REVENGEFUL LOVE UPDATED PT 19 PG 102 19/1/13 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Hey Richa,
Congrats for new FF.

Jst read d two parts.Yaar its jst OMG,I cant imagine Maan as r***st ,how violent he was!!!!

But I am thrilled to read and excited to know further.So pls jaldi,jaldi update karna.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Congrast on new MG story Richa

Awesome Prologue...really diff.concept

Loved it...thankx for pm


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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
OMG!!!! Thud Faint..Wat ws that🤢
Gosh!! he r*** her.🤢...wat he did..urgh i hate maan😡
Poor geet...felt bad for her😭
Eagerly waiting for next update
continue super soon
thankx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
congratulation for new MG FF
nice, brilliant start
loved it
nice CS
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
I dint like the concept.of maan raping geet, you made him a rapist...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Congrats for New FF...
Concept is too good
Both the updates are awesome
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
awesome update
loved it
continue soon
waiting for more
waiting
waiting😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
CS
awesome...
wow Iqbal is here...
and Geet's Meera is his wife and not Neha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Waiting dear for next part
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
~REVANGEFUL LOVE~
PART - 3
GEET ws boiling in angr. Pinky's all tries 2
make hr calm dwn is failed fuly. Suddnly she
realizes d cell she hd ws nt hr She rush
outside nd colapsd wid Maan again as he is
going2entr in d classrum.Both glard ech othr.
Geet:gv my cell bak2me.
Maan:o nw i gt it.achhi trah samjhta hu tm
jaisi ladkio k natak.i m vry rich dats y u
intentionaly tryng2cm closr wid me.
Hs harsh wrds piercd hr.She ws nt use 2 of
dis,dat ny1 accused hr flasly. She tryng 2 slap
hr bt Maan ws quick enough nd caught hr
wrist in btwn.
Geet:leave my hand u idiot.
Maan:or else?
He grasped mor 2 hurt hr.bt she ws nt lyk cry
baby. She luk at hm wid fire spitting eyes.
Geet:lve my hand or else u pay?
Maan:oh realy.
Both's eyes loked 4 sm momnt bt wid
angr,until othr studnt cm2intrupt. Som boys
req hm 2 leav hr,bt Maan ws nt ready.
Geet:is galti ki saza to tume zrur milegi.
Maan:wat will u do?(he had hr cell whch
acci.changd wen dy collapsd frst. Maan tuk
out of hr mobile frm hs pocket)yahi chahiye
tha na tume?
Maan shw hr cell2hr nd threw it on wall wid
extreame 4ce nd made it crush.Wid in a sec hr
phone disperced in sevral pieces. Aftr dat he
lev hr jerkly wid winning smirk on hs lips.
Maan:Agli bar mujhse uljhi to is mobile ki
jagah tum khud hogi.
Geet wnna gv ans bt at d vry momnt deir prof.
entrs in classrm nd reluctatnly she gulped hr
angr. 2dy's incidnt ws nt as 2 whch Geet 4gt
easily. She wnts 2 teach hm a lesson.
PRESENT:
doc cm nd in4m Pinky dat she awkd. She
went inside. Geet half laid wid dead eyes. As
she sw Pinky closer 2 hr,Geet wrpped hr arms
around hr waist nd glued wid hr. Pinky strokd
hr bak.
Pinky:Geet b strng nd dont scard.He will pay 4
hs sins. I m only waiting 4 u 2 cm in
concious,now we go 4 a police hlp.
Geet lukd hr wid hr lyfless eyes:nai Pinky tu
aisa kuch nai karegi.
Hr voice whch hd a power 2 gv life 2 othr
2day gv d feel of moarn nd dead leafs.
Pinky pulld hr chin up tendrly:bt y. He must gt
punished 4 hs sin.
Geet:he will,bt d wy as i want.mom,dad,ve erji
or parjaji ko ye scah bta kr main apne parivar
ki kushiya nai cheen skti. Dey cant bear dis,nd
i cant c dem in broken state.
Fresh tear strt rolling on both's cheeks.
Pinky:so wat u want now?
Geet:mom dad ko aane me abi time
lagega.just make sure dat except our no1
know about dis.
Pinky caress hr cheek nd hold hr hand:dont
worry dis our family doc's clinic.yaha se baat
bahar nai jayegi.no1 know abot dis until u
want.
Geet:Pinky i wnt 2 go bak hom.
Pinky nodded nd do all d arrangmnts 4 hr
discharge. Both reachd 2 Singhania Mansion.
Pinky supports hr as hr whole body is still
aching sply hr priv.parts where he roughd
most. She found pain while walking. Pinky tuk
hr 2 guest rum,instead of her.
Geet:Pinky y u brot me here.dis is nt my room.
Pinky tryng 2 change d topic:to kya ho
gya.mere sath yai reh na.waise b jb tak uncle
aunty nai aate main yahi rehne wali hu to hm
2 1 hi rum share karenge or zada time spend
karenge.hai na gud idea.
Geet in a flat voice:tere topic bdlne se meri
destiny nai change hogi Pinky.Maan ne jo
krna tha wo kr chuka hai.
Pinky:lekin Geet wo rum..
Geet:wo ru kya pinky?mujhe kal raat ki yaad
dilayega hr roz.(she slighly shook hr head)or
mere ye zakham,meri body inka main kya
karu?kya ye mujhe yaad nai dilayenge. Pinky
is sach ko koi nai badal skta.mujhe ab isi k
sath jeena hai wo b umarbhar.u cant help
it.infact no1 help it.
She furiously movd 2 hr rum..
Pinky:kash us dinn wo baat wai khtam ho
jati...
FLASHBACK:
Pinky wishd dat all sort out on dat dy,bt dat
incident ws only d beginning. Geet retrn SM in
angr. Avantika nd Ayesha assumed hr
expressions. Dey askd hr wat happns 2 hr bt
she is busy in cursing hm only.
Geet:gaddha ullu kamina,batameez ghatia
vahiyat kahi ka...
Avantika:bs beta bs kisi itna kos rai hai aate
hi?
Geet:hai 1 pagal humare collage me,us ullu ki
dum ne mera mobile tod diya.
Ayesha:mobile tod dia kyu?
Geet:bcoz he is mad.
Ayesha:ok ok calm down itna gussa mat ho
main abi inhe bol deti hu ye aate waqt naya
mobile le aayenge.tu shant ho ja or chal
kuchh kha le.
Avantika:dekh beta Ayesha sai keh rai hai.itna
gussa mat ho.teri tabiyat bigad jayegi.
Geet's anger ws on cloud 9 nt so easy 2 make
he chill again.
Ayesha cm closr 2 hr:sunn agar tu kahe to
collage se sare students ko niklwa denge.
Papa k liye ye sb krna koi badi baat nai hai.pr
tu apni helth kyu khrab kr rai hai.achha dekh
maine aaj kya banaya hai teri fav palak paneer
ab to has de.
Ayesha start tickling hr nd she burst in laugh.
Geet:parzaiji bs or i ll dead.
Ayesha put hr palm on hr mouth:shh aisa nai
bolte mare tere dushman.now cmmon lets do
ur lunch.or wo jo koi b hai uska naam bol ye
use theek karnge.
Geet:uski koi zarurat nai hai parzaiji.(she
thot:use sabak kaise seekhna hai wo mera
kaam hai)
Avantika:chal ab mood theek kr or change kr
k aaja.
In evng she got hr new phone. Both askd
suspeciouly bt both Ayesha nd Avantika hide
d truth.coz dey knw sit.trn worst if dey kno d
truth..

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