MAANEET SS HEAVEN IN HELL THREAD-1 - Page 16

m happy fr maan...he got his family back...but behind both d brothers villains r already dere...nthing should happen to dem...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Overwhelmed to see the emotional Maan and Guru.And d family reunion was also touchy.When Annie hug Maan it was really teary.And in between all this the cute,naughty geet,loved her and d update.

Awesome


Maan n Guru's reaction ws so natural. Superb...


Maan's view abt Geet havn't been disclosd yet.

Conti soon plz

maan met his guru

part 8
awesome...
wow seeing this change in Maan is so nice...
and Geet shes too good...
cont soon dear...

nice ff

H2 - 9

They all reached GH, Geet and Ani

Ani : Maan bhai tis is our home

Maan nodes

Dadi : our Gh Ani

Geet : GH then ur home in delhi will be so bigger than tis

Dadi : yes Geet but our home

Geet bite her tongue : sorry Dadi

Dadi : its ok beta they went inside,

Geet and Ani like a small kid was so excited to see everything.

Dadi : Geet , Ani cum here

Geet and Ani went and stood beside Dadi who was standing in front of huge portrait

Dadi : Ani tis is ur maa papa

Ani had tears in her eyes and touch te photo, Maan and Guru to came there, Guru touched they parents photo, and started to cry.

Dadi : Geet cum here and light ur ur laws photo

Geet had tears in her eyes seeing her laws photo : ji Dadi

Geet light te candle and touch they feet to take they blessings.

They all sat in te living room

Dadi : I will arrange dinner, our family dinner

Geet : Dadi can I cook dinner for everyone

Dadi smiles at her : sure beta tis is ur home, every one should follow ur order, wat ever u want u can do

Geet : then ok I will cook and she started to run to kitchen

Dinner ,

After 20 years khuranas is having they family dinner. Dadi sat on te head chair, Maan and Guru on one side and Ani and Geet one side. Geet served every one, Maan was so shocked to see all his favs. He look at Geet

Geet smiles : maanji all Guru ka fav

Guru : not only mine Geet Maan too love Italian

Maan looks at Guru and Guru smiles at him.

They all started to have they food, Maan love te taste , after long time he is having full stomach. After they finished they dinner, they all went to they rooms to take rest

Guru didt get sleep as he was thinking why Maan was so silent, he wants to know wat is going . still he didt utter single word , Guru wants to be with Maan now,

Guru went to kitchen to prepare black coffee, and went to Maan's room

Guru enter Maan's room and saw him standing near te window looking at te moon

Guru kept his hand on Maan's shoulder

Guru : Maan wat u searching our happiness

Maan turns to see Guru,

Guru : pls Maan talk to me, I cant see u like tis, its paining Maan , its paining, I failed to protect my siblings. Our parents will be happy today to see they kids together but wat happen to u I know I was not there wen u need me most , but wat to do I thought if I cum to u , they will harm u too, tats why I hide me and Ani . but now I came to know wat I did was a big mistake, were I lost my Maan I lost my Maan forever, pls Maan cum to us, I need u, pls

Guru started to cry and hugs him

Guru : pls talk to me Maan

Maan : wat to say Guru

Guru looks at him

Maan : wat to say here im enjoying all te luxury but u and Ani, te way u both living ur life in these years , no Guru u didt fail , u protect me tats why u left me, but me te one who didt protect his siblings, his family from harm. I became alone Guru, I lost every thing, I thought every one left me, but after seeing u I don't have words to say, our princess, I saw her as 6months baby, but now, I lost every thing her small wish, her smiles her dreams everything I lost. I lead my life as a lifeless soul, but wen my life came back to me, I cant feel it wat to do Guru, wat to do Dadi will say I don't have heart , tat why im not feeling ur presence I think so

Guru hugs him

Guru : dare u say my Maan don't have heart, if he does't then tears wont cum from ur eyes Maan,

Till then Maan didt realizes tat tears is flowing from his eyes.

Guru wipes his tears : ok leave all tat now cum we have coffee

Guru took Maan to te bed and both had they coffee

Maan : Guru can u stay with me today

Guru : no way

Maan looks at him

Guru : not for today but forever

Guru smiles at him and both slept holding each other

Morning sun rays hit them , but both te khurana brothers sleeping peacefully after so many years holding each other. Ani came to see her Maan bhai and shocked to see her both brothers sleeping together without her, she stomped her foot and went and lye between them in te middle. Maan woke up due to disturbance and saw his princess lying in middle hugging both te brothers , he too hug her and three slept .

Wen dadi came to wake Maan , she was so shocked to see trio was sleeping holding each other like small kids. Who can say te great MAAN SINGH KHURANA, was a small kid.. dadi was watching them with tears in her eyes, Geet too came to see why Dadi was standing near te door, she came and she too was so shocked to see trio. Geet kept her hand on Dadi's shoulder

Dadi : im so happy Geet

Geet smiles at her : Dadi wait a min, she runs to her and came with a camera

Geet : tis happiness should stay for long Dadi and took a photo

Te day was going, as all were busy in marriage preparation.

Evening,

Ani was walking in te garden, and saw Guru was talking in te phone, she got a naughty idea , she took te near by water pipe and smash water on Guru.

Guru was so much shocked : Ani wat is tis, I wont leave u,

He started to chase her.: I wont leave u

Guru got hold of Ani, took te pipe and started to spray on her

Ani : no bhai , pls im sorry

Guru : no way

Ani started to scream : Geettt Geettt

Guru put te pipe : why u always take Geet's name to save u

Geet : coz she is mine

Guru : nodes his head and left Ani and went inside before Geet cums

Geet cums and saw Ani fully wet and was sneezing

Geet : Ani wat is tis, why u playing in rain, u know naa u will get sneezing

Ani : Geet ..ouch .. were is it ouch raining . Guru bhai wet me like tis ouch,

Geet took Ani to her room and dried her

Geet : u be in ur room , I will bring hot soup for u with pepper

Ani : oh no

Geet : oh yes, I will see Guru, how dare he do tis to u

Ani laughs silently : Guru bhai u r gone

Geet went to kitchen, and saw Guru was sitting in hall , she went near to him and wack him on his cheeks.

Geet : how dare u play with Ani, u know naa she will get cold soon if she play with water, she now she is sneezing. Stupid buddhu wait till our marriage afterwards I will show who iam.

saying tis, she going on hitting him on his cheeks, arms, till he holds her hands

Maan : wat te hell

Guru came behind te pillar laughing holding his stomach : oh god Geet

Geet was so shocked and looking at Maan and Guru again and again

Guru : Geet why u slapped Maan , see him, bechare he is shocked

Geet was shocked and kept her palms on her mouth and opened her eyes so wide and so embrassed, she slap Maan thinking him Guru

Guru holding his stomach and laughing , rolling in te couch

Maan was so shocked and spitting fire on her

Geet : im sorry Maan ji cursing Guru under her breath

Dadi and Ani came there and Guru explained wat happen. They both started to laugh

Dadi : Geet really ur so brave, slapping te great Maan singh khurana, who till now no one try to see him face to face. Im so happy tat some one is there to control khuranas

Maan : Dadii, ask her to stay away from me or else

Geet got her sherni mood : hello mister I ask u sorry naa, wat will I do wen u both look same, I mistook u as Guru, for tat wat u will do, or else glaring at him

Maan too started to glare at her

Guru : ok ok now u both stop

Geet : stop, is all coz of u, idiot , I wont leave , she run behind him , Guru runs for his life

Dadi and Ani was laughing and Maan was numb

Here other side

Goon : dada tis time we wont miss him

Shankar : I wont want to take risk, tis tiem I will do it by myself

Goon : but

Shankar : wen is his marriage

Goon : after 2 days

shankar laughs : be ready

PRECAP : FAMILY OUTING


next part- 10

Fabulous di maan let his feelings out
maan and guru slept together peacefully after long time and geet slapped maan thinking him as guru 😆
waiting for nxt

nice update

superb part