye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
interesting chappy!
pls update soon nd yeah pls pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
@kriyaanshfreva: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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M so sorry guys i dnt think i cn handle so many stories at once so i am finishing this story in this update...really very sorry but i cant help it...cuz abhi yeh tutions ne bhi dimaag block kar dia hain...


~~PART 2~~


Days passed...angel used to ignore the two of them...hurting them alot...one day...sharey were passing the rehersal hall when they heard a guitar tune and entered and saw angel...she was playing the guitar her eyes closed...swayam was in front of her...

Aaja teriyaan duaawan lagiyaan
Rab ton main ajj vi ladiyaan

Aaja teriyaan duaawan lagiyaan
Rab ton main ajj vi ladiyaan

She stopped..

"Bas itna hi aata hain abhi"

She said looking down...

Sadi gali aaja saanu chahan waliye
Sadi gali aaja saanu chahan waliye
Sadi gali aaja saanu chahan waliye
Tennu ho..kah marda phiran

Kriyam looked up and rey entered...he was looking at angel...she looked away...knowing that it was their favourite song..sharon sat beside swayam...and smiled at him...

Ik waari aaja door jaan waliye
Ik waari aaja door jaan waliye
Tenu hokah marda phiran
Tenu hokah marda phiran
Ho tenu ho..kah marda phiran


Rey was singing these lines sitting in front of the cliff...where his baatcutter had met with that accident...he wished she would come back once and wished that she was their listening to his cries...on the other hand of the rock was angel sitting their and just listening to his cries...while tears rolled down her cheeks...

Lagdi tu kyun door da khwaab
Lagdi tu kyun door da khwaab
Akhiyan cho wag payaan

Rey was walking with Sharon when he saw angel with swayam...she looked at him...he saw the same innocent eyes which his baatcutter had...his heart told him that angel was his kria but his mind refused to accept it...they both were close to each other but yet so far...he noticed the tears welding up in kria's eyes..

Ab dil main lagana tere naal
Dil main lagana tere naal

Rooh nu vasaja seene loun waliye
Ik waari aaja door jaan waliye

Tenu hokah marda phiran
Tenu hokah marda phiran
Ho tennu ho..kah marda phiran




Rey entered the rehersal hall and saw angel dancing...he could not control his urge and went to her...they danced and rey sang these lines while lifting her up...they both looked at each other as rey bought her down...angel closed her eyes as rey moved forward...they both were going to kiss..But realisation struck angel and she pushed him away and ran away from their...while rey he just fell on his knees while he sang those lines...

Ho ho ho...
Chitthiyaan ton mitthi teri yaad aayi
Aaya ni sajna mera
Kattiyaan jo raatan kalle bhul na paayi
Dil vich vasna tera...


Angel sat in her room...crying while writing her diary...she heard a horn of the car and looked out just to see some guy coming to pick up her neighbour...she was singing those lines while she remembered how rey used to pick her up when they went out for dates

Rab tennu maneya khair chahn waliye
Ik waari aaja dur jaan waliye
Tenu hokah marda phiran
Tenu hokah marda phiran
Ho tenu ho..kah marda phiran

Rey sat in his room looking at his and kria's pictures...he closed his eyes when the scene flashed in his mind...they both were in a car coming from a party...rey was driving the car..when he lost control of the break as soon as he got to know that he had pushed kria out of the car...he somehow survived the accident but kria died or thats what he was told..."KRIAAA"...he shouted...and broke down...

It was the day when the accident had occurred..rey again visited the place but was shocked to see kriyam their...

"Tum mujhe yaha kyun laayi ho angel?..and why were you crying?."

"Yeh jagha mere tears ki reason hain swayam..aur aaj iss hi jagha par do saal pehle meine apna sab kuch kho dia tha..sab kuch"

"What do you mean?."

"Mera naam angel kapoor nahi hain..my real name is kria..kria ghai..jo do saal pehle iss khayi mein gir kar mar chuki hain"

"What!!...nice joke angel!!..."

"Seriously swayam...mein kria ghai hi hun...dont worry mein mari nahi hun..i aint her ghost or something...meine bas apni identity chupayi tumse aur.."

"Aur?."

"Rey aur Sharon se"

"Why angel??..i mean kria??"

"Kria ghai...sharon raiprakash ki best friend and reyaansh ki girlfriend...a stupid kiddish girl jisse bas kuch bolna tha and voh usske saamne aa jaata tha...i was the luckiest person...but farewell ki raat ko when me and rey were returning...rey ki gaadi ka break fail ho gaya iss cliff ke paas and the car went out of control...rey ne mujhe bahar phek dia and his car hit the rock...mere par ek bahot bada pathar gir gaya tha...all i saw before loosing my conscious was that rey ki gaadi puri crumble hogayi thi...jab hospital mein hosh aaya toh pata chala ki mein kabhi chal nahi paaungi...aur rey survived the accident...i was happy that rey was alright...lekin meine usski aur emir family ko request kia ki Sharon aur usse yeh keh de ki i am dead...kyunki i could not face them like that i just couldn't...do saal baad i was able to walk again..meine decide kia ki mein rey aur Sharon ko confront karungi lekin jab st.louis pahochi unn dono ko itna tuta dekh kar i couldn't..i was very guilty"

Swayam side hugged kria as she cried in his arms...rey who heard everything was numb...he din't know whether to be happy or sad..happy that she was alive nd alright or sad that she lied to him and he could not be beside her when all she needed was him...he sat in his car and went from their...he knew what he had to and he was ready for it...

The next day

Kria entered the college...she went to the fire escape but heard sharey...

"Uss behenji ko lagta hain ki humein nahi pata voh kria nahi hain"

She heard sharon's voice

"Seriously...bechaari ko lagta hain ki i am still waiting for her...and i still love her...oh please...usse toh theek se chalna bhi nahi aata hoga ab why would i be with her"..

Kria was shocked...sharey laughed and bithced about her...kria ran away from there in tears...she just hugged swayam and cried in his arms..sharey came...kria was telling him what happened...he broke the hug and pulled kria away...he went their...

"Rey's right kria..tum jaisi ladki ke saath kaun rahega??...b***h"

Kria was numb...she looked down...rey went to her...and made her look at him...

"Bahot dukh hota hain na kria...jisse tum sabse zyaada pyaar karte ho wahi tumhe hurt karke chala jaata hain...i loved you dam it..aur tumne mujh par trust bhi nahi kia...ek baar bolkar dekhti...ek baar...i would have solved everything...humara pyaar itna weak tha i never knew"

"Rey meri baat"

Kria understood that it was his plan of making her feel hurt...

"Bas kria bas...not anymore...mein do saal tumhaare bina jee chukka hun ab humesha ke liye bhi jee lunga...ab tum samajh lo ki tumhara rey mar chukka hain..reyaansh singhaania died in that accident"

Saying this he pushed her behind and went from their...while kria she broke down...

"You deserve it kria you deserve it"

Saying this even Sharon went..but swayam he went to her...she hugged him and cried...

"I deserve it"..

She said after awhile...and wiped her tears..

"Mein unn dono ko aur hurt nahi karungi...i am leaving swayam...bye forever...rey ko bol dena...usski ek wish toh puri karungi hi mein and tell him that i loved him more then myself"

After that...both kriyaansh left the college...they were not gonna look back...both were hurt and both were guilty...they thought they failed the test of love so they decided to never cross each other's life again...

Khatam...i know bahot log mujhe juta maarna chahte ho..but guys isska koi epilogue nahi...isske liye mere paas ek surprise hain..but voh surprise ke liye you all have to wait...hope u enjoyed the update...for pms buddy me...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
res

unres

such a sad endinggg😭

but beautifully written👏

pls write an epilogue for ittt😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
M nt liking nr commenting on this update.
Tune dil tod diya isme mera.
Huh.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
awesome update..
really loved it..
it was nice.. 👏👏👏

thnk u for the pm do pm me next time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Lovely update :-) KriYam scene was really sweet

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