REVENGEFUL LOVE UPDATED PT 19 PG 102 19/1/13

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Hello all... Me Richa Kapoor again with another creation of Maan & Geet, who is our all time favourite. Let me Present you my New FF



PROLOGUE:-

How can we define the word Right and Wrong. Two different words but still connected,we can say dey are incomplete without each other. The most amazing fact is evry person used these words according to their convience. Can thetes two words is enough to define someone's brutual act. What if one can act some brutal activity and defined themselves right? But may b there are some reasons behind his brutuality. If one person commit something serious does it means he/she realy a bad from inside too. Then who judge and gave any appropriate ans. LOVE is very strong. Only love had a power to correct the wrongs decision and acts. Only Love can change the hatred and crimanal into a good one...



Plz Plz Plz let me know the way you like my story. I have tried something new in my Character Sketch this time. Hope You guys find it different...


Love you all
Richa
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Hope you guys like this new style too...
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<p align="center"><font size="6">PART 1 & 2</font></p>
<font size="6">PART 3/4 - PG NO 10</font>

<font size="6">PART 5/6 - PG NO 13</font>

<font size="6">PART 7- PG NO 14</font>

<font size="6">PART 8 - PG NO 17</font>

<font size="6">PART 9 - PG NO 20</font>

<font size="6">PART 10 - PG NO 24</font>

<font size="6">PART 11 - PG NO 28
<font size="6">PART 12-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3296729/revengeful-love-updated-pt-19-pg-102-19-1-13?pn=32</font>
PART 13 - PG NO 38
<font size="6"><font size="4">PART 14-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3296729/revengeful-love-updated-pt-19-pg-102-19-1-13?pn=45
<font size="4">PART 15-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3296729&TPN=52</font></font></font></font>

<font size="4">part 16- page 62</font>

<font size="4">part 17- 65</font>

<font size="4">part 18-85https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3296729&TPN=85</font>


<font size="4">part 19 -10</font>



<font size="4">THREAD 3</font>


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thank god u start this here to plz pm me and i send u friend request on fb to on ur new id pheew my name is mohita acecpet kar le
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Nice !! 😃 !!

Waiting For It !! 👍🏼 !!
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Congratulations Scraps Dear..


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nice you started it on if
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congratzz dear.. very interesting..lovely start...i loved it
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intersting ,will be waiting for the update
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REVENGEFUL LOVE

PART - 1

WARNING: DIS UPDATE CNTAIN VIOLENT ELEMNT SO AVOID IF U R NT COMFORTABLE. (18+)

ITS around 11:30pm. Whole Singhania mansion ws dipped in darkness, coz except Geet,youngest offspring of Rudrpratap singhania,no1 is at home. All went 2 US on a trip of 25 days,4 sm close relative's marriage. Dey also want dat she cm wid dem bt she insist dat she had 2 go on a collage trip of 7 days,nd no1 denied hr demands. She decided 2 join dem aftr d trip is ovr Due 2 sm resons Geet cm erly.Although Pinky ws cm 2 stay wis hr coz she is all alone. Aftr dinnr Pinky wnt 2 hr rum. Geet is also set 2 sleep. She cm in hr rum. It ws drak all around. Sudnly a vry dim sound jerkly grab hr attenton. She felt little afraid nd luk all around. She scan whole rum in 1 glimpse. No1 is here. Again sound cm nd she noticed it ws cming frm d window. Cold breeze oozing madly,lyk dey gv sm indication of sm1's restlessness.

'pheww ye window khuli hai tabi aisi sounds aa rahi hai',she sighed nd lokd d window. She wnt 2 hr wardrobe tuk hr nighty nd straight went 2 washrm. She ws vry happy 2day,coz she succeded in hr plan whch she made 4 hm. 2dy is hr victrious day,vry spl. She cm out aftr a bath,while singing a tune. As she step out,pair of strong hands grabbd hr nd threw hr on bed.


B4 she can undrstnd nd shout 4 help,he ws on hr nd pinned hr both hands besides hr head. She ws wriggling nd sm how threw hm nd turn on d lite.. Hr breath is halted nd d view of face tuk hr breath. She scared alot seeing hm in hr rum.


'MAAN, ye kya batameezi hai.chale jao wrna achha nai hoga.',she wrnd hm bt dosnt affect hm at al. 2day he cmpltly out of cntrl. Geet threw mny thngs on hm 2 sv hrslf bt he steadily walks 2 hr. Seeing hm furious eyes she tried 2 run 2wrds dur. She trying opn it.

'dnt waste ur time baby,it ws lokd nd keys r here.' he shows hr wid an evil smirk.

'dont cm here,i'll shout 4 hlp'.hr voice whimprd nd heart thumping badly.

'try it 2.bt 4 ur kind info.i told u all gurds r slpt nd ur so calld frnd 2.'he cm closr nd clenchd hr.

'pls mujhe maf kr do',she beg 4 mercy nd he glared hr. Geet try 2 escaps nd rose his angr. He threw her on bed again. She shouts nd punching hm. She try evry possible wy 2 escape.seeing hr efforts he slappd her conti.nd made hr limp.

'Maan pls leave me',she pleads.

'wat u said 2 all,dat i m trying to rape u?meri koi glti na hone k bawjud tumne itna bada alligation lagaya.janti b ho rape kya hota hai?2dy i told u d meaning of rape'he said havocly.

Geet weltrd badly bt all in vein.he ws filled wid angr nd aggression. He grope hr. She is screaming in pain,bt no1 cm 2 hlp hr. Maan applied pressure of hs aggresive body on hr nd bite hr viciously on hr deligate body. He torn hr clothes nd strippd off all nd leve hs harsh teeth marks. Brutualy he misused hr all body parts,bite hr lips nd made dem bleeds. She laid limp undrneath hm nd he entrd in hr nd thurst till she bleeds. Aftr calming hs aggression he leave her jerkly nd dressed up again.

'aaj tume wai mila hai jo tm desrve krti ho.agli bar MSK se uljhane se pehle is raat ko achhi tarah yaad kr lena,or i dont mind reminds u again.'He hv no regrts on hs deeds. He jumpd off frm d window nd made an escape leaving hr lyk almost dead. She laid limp. Hr all body parts r aching badly nd blood is oozing frm mny scars. Hr eyes strukd hv no sign of life left in dem.

Next mrng Pinky awkd wid grb headache. She ran 2 Geet's rm. Hr eyes filled wid horrer seeing hr condi. Geet is laid naked like dead body on hr bed. Whole room is messy nd sheet is filled wid blood stains. Tears rolled on hr chubby cheeks. She ran 2 hr nd covrd hr immediatly. Pinky hell scared. She trn hr face and pattd hr cheeks 2 awke hr,bt she dosnt respond stedly lukd at ceiling only.

'Geet pls mujhe baat kr plss Geet'.she rubbd hr hands nd tryng 2 awake hr.

Geet screamd in horrer again,wen a window opn jerlky wid d 4ce of air. She wrappd hr arms around Pinky,'Pinky lokd d window or else he cm again.Pinky lockd it,pls',she said while sobbing nd tighten hr grip out of fear. Hr condi.made Pinky vulunerable. She dnt unrstand how 2 handle d sit.But sm how she mange. She made hr wear fresh clothes nd secreatly tuk hr 2 a private clinic. Doc gv hr treatment on wonds. She slpt 4 few hrs as a effect of injection. Pinky is waiting 4 hr 2 reagain hr concious back nd talkd wid hr. She ws filled wid angr and fear both. Fear 4 hr and angr 4 d culprit who made hr condition like this.


PART 2 - SEE BELOW


Hello all... Hope you like this.. Plz Do press Like and Comment...


Love you all

Richa

Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago

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