MAANEET SS HEAVEN IN HELL THREAD-1 - Page 18

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very sweet part...
maan guru sliping...
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guru promosed maan dat he will with him forever...plz nothing should happen to him...nehi toh maan jee nehi payega...maan plz save guru...

wonderful update...

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H2 - 10



Next day,


Dadi decided to take every one to wedding shopping

Dadi : Maan make urself free we all going for shopping

Maan : Dadi pls don't drag me to ur useless shopping

Dadi : Maan its ur Guru's wedding, so u have to cum



Maan : Dadi pls

Guru : Maan why u denying cum lets go, I too have a company , or I will be alone with these ladies

Geet : hello are u taunting us

Guru : no in teasing tone

Geet : u both are scared to cum with us, don't worry we will look after u both , u wont be lost in te crowd


Maan and Guru stare at her

Geet : both stop staring at me, and get ready, we have to go

Guru : girls wat is there in ur shopping. Always shopping for wat occasions, wedding shopping, birthday shopping, ok it was for u I will accept, but for friends and they sisters , whom ever function, u will go to shopping, im fed up with u girls

Ani : bhai , u r jealous tat we can have so much varities of dress but for u only boring shirts and pants

Guru : don't call us boring, we are not like u peoples selecting for hours , we just need 15 mins

Geet : ok we will do one thing we girls will select for u guys, and u both for us, deal

Guru : deal

Geet : but some one is scared it seems, eyeing Maan

Guru : Maan cum lets show tis girls wat we are

Maan : no Guru im not interested

Geet : I think he is scared

Maan : in MAAN SINGH KHURANA dictionary fear wont exist

Geet mimicks Maan : MSK dictionary fear wont exist, u better show in action rather than words

Maan glares at her

Geet : why u always glaring at me, see one day ur eyes going to pop out ur sockets



Maan : U U U

Geet : u u me wat

Guru : ok ok now u both stop and get ready, Maan u r cuming tats it

All got ready and went to mall for shopping

SHOPPING MALL


Every one went inside

Ani : now bhais u go to girls section and we boys sections



Guru : ok

Geet : one more thing only 30 mins, and we have to select, who take more than tat is loser

Till now Maan was in phone msging some one

Ani took te phone from Maan's hand

Maan : how da, and see Ani

Ani : bhai u scaring me

Maan : sorry princess, and side hugs her

Ani pouting her lips : its ok

Maan holds his ear : sorry



Dadi pinch Guru,

Guru : ouch Dadi why u pinching me

Dadi : te great MSK holding his ears and asking sorry for first time

Maan : Dadi

Guru : Maan I think we have to recommend Oscar award for our Dadi

Maan : u r correct

Dadi : u both are making fun of me, no one on my side

Geet : Dadi how can u say tat, hello both khuranas brother, don't tease my Dadi

Guru : ohhh next drama queen, khurana's bahus all will be like tis only

Dadi and Geet open they mouth to ground




Dadi : but remember u khuranas always depends on drama queens only, so better shut ur mouth

Geet : wat is wrong in Dadi, wen some one is always in khadoos avatar, who don't know wat is smiling , sudden ask sorry means, who ever it is they will get shock

Guru : r u indirectly taunting Maan

Geet smiles : no no im saying directly to Maanji

Maan : better u mind ur words

Geet : no I cant DUST DHANAV

Maan : Dadi ask her to shut her mouth

Geet : I cant wat u will do

Maan : don't dare MSK, OR OR OR

Geet : or or u don't words better than U, HELL , DARE , OR

Maan got frustrated , and left from they

Guru : Geet why u always irritating Maan

Geet : than wat to do, he is always staying alone, he is 25 not 5o. he too have to enjoy his life

Dadi : yes Geet he lost his happiness , im worrying for him only, wat will happen after me,

Every one : Dadi

Dadi : yes beta, he is leaving his life as hell, wen he will have normal life like others

Guru : don't worry Dadi we all there we will bring back as old Maan who love to enjoy small things in his life

Dadi : tat day should cum before my death

Every : Dadi

Geet : Dadi now stop crying, we are there , and now cum we will go inside or else khurana brothers will win



Ani : ah , then bhai only 30 mins

Guru : ok ok , now I have to see were Maan went


Girls went to gents section and Guru went to Maan


Guru saw Maan who was busy in his phone

Guru : Maan don't get angry, she is just teasing u,

Maan : hmmm

Guru : Maan ok then if u didt like tis shopping we will go to GH

Maan : not like tat

Guru : Maan pls cum out of ue shell, I cant see u like tis, it makes me to feel guilty

Maan closed Guru's mouth and nodes his head to no

Maan : not like Guru , I will, and both hugs

Guru : ok now cum we will select, only 30 mins, opps now only 20 mins

Maan : ok cum we will go

They both went to search for te girls

Here girls were busy wat to select, wat to get for them, Geet and Ani were scratching they heads, Dadi was watching te two girls, nodes her head

Dadi : girls are u selecting for u both

Both : no

Dadi : then wat is te problem, wen girls select for them they will take hours, but wen we select for others, 5 mins is enough, tat though for guys, no need 5 mins too, and smirk at them

Geet : oh god Dadi ur so brilliant

Ani : then whose Dadi she is

Three started to laugh


Here, Guru and Maan went to girls section, Guru was so confuse wat to select, Maan just standing beside him


Guru : Maan u r standing as though ur not with me, help me yar

Maan looks for some time and took few sari, and few suits for Ani and Geet,

Maan : tat is it

Guru open his mouth, : are yar wat is tis, u just did in secs, now we will win

Guru drags Maan to girls side

Guru : Dadi cum see we selected ,

Geet : we too


Both looks each others selection


Ani : wow Bhai superb selection,. But whose

Guru : obviously me, raising his collar

Maan glares at him, Guru cleared his throat

Geet , notice tat

Geet : Guru don't buff, I know who did, and I know ur taste

Guru got red handed: ok ok Maan only selected

Geet : now u cum to line, and Maanji u taste is good not like u boring

Maan raised his eye brow

Dadi : yes Maan ur selection is tat bad

Ani : really bhai I loved it, and kiss on his cheeks,

Maan was frozen, and smiles at her, and starts at her, seeing his princess,

Guru cleared his throat: Ani u forgot me

Ani : no way u have ur would be wife to kiss, u ask her

Geet blushes,

Guru : I have no problem

Geet : chi Guru every one are there

Dadi : then if u both are alone means its ok

Geet : Dadi u too

Dadi : ok ok cum lets go for billing then we will go for dinner

Guru : ok Dadi


Every one went to resturatant


Dinner


Maan booked a classic hotel, he booked whole hotel for them

Geet : Dadi why no one is there, Dadi we will go to some other resturtant

Dadi : why geet

Geet : see Dadi no one is there means tis hotel quality is not good , now no customers, I herad Dadi, like tis hotel, they serve yesterday's food, heated again and serve us

Ani : really Geet then naa baba , we are not going to eat here

Three looks at them, and Dadi taps her hand on her head

Guru : buddhu s tis 5 star hotel,

Geet : so wat 5 star hotel means , only they will do like tat things

Guru : Buddhu Maan booked te whole hotel for us

Geet : ohhh

Ani : oh great Maan bhai ur superbbb

They all seated in they seats

Waiter came and took te order

Ani : bhais month once we will cum to dinner like tis

Guru : sure Ani


Food came and they started to have they food,


Dadi, Ani , Geet were talking talking, Guru, and Maan were just listening

Guru : girls how much u talk

Geet : hello and she try to point her finger but by mistake she poured te water on Maan, and close her mouth



Guru taps his hand on his head



Geet : opps sorry sorry Maanji

Maan glares at her : excuse I will wipe it and cum

Guru : Geet why u always irritating him

Geet : wat I will do, I thought to point at u, but by mistake,

Guru : by mistake, but why always bechare Maan

Geet pouting her lips

Maan came and started to have his food

Geet : Maanji im sorry

Maan nodes his head


They finished they dinner and went to GH


Marriage day


Every one wakes up early, and got dressed


Dadi was so happy , standing near Maan's parents phote, tat after so many years good thing is going to happen in they life, and she is crying




Every one came


Geet : Dadi why u crying

Dadi : its due to happiness

Guru and Maan came and hugs Dadi

Dadi : after 20 years we are getting tis happiness

Ani too joins them

Dadi : ok ok now we will move

Geet and Ani : hmmm

Geet and Guru took Dadi's blessing

Dadi hugs both of them and kissed them in they heads

Dadi : ok Guru and Maan u cum fast, we will be waiting

Guru : ok Dadi

Maan : Adi u go with them, and securities

Adi : hmm all ready sir, and we have full security around te church

Maan : hmmm

Dadi took Geet and Ani to church,


In church


Father welcomes them,

Geet bends and took Father blessing

Father had tears seeing his kids are grown up and going to marry

Father : god bless u my child. Hugs her

Father : ok were is Guru

Dadi : he is cuming with Maan Father

Ani took Geet to dress her, and after some time Geet came out

Dadi was so happy to see her bahu: Geet beta u look so beautiful, put tikka behind her ears





Ani : yes Geet if Bhai see u he will be flat

Geet blushes


Here in GH,


Both te brothers came down after getting ready

Guru : wow Maan u look dashing, Geet's selection suits u better than me



Maan stare at him

Guru : yes Maan , Geet selected tis dress for both of us

Maan looks at him, Guru hugs him with tears in his eyes.


ST.JOESPH CHURCH


Outside te church, I black mercedez stops and from tat two dashing khurana brothers get down, holding each other.







They enter te church and Dadi was waiting for them at te entrance.


Both te khuranas brothers enter te church, without knowing they destinty is waiting for them


Dadi and Father welcomes them


Guru got blessing from Father and hugs him

Father : god bless u my child

Guru : father he is my Brother Maan

Father : oh cum my child

Maan came near him

Father touch his head and blessed him

Father : Guru he looks like u, no difference between u both

Every one smiles

Guru saw Geet , and stood mesmerized





Guru and Geet stood seeing each other



Ani cleared her throat: bhai u can look ur Geet afterwards , first we will go inside

Father : ok every one cum inside


They all started to go inside


Suddenly, there was a gun shot


THUDDD



DADI : MAANNN


GEET : GURUU


ANI : BHAIII




PRECAP : OH GOD


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Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovlyyy update.ye geet na hamesha maan ki picchee he rehta hay.chalo maaan come out from the shell.lol they start again in mall.kya bat hay.finally marringe time.ohhh kya hogaya😲😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the way she was teasing maan...
she s trying to bring him out of the shell..
so guru was shot!!oh no!!guru was so sweet.. i dont want him dead..

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