MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nhi! meri API toh hamesha hi bhttt acchi lagti hain bt kya karein unki anu ko apne api ki 2/3 ffs ek sath parhe bina aj kal accha nhi lagta aur week bhi acche se nhi gujarte hain na so issiliye keh rahi thi sigh!!!

ohk will wait bt jaldi se kuch le kar a jao ap plzzz warna mere weeks ase hi buri guzrengi 😔 sigh!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago



sometimes situations are so against that everyone is right yet nothing is right.

Ruchi~


Chapter:5

It was sun tht disturbed his sleep or the regular alarm of his cell that buzz.. or the extreme ache he was feeling in his body… he doesn't knew…. Wht was the fact it wasn't important….. but opening his eyes he saw sighing reflection of his in the mirror beside him… he doesn't like it be such a loser and a jerk behaving person.. the fact the alcohol always makes u one is the fact he isn't a drunk drinker… now or than for the class for the taste for the fun is good… but to make ur pains go away its a bad choice… cause the moment its gone .. ur sense are back it left u ashamed too… with the added pain physically…

But right now he was looking at him, wht happened to him yesterday, wht the f*** happen to him, why he was behaving like a kid why… why it pained so much to be rejected by a b** she has no class to do so, she can't no way …

Its ridiculous he even cant hear himself cursing her …it make him feel disgust of himself.. this girl has made him go crazy and she is actually making him anywhere on her finger tips… he is feeling being used or why not being used… why he is going so so so into her, that things that she say about him, things she do to him make a strong impact on him strong.. yesterday sumthing that strike him like lightening was he has expectations from her, so high expectations, like the fact that he was having hopes for the time he would have with her… its frightening that she has start defining him.. he doesn't want to move in this all again,.,. he knew its his frt time that he is feeling such and strong impact yet still the after effects can be worse than the one he had previously..

Mayank has been a balanced person, quite yet warm, carefully yet fun loving, and American yet a paka Asian.. he has been brought up more by his granny n mom than anyone.. more by grany.. his mother's mom.. she was woman of substance of ethics, of laws, of truth n false… he has learn all the correct traditions, ethics rules of life from her.. From his granny…

All his life spending in New York he has nothing .. anything like an American, he has, he isn't a saint tht he didn't have gf for just the heck of it, but he was strict in the fact that there are limitations, he has been night life boy love dancing and celebrating all night… climbing is balcony to reach his room, and mostly caught by his mom ..

But he will wao both of them.. … his mom has all the bias affection to him because of the reason tht he is so careful and so correct abt his life and whts wrong n wht right… that there was no need to keep check on his life… and that was the trust that got broken he let them down…. Though it was not all his fault.. he was the one who suffered more on that.. yet still she was his choice..

He was 28 and Sharma's need there son to move on in his life, they need him to clear the doubts… his limitations and reservations being a business tycoon and a fashion house owner has made people to gossip a lot about him, a lot more than he evr though. Being at time claimed as gay, he was always in the spot light of not being a girls man, but he never made it a point.. he was always oky about wht n how he is… not because it didn't mattered to him, it does it always does… he was atimes ashmed by himself, when he cant do all this being it was losing his v*** sharp at 18, or still being a virgin, he was mocked always was.. but sumhwere he cant seems like he was not capable of doing any such thing that seems to be the most important n prideful one … he was always claimed he was different doesn't belong to this world.. he was alien.. and true he feel so tht he is alien cause not a single person of his age he can find to agree on all this.. . He was named made fun of not to much, all girls knowing he is a high catch , yet he knew pretty well wht he was in there eyes behind his back.. even sumwhere his brother his dad and his family also believed and said this always.. yet his mom n grany in a positive way yet still it left him with a strong believe, he isn't one of them.. he isn't..

In all this , whenever he was sad, or confused about the fact is this sumhting bad he has, that he cant sleep with evry girl around him, and many other ways n life style specifications of him…. he doesn't want to have such relationship until he is sure tht he wants his life with her… being married or not was not the question .. yet a true commitment was a must for him… the only person who reminded him he is right and its not easy to have such pure heart n soul in this world was his grany…

Esha came in his life as a business associate after he has lost his grany his best frnd his mentor.. he was feeling alone and was weak, fragile and that was exactly wht made it easy for Esha to cum in him… initially she was his frnd nevr showed any interest in him in any other ways.. and tht was sumthing made him attracted to her, but than she was one of all those he hate…

But one thing he never was able to understand, that despite of all the carefulness and all being checking and perfect where he lacked that he was nevr able to judge her true intentions.. but he even cant doubt her acting skill, she was master at tht, s he not only made him a foul but his whole family…. Everyone…

Sumwhere after that he has started to loss the confidence of judging people and choosing them, sumhwere he has started to question his rights n wrongs, hs blives were shaken and he was declared wrong but than for him lord send Nupur, just like grany she was the person who made him believe tht he is right he has always been right… and that was when he started to hope.. hope that now his life is at place.. it will be fine.. but one think he forget things donot become perfect by itself.. we have to work..

He has instantly placed nupur on the list of women he respect, he cant hear his mouth his heart his mind anyone of them saying she is a p****, a b****, a pieces of sh**… he cant, his heart has instantly named nupur as one of the women like his grany like his mom, like nupur.

But yesterday she shattered him again, proving him tht wht he judged and wht he believed was worng. She made him believe tht she wasn't one of them.. but he cant made his heart agree on the fact that she isn't one of them…. The place he has given her is the righteous..

His already paining head was now paining like hell, yet he knew he has to drive back to home before his mother wake up, he has responsibilities towards her, and his family and he never let them down, just in his personal life decision he has made them feel the worse… and again wanting nupur is making thinks go worse..

….

Samrat: morning bhai…

He found his brother pressing his head on the dining table of his home… he is careful never let down his mother.. will never let her know wht is going inside him

mayank: morning

Samrat: your oky bhai

Mayank: ya.. u came last night…

It was more an statement than a question, as they way Samrat asked abt him he knew he was the person to whom he spoke so much, it wasn't the delusion of her listening to him… it was sami

Samrat: yes I did.. bhai whats going inside u…

Mayank: leave it samrat.. its just that I cant get anything… its strange…

Samrat: u know wht for the first time even I donot know whts happening… is she for real or..

Mayank cant stop himself to laugh

Mayank: she is for real… wasy u must be very happy… neither she accepted the date nor she let me in… so now u feel she is safe or there is sumthing back in ur mind…

Samrat can hear the hurt in his voice, it was bad yet not that bad

Samrat: u didn't ask why she did that all

Mayank: she said its not right…

Shilpa; good morning.. what happen mayank… ur oky

Mayank: ya mom… just sum headache…nothing much…

Shilpa: aren't u working to much these days… she said placing her hand on his head… to press to wch he smilingly protest not to..

Samrat: ya only he works right

Shilpa: samrat.. u will always be baby nah… demanding

Mayank: mom I m telling u get him a full time mom… he said with a smirk … as shilpa settle down

Shilpa: ya me to planning so… wht say

Samrat: no way.. I m not getting married right now

Mayank: im planning to tell gunjan that u are kinda running away from it.. does she feels the same…

Samrat glared and turned to him

Smart: are u my real brother or u have rivalry against me… or im bothering u these days to much… u donot want to see me alive..

Shilpa n mayank laughed knowing his lady is gona kill him really she feels like so…

Gunjan is nice girl undoubted and unlike mayank's choice of girl she was sincere and responsible towards not only Samrat but family to, yet yes she was a pure cosmopolitan high class girl…

Samrat: anywasy ur cuming tonite bro..

Mayank: another party.. oh man.. I ll try

Samrat: no ur cuming she has strictly said im not cuming without u .. so u want that I can have sum time with here… please join me..

Mayank: fine I will…

………….

It was a perfect ambience, after all it was a party thrown by Gunjan… and it never lack any element of fun, grace and style.. he was standing in the farthest corner with his drink, and was looking with affection at both of them…

As Samrat make her more closed and dance with there forehead joined , anybody can see they are in love so much… he slowly moved forward and kissed her.. and that was the moment mayank turned to the sky with the smile…

Why he never felt any such feeling like this, whenever he look at samrat n gunjan he has a light peace in his heart to see how much they are in love, this feeling he never felt even when he was in the relationship…

He wasn't technically in a relationship , he was trying to give it a chance.. and if anything else, he trust esha a lot, he did trusted her, he cared for her, he has tht infatuation to her… he knew tht.. and he tried to make it as much as good as possible… but than she wasn't the kind a girl to fal in love with ..and tht is exactly is mistake.. but than who is… is nupur that kinda .. n the answer he knew .. a big no… she is dangerous… way more dangerous than Esha… she is wrong girl, wrong place, wrong set of work… but than why it feels so correct to be with her… wht evry thing falls perfectly in place around her..

Sigh… wht the hell… he has planned he will not let himself into that again.. he cant let nupus sink in to him when she might not be thinking once about him…though it wasn't the truth, she cant get out of those eyes who were looking so hurt, when she threw him out… but than wasn't this was the best thing she must be doing.

But wht was troubling mayank was the fact he cant decide it was right to go towards the wrong or to let her go away… the way she always want him to move away was sumhwere making him go more to her… when he was leaving the house the way so securely flowers were placed with the card beside them, in a way that it meant sumthing to her… was the only sight tht remain in his heart.. the sight tht has given him hope… but it wasn't about hope … it was about the fact is he ready to go in mess or not.. is he ready to face not only his life to be at mess but her life too..

Gunjan: what happen to bhai… from past 10 days he was looking so much back to himself… and suddenly he seems to be more torn or mayb tired than ever..

Samrat; aah.. donot even asked wht has happen.. though that was the best thing that has happen yet.. it hasn't left the best of the effects

Gunjan: gee… stop being so philosophical.. speak in human language…

Samrat: bhai ..oky donot over react..and control ur voice..

He told her all and in between evry time she was in urge to shout out her lungs in wht… he stoped her….

Gunjan: u closed her opened mouth with a sighful ….oh ok…

Samrat: after so many things I told u .. u can just cum up with ok… wao

Gunjan: I just donot know wht to say…

Samrat: I know.. its complicated.. I mean.. it was best she is out of bhai's life… yet it isn't giving the feel.. bhai was in extremely bad last night..

Gunjan: samrat sumtime the best of things are not that appears to be…. Best are those things that makes u feel best..

Samrat: aha now whose talking alien

Gunjan: shut up I m serious… see it may sound stupid, completely wrong.. but I think bhai should give her a try…

Samrat: are u nuts… she is a hooker

Gunjan: so… Esha wasn't a hooker… yet she proved herself worse than that… she …the lady..is one… yet she proved to be one nice person..

Samrat: u cant trust her like that… u don't know her… she is

Gunjan: a hooker.. why u keep repeating it like ur nursery rhythm I know tht.. I got it… we all knew Esha from more than an year..right… bhai he even check her past profil u do it.. yet even than u people couldn't dig in detail .. than… there is no criteria of trusting someone.. it just the feel that cums…. Shut up…u r behaving so like sum robatic person…

Samrat: wht.. wht do u mean by tht if I want my brother to be safe

Gunjan: doent mean u make sure to get the right persoon out of his life.. not a single word sharma.. b right here.. donot u dare cum inbetween me n bro…

Samrat: excuse me..

Gunjan: yes pleas excuse us…bye…

Taking a deep breath she went near mayank to talk, though she didn't knew from where to start yet.. she need to

Gunjan: hi…

Mayank: hai dear.. he hugged her.. and she returned the gesture.. it always feels wonderfull to be treated like a kid by mayank.. he was the most affectionate person she has evr seen…

Gunjan: thanks for cuming

Mayank: ur wlecum… u made me cum.. I donot want my brother to loss sumtime with u…

Gunjan: I wish he can be so thoughtful about u too…

Mayank: aha .. he is.. donot blame my brother…

Gunjan: oky this isn't going any way…I will cum straight to my point… why are u still here like a hero sipping ur liquor and counting strts..

Mayank: WHAT… wait a min… that moron told u everything

Gunjan: im glad he did.. as u sharma's are hopeless

Mayank: and knowing all u are asking me tht.

Gunjan: yes I am… why are u here not trying if u want her that much….

Mayank: cause she doent want to…. Plus I m not sure I wanting the right or not

Gunjan: bhai nobody is ever .. if ur afraid to trust her than u cant help it.. its just because u have a bad experience…and she is a wrong person… but I donot know why but she feel so right

Mayank: honestly … I donot know why.. if I just ignore the thing wht she is… I mean professionally.. she makes me feel sigh…. so right… but than.. sumhwere that day I felt.. she doesn't feel so.. I went to her home to make her realize sumthing yet… I donot know…

Gunjan: maybe she was feeling im just one of those who meet her everyday.. or maybe she isn't looking at u that way….

Mayank: I know she isn't looking at me that way.. people she meet everyday…. Yet it just felt that she wont let in…

Gunjan: bhai maybe she is thinking the other way… I mean she doesn't want to get seriously involved and than treated like a b***….

Mayank: do I appear to be such person…

Gunjan: does she knew u from eternity tht she will know tht… or u have made ur point so much strong and firm infront of her tht she should believe u to such level..

Mayank: I just dono get this.. I mean wht she wants… or does she wants anything or not

Gunjan: seriously bro u let my repo so down .. I mean people who I know does don't give up in one "no"…. girls love man who try harder… she wink and he chuckled..

Gunjan: oky seriously… it doesn't matter… the thing tht matters is tht wht u want… and whn u had her how u feel…..and if u want that feel to remain there wht u can do…

Mayank: oh man the orphan queen is back…

He said dramatically not getting her and she sigh and made her hairs move from her forehead… blowing sum of her hairs

Gunjan: phew Jesus help please…. leme speak ur way… u wanted the land for ur dream city, and they were not selling it to u …they said it isn't meant to be… they donot feel like but u did feel like.. than wht did u did… counted stars..

Mayank: no I went all the way and got it…

Gunjan: that's exactly what I m saying… if the car doesn't cums to u… wht u do...

Mayank: I get to the car… he was taken back by the words of young lady infornt of her… who looked at him in thts exactly wht she is saying

And with that the smirk on is face was back, he was thinking he was planning suddenly all his brain strated to work at the rapid speed… he knew wht he wants than wht he is waiting for…

Gunjan: I just wonder where the Sharma charm has gone… cant woo a girl…. She said checking her nail paint

Mayank: hey..donot go there

Gunjan: no seriously sharma's have lost the charm and the wit to make things go there way by making them go away…

Mayank: u know wht.. I planning to prove u wrong…

Gunjan: really..

Mayank: yes kido… I am…

Gunjan: good for u…

Mayank: thanks…he hugged her and she rubbed his back.

Gunjan: ur welcum… now u know im intelligent than ur brother…

Mayank: I so agree…. But not agree.. he is more that's why he choose u

Gunjan: that is so not fair bhai…

Suddenly mayank was smiling , he was smilingly, sumhwere he knows he is ready to get himself in a mess, tht may appears to be but might not be…

………………….

Mayank: morning dad..

Dad: morning… mayank ur going to Seattle for the project

Mayank: me dad.. he almost shouted and his dad looked at him narrowing his eyes

Dad: ya we need sumone there all the time… so its better u go… u have much more knowledge of all that plus sending samrat means…. So many vacations…

Mayank chuckled and samrat groan.. they all so make fun of him n gunjan…. Yet he wasn't planning to go away.. today he was planning sumthing to go towards nupur and now… holy ***

Dad: so u have any problems

Mayank: ya… no.. not at all… I will go

As if he has anyother choice ….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved it lodsss
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ghor Kalyug hain..By God!!!
abhi Mayank jaise ladke milne mushkil hain aur yeha kisi ko iski kadar tak nhi hain...huh!
i really like this Mayank...woh kuch jyada hi different n nice hain...sach mein kisi aur planet ka hain..😆 bt from a nicer place unlike this crap world! 😛
so he lost his granny n ussi ka fayda uss chudail ne uthaya!!!
huh!!!! despo...🤬
i just hatee dos kind of girls!!!!!!
n i sooo loved that bass ek mulakat mein Mayank had sooo much feelings n Good Feelings towards Nupur...sigh!
srsly!!! fairy tale...😆
n omg!!!! i m again loving Gunjan with Mayank...😆
she is Awesome!
atleast Samrat se btr!! i know samrat is also ri8 on his place bt still!!!
Gunjan rocked!!! akhir usne Mere bhle bhale Mayank ko thora akkal de hi diya...😉😆
as in usko ussi ke "Langu" mein samjha kar..😉😆
m sooo gonna love it!!!
n wow!!! now m sure Nupur can't escape this time!!!! 😆
n gosh!!! m waiitng for the Sharma Charm...😉😳
n ufff!!! ab yeh kya naya twist waise can i hope ke project ke kam par ja kar he will meet Nupur there??? 😉😆
waiting eagerly for the next part
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
*Edited*
Beautiful part
well written
waiting for Mayur another meeting
continue soon.
Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maria.

Res

i'm hell angry with you and Anila---:(



mjhy masoom nay kya kiya.😳😳... CC per aoo
warna yeah ff shoro hony se pehly hi band hojay ga😆
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Posted: 12 years ago



Originally posted by: Maria.

Res

i'm hell angry with you and Anila---:(



link to the CC


http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2895120&TPN=147&#69803690
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed



mjhy masoom nay kya kiya.😳😳... CC per aoo
warna yeah ff shoro hony se pehly hi band hojay ga😆

😊
Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aray tu whn i said its abt cc.. i said we cant discus here.. so can talk abt the matter on cc... cum there...
hoa kya hia yeah tu batao...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
So, Mayank has developed a soft corner for Nupur in his heart..
Really, The Sharma brothers are hopeless..
Thanks Gunjan dear for giving these brothers some brains :P
Continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
gunjan is really very sweet. continue soon. plz pm me

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