REVENGEFUL LOVE UPDATED PT 19 PG 102 19/1/13 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohh that part awesome

so geet take panga with maan

but i. M scared for future
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Posted: 12 years ago
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REVENGEFUL LOVE
PART - 4

GEET nt slept 4 a single sec, as she ws slepless on d dy wen she had a rageful encounter wid hm 4 on d vry frst day of hr collage. Geet is boiling inside. She spend whole nite in thinkng how can she teach hm a lesson. Nxt dy wen she ws in hr way 2 collage on hr new car,she sw Maan ws also going on hs sports bike. Geet's blood boiled mor seeing hm and in rage of hr anger...
she hit hs bike intentionaly nd made hm fall in swamp pool. Maan injured at many places. Geet stp hr car in frnt of hm. He ws cmpletly drenched in mud frm tip 2 toe.

'kaha tha na u will pay.agli bar seedha upar ka ticket kat dungi.',Geet said wid a winning smile on hr face.Maan fumed at hs insult,nd she ran hr car 2wrds collage.

Maan movd 2 KC 2 chnge nd clean hmslf. Hs bhabhi sw hs conditon nd gt worried. Maan wid a pattd foot movd 2 hs room. Somya,hs bhabhi calld hs name svral times bt he ignord.While taking a shower,he only thinks how he made hr down nd shw hr place. Hs mud is washed away undr cool water bt hs angre stay in hm only. Wen he cm out Somya came wid termaric milk. She sw many small scars on hs face. She is d only 1 who cares 4 hm.

'Maan wat happnd tell me',she askd wid concrn bt he annoyed. He nvr share hs feelings,hs aggression, hs angr wid ny1. Coz nobody is intrested in hm at all.

'nothng',he just said nd movd out of d KM,ignoring hr all callings.

'mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki ye kisi bade tufan se pehle ki shanti hai.Maan k ander kuchh boil ho rha hai pr wo humesha ki trah bta nai raha hai.o god pls hlp hm',she assumd hs silent angr nd know dat it results in harming 2 sm1 or 2 hm also,nd she ws rite. Dis incident ws a nt as esy go wy 4 hm. Bt dis time he think much bigger 4 hr. Days pasing widout ny disturabnce. Both nt conqurd on ny issue frm mny days. Geet considered hrslf as winnr nd thot dat she teach hm bttr nd he will nt do ny thng,bt dis ws hr biggr mistake.1dy in lunch time she is all alone in hr classrum,busy in completeing hr notes.She ws so much indulge dat cant realize dat Maan entrs in classrum nd locked it frm inside. He cm closr 2 hr nd closd hr notebuk.

'wat is dis? r u mad?',she askd in recentd tone.

'mere paglpan ki inteha to ab tumhe pta chalegi nd i promise u,k tm kisi ko muh dikhane k kabil nai rahogi',hs untamed eyes said much mor den hs tongue. Geet stud up nd Maan strt moving 2wrds hm. Geet tryng 2 slap hm nd he clenchd hs hand nd tagged hr against wall. He lokd hr betwn wall nd hmslf.

Meanwhile break is ovr nd all studnt cm bak nd found room lokd.all trying 2 push d door 2 opn it.

'ab tm kya karoge?',she askd wid a grinn.

'ab hi to asli khel shuru hua hai.'he chuckld nd strt opning d buttons of hs shrt.

Geet cnt gt wat he is up 2. Maan grab hr clutch nd tuk hr lipstick frm it. She gt mor confusd. He made marks on hs face nd hs chest frm dat. Hr eyes popped out seeing hs actions. Prof.also cm nd orderd all studnts 2 opn it forcily. All tried harder nd d momnt all cm inside Maan snuggld hr. B4 she cn undrstands nythng,Maan ws sucessded in hs plan. All studnt nd prof. cm inside nd caught dem in dat posture. All strt gossping instantly. Maan leave hr nd show hs bare chest full of marks 2 evry1. Prof.glard both.

'wat d hell r u doing?ye collage hai tumari aiyashio ka adda nai.',he said wid disgusting glare.

'sir jaise app soch rae hai...',she tryng 2 explain bt Maan intrupt nd stp hr clearifying.

'cmmon Geet,its ok.maine to tume pehle hi mana kia tha ye collage hai pr tm sunti kaha ho kisi ki.',he winked at hr,wid a huge victry smile on hs lips.

'both of u com wid me.ab principal sir hi tumara faisla karenge,nd Maan buttond ur shrt nd behave proprly.'Prof orderd both nd tuk dem 2 principal's office.

Geet tried harder 2 explain bt as all know dat we easily believe on watevr we sw,rathr den words. Prof.complaints 2 Prin.,he scold both nd summond both's fathr in collage.

'principal shyad tm bhul rae ho ki ye 2 kiske bachhe hai',RP said bossily.

'agr is umar me kuch krte b hai to inhe sambhalna apka kaam hai,isi baat k paise dete hai hum. Agar aap bhul gaye to yaad dila du ye collage humare trust se chalta hai',he also snap back on principal nd made hs throat dry.

'nxt time dont call us 4 ny mattr.wo 2 bachhe hai or unhe sambhalna apka kaam hai.main roz 2 apni meetings chhod k yaha nai aa skta.undrstud?',RP also scold hm in similar tone wid Samarth.

'or main b so dont call us furthrly.or ha ye baat yai khtam ho jani chahiye.agar ye baat colage k bahar gai to apke liye achha nai hoga.',Samarth told hs decision 2 hm nd Principal drenchd in hs sweat. He knows vry well wat is d range of deir power.

'sorry sir nxt time apko koi pareshani hogi',Principal assured both while dryng hs sweat wid hs henky.

'good 4 u',both said nd leave immediately.

Samarth glared Maan,'dont let me down nxt time.tum useless to ho hi bt no need 2 prove it again nd again.brhal maine sb sambhal lia hai bt nxt time i ll nt spare u',Samarth scold hm bt in vry low tone so no1 hear dis.
GUYS THIS FF HAS A DARK STORY U CAN GUESS IF U HAVE READ THE FIRST PART ...PLZ GUYS STORY HAVE LOTS OF TWIST N TURNS ..THATS Y PLZ HAVE PATIENCE...IF U HAVE ANY PROBLEM WITH THE VIOLENCE THAN DONT READ AND IF U HAVE ANY DOUBTS THAN DO PM ME .BUT DONT WRITE GALIAS AND BAD COMMENTS HERE ...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
oh god all misunderstood them it all happen as per maan's plan...samrat scolding maan ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Both update r nice..
perfect blend of past n present is done..
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
lovely story
add me to ur list
and pm me 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
love chapter 4

we dont have any problem with dark story continue soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
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so much gussa n revenge lene k liye toh jaise taiyyar hai dono k dono...kabhi pyar hoga inn dono mein...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
i feel sorry for maan and for geet too
my name is alicia pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 4
how could Maan do like that...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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~REVANGEFUL LOVE~
PART - 5

SAMARTH scolds Maan,bt RP calmd hm.

RP:relax Samarth its f9 ab is umar me ye sab to chalta hi rehta hai.tu kyu bachho k mamle me pad rha hai. I think we both hv many othr imp.wrk 2 do.

Both's father leave. Geet fuming nd hr cheeks turn scarlet red in angr.

'ye tumne acha nai kiya',geet glared hr while pointing fingr 2 hm.

'so wat do u think dat i leave u widout teaching u bettr.dont mess wid me Geet. Main to wo aag hu jise jo chhuega wo jalega hi',Maan 2 glared hr. He tryng 2 move bt she held hs collar.

'1 bazi jeet k ye mat samjho ki ye yaha khtam ho gaya hai.ye to sb shuru hua hai,lekin khtam main kr dungi.',Maan gv a jrk 2 hr hand.

'i m waiting',he ans rudly nd movd .

Maan realy won d game dis time coz she bcm d target of all student'sremarks nd taunting cmmnts. Ech nd evry remark gv a boost 2 hr hatred 4 hm. She wants 2 take revange frm hm at ny cost.dis time she wants 2 do smthng bigger,small pranks r nt enough 2 satisfy hr ego nd recentd mode. True said anger is man's biggest enemy,coz wen we r in anger we 4gt d defi.of wrong nd rite. Anger twist human mind according 2 its tune. Any human being who who bcm slave of anger will surly ruin its own nd others life. Dat will happns in both's life. Geet's also following d same way. She will also wait 4 d correct momnt 2 excute hr plan. Aftr 2 months,deir Collage plannd a trip of 3 days caming in a jungle. All students were excited bt Geet's happiness ws diffr frm dem. Hr parents also gt invitation of deir close relatives,so dey hav 2 leave 4 landon,bt Geet compell dem nd wnt 4 junglw trip wid other students. All singhanias except Geet leave India nd she Delhi 4 hr trip. She gv a mischevious smirk 2 Maan wen dey reachd 2 jungle. He guess dat she is up2 smthng bt he nvr imagind wat is she actualy plannd. Prof.orders stutends 2 keep demslves in deir tents as sun is setting down nd clouds turn dark black slowly 2. All studnt followd d instructions nd slept in deir tents. At 3:30 am,Maan felt sm strange activities around hs tent. He sw sm1's shadow nd cm out 2 chek wat's going on,bt nt found ny1 as atmospheres is blurred at dis early. ee hear sm footstep nd ran in dat direction. He sw sm1 is running. He ran aftr hr nd grabbed hr. She ws Geet. Maan gt confusd wat she is doing outside so early,bt b4 he cn undrstand she start sceaming 4 help.she torn hr cloths hrslf. Maan tryng 2 made a mv bt,she held hm tightly,In struggle of seprating frm hr both falls down nd hs bad luck,dat he ws on hr. Meanwhile all studnts nd teachers cm dere nd sw dem. All assume dat Maan is trying 2 rape hr,as she put blamed on him. hr torn clothes nd marks,whch occured coz of deir struggle tell much mor den words. Maan gtup nd saw many eyes glared hm in disguest. Pinky nd othr girls went 2 hr and covrd hr wid sheet nd support hr. Geet pretnds more nd sobbing conti. Maan tryng 2 gv explaination bt hs prof.slapppd hm hardly.

'shut up.how disgusting u r?',Prof.said angrily.

'but sir maine kuchh nai kia hai',Maan trying 2 convience hr.

Prof.slappd hm 1 mor time,'dont lied.do u thnk we r blind.hum sabne dekha hai.now gt out of here nd dont sho ur face again 2 me.or ye mat samjhna ki tumhare father is collage k trusty hai to tume mafi mill jayegi. U r expelled frm d collage.abi k abi ye camp chhodne ka order deta hu main tume.'

'bt sir',he pleads.

'get out nd u girls tuk hr inside',Prof dont listen hm. Maan tuk hs belinging nd cm out frm hs tent. All students sw hm wid hate filld eyes nd Geet smirked at hr win. She ws standing wid Pinky. Maan wants 2 hit hr bt dis ws nt d rite place. He leave d camp nd Geet also tuk perission frm prof.coz her motive ws fulfilled of cming here. She left wid Pinky nd cm bak 2 SM. Prof.report evrythng 2 Principal. He orderd hm 2 leave dis issue coz he dont want 2 cm btwn dem. He dont hv a courage 2complaint 2 Samarth again. So he decided 2 keep silent until Geet raised sm issue.

Geet ws damn happy coz hr plan ws sucesseded. She enjoy full day. But in d happiness of hr winning d game.she 4got dat she pinned a volcano,nd wen volcano burst its lava cm out nd destroy all d thing cming in its way. Dis time she hits hs self respect. Geet was celebrating hr win where as he do tai chi practice 4 whole day. Hs anger hammrd hs head. He cant let hr go so easily,and decided 2 convert her blame in reality and he plannd evrythng. In nite he entrd in hr room through pipe. Frst he made Pinky unconcious nd hide in hr room again nd planned hs action. According 2 hs plan as she entrd he raped hr brutually...



NOTE:GUYS IN DIS UPDATE I CLEARED EVRYTHNG.FROM NOW STORY IS RUNNING IN PRESENT ONLY...I HOPE I CLEARD YOUR ALL DOUBTS.

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