MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 14

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update

loved it lodsss

Beautifully written

loved it to d coreee

Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ghor Kalyug hain..By God!!!

abhi Mayank jaise ladke milne mushkil hain aur yeha kisi ko iski kadar tak nhi hain...huh!

i really like this Mayank...woh kuch jyada hi different n nice hain...sach mein kisi aur planet ka hain..😆 bt from a nicer place unlike this crap world! 😛

so he lost his granny n ussi ka fayda uss chudail ne uthaya!!!

huh!!!! despo...🤬

i just hatee dos kind of girls!!!!!!
bus kya keray kalyug hai ...
haan yeah tu hai mein sary talsh ker ker k asay mayank lati hoon jo milna muskil hi nhi namukin hai🤣 ... so u to belive he is an alein see. tht is the probelm not body belive tht he belongs where he is...
tht despo whole story is yet to cum

n i sooo loved that bass ek mulakat mein Mayank had sooo much feelings n Good Feelings towards Nupur...sigh!

srsly!!! fairy tale...😆
haan for the frst time i am actaully writing on sumthing like love at first sight... its is a fairy tale .. with many more things cuming up... plus its in a western environment so things and they way they both will take them will be a bit diffrent

n omg!!!! i m again loving Gunjan with Mayank...😆

she is Awesome!

atleast Samrat se btr!! i know samrat is also ri8 on his place bt still!!!

Gunjan rocked!!! akhir usne Mere bhle bhale Mayank ko thora akkal de hi diya...😉😆

as in usko ussi ke "Langu" mein samjha kar..😉😆

m sooo gonna love it!!!
lol.. i love her to... she is hot happening all the cosmo girl but she is good at heart.. so i like her..
mayank bhola bhala nhi hai... mayank confused hai mayank dara hua hai more u can se

n wow!!! now m sure Nupur can't escape this time!!!! 😆

n gosh!!! m waiitng for the Sharma Charm...😉😳

n ufff!!! ab yeh kya naya twist waise can i hope ke project ke kam par ja kar he will meet Nupur there??? 😉😆

waiting eagerly for the next part

loved it lodsss

love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

really have i planned tht so... let see.. how dramatic there next meeting is ...
will update soon... hopefully
thnaks alot dear

Originally posted by: -Anila-

API...update karo na yaar

aj.. acha phir thora wait kerna peray ga... chaly ga... as mein ny chk bhi nhi kiya .. quote bhi nhi sochi hai... aur rply bhi kerna hai

Originally posted by: Maria.

Res

*Edited*

Beautiful part

well written

waiting for Mayur another meeting

continue soon.

thanks alot dear
u will get there meeting in next part

Aur kitna wait karna padega fiza di...

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

gunjan is really very sweet. continue soon. plz pm me

thanks dear
i didnt pmed u.. sorry

Originally posted by: Humayra

Awesome update..

So, Mayank has developed a soft corner for Nupur in his heart..

Really, The Sharma brothers are hopeless..

Thanks Gunjan dear for giving these brothers some brains :P

Continue soon and thanks for the pm.

thanks alot dear
it more than soft corner... and thin line between strong attraction n love
lol.. ya gunjan is giving them brains...

will do so

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

nice update

ab karachi mein sardhi hone lagi hai

thanks alot dear
haan hony tu lagi hai... aj kal phir se kab hogi hai

Originally posted by: gopi06

awesome updt fiza
loved majan bonding & gunjun she is sweet girl
cont soon
thanks for the pm

thanksa lot dear

gald u liked them ... i love her as
will cont soon

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

luveddd it

thanku

Originally posted by: shafyyy

Nice part...

Mayank was feeling so wrong of himself..

liked Mayank and Gunjan convo..

she made him realize that sometimes what is wrong proves right for us...

awesome

thanks alot dear
gald u liked it
thaks alot

Originally posted by: shafyyy

Aur kitna wait karna padega fiza di...

bachy hoay tu sirf teen din hai last update ko
per i need to chk n rply so thora time lagy like 20-30 mins

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

bachy hoay tu sirf teen din hai last update ko
per i need to chk n rply so thora time lagy like 20-30 mins

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

MAYANK lives in america?
first of all i m loving ur long comments i m just loving them... pls asay hi rekhna ...

n yes he lives in america ..in frst chpt i told tht he is in NY.. newyork..


dose page3 ppl ...calld him gay wanna slap dem .dont dey know HE z from sub continent n are not dey aware of our culture.yukky ppl ...



i hate dose ppl who mockd at mayank .reminded me of WE ARE FAMILY ...following INDIAN culture are not so cool . but such complex feelings regarding all dose mockery may come at teenage y he still suffering from dat? if his ethics ,his morality strong enough den y would he rader he should slap dem through his words .

sweetheart he is Sharma n he is born amercan, his life style his family his all around is pure american... so page3 peolpe wont think abt wht he is n wht not he is news, he make things sell ... he is brand himself...
abt his family u still need to know them... u have just saw samrat n gunjan... and they all donot hate Esha for the fact tht mayank do... there are other reason for them...
he said it doesnt matter to him wht others say


he got his parents support ,grannys support always den y he has turned so only being affected by mockery of outsider?



i kinda understand his situation as my ow cousin faced such situation during her teenage but now she z FINE n strong enough wid suport of her family .

sorry but m not liking dis mayank :(

its not his parents support ... it was just his granny.. plus right now it isnt abt the fact tht wht has all thought abt him... its nupurs thought abt him tht mattered him.. surprised him ... reminded him of sumthing ... right now he is in a fear... she is after all a p***** and he cant deny the fact she is a mess...

COMING TO UR WRITING ...it was again a fab update .m sure m gonna fall head over heal in love wid dis FF ...

cont soon ...

dis ff making me talkative yar :( :)

thanksa lot dear for liking my writing means alot as this ff is written in complete different way... thanku so

n yes i m loving u being talkative i was so waiting for ur comments.

thanks aton