MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 11

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

luved it
osum

thnks dear

Originally posted by: luvumjht

loved it😊

thanks alot

Originally posted by: gopi06

nice updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm

thanks alot dear
glad ur liking it

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

i fall in love with this story fiza

when will u update i just want more

hey thnks alot
means so much to me...

i will update soon hopefully on monday night

Originally posted by: shafyyy

That's very nice part..

Mayank is shattered...

completely shattered...

and Nupur...

she just don't want to hurt him...

that's really a very nice part

thanks alot dear

he is .. has had enough..
thnku so much

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Feeling bad for Mayank...he is totally shattered😔

Nupur is also right at her place..sometimes situations are so against that everyone is right yet nothing is right.

waiting for next part..continue soon

thanks alot dear...

more for the line u said... ur words have been taken..😉.. i was trying to write the strting line of next chp.. u gave me tht...

so true its at time diffcult to realize whts right n wht not

Originally posted by: Maria.

Beautiful update

well written--i'm loving this new style of writing of urs

continue soon/

thanku so much
glad u liked it
thnku.. as a writer i love experimenting... gladu liked

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

beautiful update fiza

m confused about wat to feel for mayank .
true m feeling bad but y he behaving in such childish way!!!!
wat had happen to him dat he lose all his self confidence? n how come a person like him who does not have self confidence can become a successfull businessman?
n wat did diya did? y she left him n wat she told infront of media dat he remained dis much shatered n soulless?

n d more m reading dis ff d more m respecting NUPUR .eagerly wanna know her background .how she developed such rich morality inspite of living a filth life n how she had entered in dis world?

thanks alot

u must be.. as till now whn it cum to mayank i haven't told anything abt him... i wont say he has lost his confidence he is fragile yet he has all the abilities for his business n work.. emotions are diffrent area of ur life ... and today he is in mess and in dam delima... but certainly not in his practical life.. u have just seen his himself here.. not wht he is for others...
plus the business is there legacy i told tht in frst chp..

the next chap in all abt in n out of mayank...

i m extrmly happy on this.. as its more abt nupur this ff thn mayank... a hell of life makes u learn wht it is to be in heaven... it makes u believe feel the worth of a good respectable life... as u never had it...
abt nupur;s life will cum later quite later..

as sumwhere its more abt the emotions both of them have for eachother... starting from respect n infatuation to sumthing blis

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Aj update milega?

nhi bachy kal mily ga

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Lovely Update !!

thanks alot

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

beautiful expressd!👏
i feel so bad 4 MN~
i'm so luving d intensity of story!😃
update asap!

thnku so much dear

glad so glad ur liking the way it is going

Originally posted by: Faria.

Hey Fiza

I read two updates of this ffin one go.

Yah I missed the previous one

In one word they were mind blowing

I found this ff very much different.

Yah frm story lines to ur writing style everything was just excellent '

thanks alot jani.. glad ur likig n enjoying this ff

The main protagonist I mean mayank and nupur r very strong- especially NUPUR.

She is so matured and well mannered that I adore her char in spite of her #%&%# profession..

I think she misbehaved with mayank for mayanks sake. She knew what's the realty and what her position in this society. She knew well general ppl wont accept her or treat her easily'

That's why she refused to make any bond with mayank ' though she was craving forit but still she stood strong against her emotion

Ihow much hurt were maynk and nupur'. I hope mayank will think with abt her in cool mind and then come to know that actually she is an angel. And ithink sam can also helphim in this matter. Bcoz now sam also surprised that nups dint take any advantage of mayank'.

thnsk n glad u understnd n like nupur... this one thing i really wnt thoughout this ff.. n tht is cuming .. the feel towrds nupur..

abt mayank he will undertand he has to look things more clearly

Anyway I should ZIP my mouth now. Bahut bakbak hogaya'

Loving this ff so much..

Btw dostart another FF also

Teri 2/3 FF ek saath na parti tou mujhe accha nehi laagta

Yaar so do start another ff 'ok??

Im getting busy with my training so sometimes I may miss to comment in ff- so I beg ur p[pardon in advance..

Love ya

Take care

lol its oky teri bak bak tu mein miss ker rhai hoon...
gang ki lari yaha kaun pehly res kery ga n all
really miss them all
u have been a very very big motivation in wrting to me..
new ff... i have a cocpt yet bus pata nhi likh nhi parahi hoon
but i will try

bets of luck for ur training

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

nhi bachy kal mily ga

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update

loved it lods

Beautifully written

loved it to d coreee
thanks alot dear
really glad uliked it

loved Nupur here...n felt bad for both of them.sigh!!!

Life is really cruel!!! Sigh!!

life is not th cruel moments of life may or maynot be cruel...

Nupur knew wht her limits n thats why she didn't want to cross that limit inspite of a inner hidden wish just like a normal girl...sigh

bt it made Mayank totally borken n i really felt very bad for her

he is very emotional i sooo wish ke Samrat uske liye kuch jaroor karein

n can i hope for a meeting of Samrat n Nupur?

i m sooo hoping for another MN meeting n a longgg heart felt convo...sigh

loved it lods

love u lodss API...🤗🤗🤗

ya she knew her limitations are life and wht should she expect frm others n herself... and mayank has been made cross this path so many time so he had enough
ahh ur wishes are broken

no samrat nupur meetings cuming up... nor a long heart felt convo...
a pure true convo will cum... but before tht they need to know wht they want from eachother

thanks dear

ps: bass ek FF bhttt na-insaafi hain hamare sath plzzz start another ff!!!! too!!!! i want another ff from u asap plzzz 😔

kyun mein aram se ek ff likhti hoi bori lagti hoon... rigth now im to much in to this ff and want to write it to sumextent than will think elsewhere...

but will try to cum up with new

Originally posted by: -Anila-

KAL!!! 😔 kaha main khush ho kar a gayi ke aj hi update milega...sigh!!!

mein ker dayti agar woh ready hota tu...
per mera dil hai us mein kcuh aur bhi add kerny ka...
so woh abhi kero gi ya subha..
phir kal kero gi update