MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
i fall in love with this story fiza
when will u update i just want more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
That's very nice part..
Mayank is shattered...
completely shattered...
and Nupur...
she just don't want to hurt him...
that's really a very nice part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Beautiful update
well written--i'm loving this new style of writing of urs
continue soon/
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Feeling bad for Mayank...he is totally shattered😔
Nupur is also right at her place..sometimes situations are so against that everyone is right yet nothing is right.

waiting for next part..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
wooo amazing Update Fiza..
Maynk's pain and Nupur;s reaction beautifully pained down by u.
Feel bad for both Mayank is tarribly hurt and Nupur lost all her hopes to leave a beautifull life and they both will together make an wonderfull world for eahc other...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
beautiful update fiza

m confused about wat to feel for mayank .
true m feeling bad but y he behaving in such childish way!!!!
wat had happen to him dat he lose all his self confidence? n how come a person like him who does not have self confidence can become a successfull businessman?
n wat did diya did? y she left him n wat she told infront of media dat he remained dis much shatered n soulless?

n d more m reading dis ff d more m respecting NUPUR .eagerly wanna know her background .how she developed such rich morality inspite of living a filth life n how she had entered in dis world?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
beautiful expressd!👏
i feel so bad 4 MN~
i'm so luving d intensity of story!😃
update asap!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Hey Fiza

I read two updates of this ffin one go.

Yah I missed the previous one

In one word they were mind blowing

I found this ff very much different.

Yah frm story lines to ur writing style everything was just excellent …

The main protagonist I mean mayank and nupur r very strong- especially NUPUR.

She is so matured and well mannered that I adore her char in spite of her #%&%# profession..

I think she misbehaved with mayank for mayanks sake. She knew what's the realty and what her position in this society. She knew well general ppl wont accept her or treat her easily…

That's why she refused to make any bond with mayank … though she was craving forit but still she stood strong against her emotion

Ihow much hurt were maynk and nupur…. I hope mayank will think with abt her in cool mind and then come to know that actually she is an angel. And ithink sam can also helphim in this matter. Bcoz now sam also surprised that nups dint take any advantage of mayank….

Anyway I should ZIP my mouth now. Bahut bakbak hogaya…

Loving this ff so much..

Btw dostart another FF also

Teri 2/3 FF ek saath na parti tou mujhe accha nehi laagta

Yaar so do start another ff –ok??

Im getting busy with my training so sometimes I may miss to comment in ff- so I beg ur p[pardon in advance..

Love ya

Take care

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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

beautiful. mayank is very soft hearted. loved it



thanks alot dear
yes kinda he is
glad u liked it

Originally posted by: Humayra

Awesome update..

Feeling really bad for mayUr.. Both are right on their sides..
Hope this MU will be cleared soon and they will become friends...




thanks alot dear

i know.. glad u understnd there misery and nupurs POV
let see



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drmaha

its nice nupur shouldnt do this but i think sunwhere she is rite...


hope samrat will do sumthg to make mayank happy:)


update soon dear :)




thanks alot dear

she is right at her place absolutely right
let see who helps him and how he helps himself or destine plans sumthing

congrats on being dazzler


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