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ANOTHER OS FROM ME... YOUR NAINA... 😊
GUYS DONT JUDGE IT BY THE TITLE... AND I AM SURE AFTER YOU READ THIS OS, YOU WILL BE ABLE TO FEEL ALL THE EMOTIONS HIDDEN BEHIND THIS "UFF..." 😉
GUYS I AM NOT SURE WHETHER THIS PIECE OF FICTION IS AN OS OR NOT... BECAUSE I MIGHT THINK TO CONTINUE IT WHENEVER I FEEL LIKE AND IF I FEEL LIKE... JUST THOUGHT I SHOULD INFORM YOU GUYS BEFOREHAND...
HERE IS THE INDEX OF MY WORKS
virat slowly came out of his room and looked in the corridor. he was relieved to see that no one was present in the corridor and tiptoed to a room. as he reached the room, he slowly and quietly sneaked in the room and locked the door. as he turned around, his eyes were struck on something that he wants to see and hold all his life and if possible even after his life. he took a few steps towards her yet there was no reaction from her.
the very next moment he felt very frustated and felt like banging his head into a wall... he wondered how could he FALL for her and she isnt even concerned about him and has no time for him these days... how can he feel so attracted towards her all the time.. how could she look beautiful even in dishevelled condition... how can he love a girl like her who is so childish,who is not even concerned about her looks or anything around. but he was sure these were the qualities that attracted him - her careless attitude, her fun-loving and helpful nature, her concern for others and their happiness, her eyes that spoke volumes, her face that has that angellic look, her non stop chattering, her failed plans and evrything and anything about her.. he was really happy to have her in his life and the changes that she brought hence after..
he went towards her and wrapped his arms around her slim waist. he reached her ears and whispered " i love you manvi... "
manvi the love of his life turned around and looked at him.
" i love you too virat... but i am afraid you have to leave " said manvi.
virat was now shocked from her words and asked " what...??"
manvi : yes... you have to leave and that too right now...
virat : tell me a valid reason... and i will go out there and then..
manvi : my exams... there are just about to start in a week or two and i have a lot of syllabus left to cover and there is almost no time left...

virat : damn... you are spoiling this moment because of these stupid exams... shit i really cannot believe this...
manvi : what is so hard for you to believe...?? i didnt say that i am engaged to salman khan...
virat : not even in your dreams sweetheart... you belong to me, to virat singh vadera...

manvi : thats only because i want to... and if i didnt, you never know i might have someone else in my life then...
virat : okay so be it.. you are free, go and fool around with the guys of your college.. whats the name of your " best friend "...?? oh yeah... mohit... you can go and hang out with him... i will not bother you two.
manvi : virat...???
virat : what...?? forget it, i am leaving...
manvi : stop it virat... did you just say that you think that mohit is something more than a friend to me...?? do you really...?? oh my god i just cannot believe how cruel my fate can be...!!!
virat : i dont know about you two. i only know that i love you.. thats it and nothing else seems more important to me than this... but you know what we just cannot force a person we love so dearly to love us back...

manvi : virat you are going somewhere else... i love you, only you...
virat : i know that manvi but i am not asking from you to give me your time 24*7.. i just want to spend some quality time with you and its not so much that i am asking for... is it...???
manvi : virat.. try and understand... now i have lots of things to do.. i just cannot ignore my college only for spending time with you.. i just cannot and if i ignore it, people will just question me and will ask me the reason for coming to chandigarh and persuing my post graduation if i am not serious about it at all... then tell me what should i reply back to them... i cant tell them that i came here only for you.. and the higher studies was just an excuse nothing more than that.. i cant tell them that you wanted me to be here, with you and you were the one who gave me this idea of joining college in chandigarh... i cant tell them that you brainwashed me and convince di to talk to beeji.. i cant tell them you only told me to stay into the girls hostel and then very smartly broke the news of me living in the hostel in front of all the family memebers and how you used bua ji and her khandan ki izzat to bring me back into vadera mansion... speak up virat...!!! speak up that you didnt do all this... you are not the reason for whom i am doing this... you are the soul reason i am struck in this whole mba thing... i really didnt want to do this but you have left me with no other option... you just dont want to disclose about us to anyone... so what is my fault in all this...?? i am only doing what you yourself asked me to do... and now you are blaming me of being busy and not spending time with you... i feel like i am trapped in my own lies.. i just cannot do anything.. anything...
virat : manvi.. i understand...
manvi : ofcourse... u dont.. i left everything behind not you.. you are there with your family but i.. i left my house, my family, my punters, my ganga ghat, my parents... but you only fight with me.. sometimes i feel like leaving everything and going back...
virat : i am sorry... but please dont leave me manvi... dont go away from me... i swear i will kill myself if you again think of going from my life... i really love you... i just want to save our relation, our love from any kInd of evil eyes... i just dont want to lose you... thats why i havent told anybody about us... i fear what if they all dont agree.. i might end up losing you...
manvi : why do you think that they will not agree to this...?? am i that bad...???
virat : you are not bad... infact you are perfect, perfection at its best.. but the thing is i am not suitable for you... i am still not settled in life... i do nothing... i am not even responsible enough to take care of you... i am not like bhai... he is just so admirable and husband material.. but i-
manvi : but you are my prince charming... i dont want a husband material... i want you.. you annoying, teasing and irritating me all my life... and dont ever compare yourself with jiju.. he is just hindi film types romantic hero, an evergreen one.. but i want a sirphira like you chep who can handle my 440 watt wale jhatke... i want you because only you can handle me and my manufacturing faults...
virat : but i do not deserve you... you deserve someone better than me.. but what to do i love you so very much that i cant let you go... i just cant get enough of you... i am head over heels in love with you manvi...
manvi : me too... dito..
virat : meri drama queen... opening his arms wide
manvi : mera chep... goes to him and hug him...
manvi : virat...
virat : hmm...

manvi : you know we are just perfect together...
virat : how can you say so...??
manvi : see how i perfectly fit into your arms... as if they are tailor made for me...
virat : you are just impossible... very crazy..
manvi : crazy for you mela shona...
virat : haye ded futiya turning into romantic heroine..
manvi : i have to when my hero isnt romantic...
virat : so you think i am not romantic...?? tightening his grip on manvi
manvi : leave me virat... i have to study... (trying to get free herself from his hold)
virat : let me show you how romantic i am...!!!
manvi : no no... not now... leave me na...
virat : no... infact this is the right time...
manvi : time...?? oops its 3 o'clock.. i decided to complete this chapter till 4 and its already 3... virat leave me right now...
virat : no... i will not.. listen i will you help in this chapter...
manvi : what...?? are you serious...??? you are really going to help me...?? that is so sweet of you..
virat (smirking) : yeah i will really teach you this chapter...
manvi didnt understand the reason of the smirk on his face, rather got out of his embrace and went to bring her book...
virat : what are you doing..??
manvi : bringing the book...
virat : whats the need of the book...?? 😉
manvi : why..?? can you teach me without the textbook...??
virat : yes... for sure.. i dont need any textbook...
manvi : that means you are so thorough with the concepts that you dont even need the book and i dont even know anything.. i fear i will not be able to pass these exams with good grades...
virat : yes i am thorough with it... but never mind i will teach you and you will also become good at it...
manvi : pakka promise...??
virat : pakka promise...!!!
manvi : lets start...
virat : yeah... 😃
manvi was busy turning pages of the book when when virat snatched the book from her hand and threw it on her study table... manvi was looking at him with confusion written in her eyes.
virat brushed her cheeks with his fingers and then traced her jawline followed by her neck... manvi was numb on feeling his touch and closed her eyes. his touch was surely teasing and testing her senses... his touch was burning her and seducing her.. but this pleasure journey was interrupted soon as her dupatta became an obstacle, a hurdle.. virat instantly took hold of that poor dupatta and wrapped its one corner around his fist and slowly gliding it and once the culprit was in his hands he threw it in the air... while virat was busy punishing the culprit, manvi was becoming restless thinking why did the chep has stop... why is he not making the next step.. but soon she felt chill run down her spine and she felt weak on her knees as virat placed a peck on her neck.. she welcomed him by arching back and providing him more access... virat smiled in between of the butterfly kisses that he placed on her neck. manvi was so much lost in this magical moment that she didnt realise when and how she ended up on the bed with her love above her nuzzling and nibbling her... she would have happily submitted herself to virat if a voice so familiar didnt penetrate in her ears...

" mannu... mannu..."
manvi gulped as soon as she heard jeevika calling her name and knocking at the door...
manvi pushed virat and said "utho... di... 🤢"
manvi got up hurriedly and made her messed up hair and picked her dupatta from the floor and wore it..
manvi asked virat : are you all set...??
virat just nodded his head and manvi opened the door after taking a deep breath, while in the mean time virat picked up the book from the study table and pretending as if he was busy reading it...
manvi : di...
jeevika : mannu... what took you so long to open the door...??? by the way why was the door locked..??? are you okay..??
manvi : di woh main... i was studying.. yes i was studying for my exams..
jeevika : but you can study with the door open also... virat...?? u here...??
virat : bhabhi... yeah me here..
manvi : di... actually virat was teaching me some important topics.. you know he is a really great help and trust me he is sooo good at it... and the reason for the closed door is...
virat : shlok... he was coming here again and again disturbing us by telling one of the latest inventions... he is such an encyclopedia bhabhi... you know him na...??? 😉 😆
jeevika : yes virat... i know shlok is a little different from you two brothers... infact he is very different...
virat : exactly my point... he is like dadaji... wat say bhabhi...???
jeevika : control devar ji... dadaji is at home only... hehe...
manvi : di shall i continue study or else you will only scold me for not getting good grades or for that matter distinction
jeevika : ok ok... you both carry on with your studying session and virat thanks for helping manvi...
virat : oh bhabhi... please dont embarass me.. i can do that much for you and your annoying sister... its no big deal...!!!
manvi: annoying...?? partner..??
virat : i mean for bhabhi and for you partner...
jeevika : ok virat... i take my thank you back... by the way do you two want some coffee...??
manvi : di i..
virat : no bhabhi... thank you.. we dont want one.. right manvi...??
manvi : hmm..
jeevika : ok i am going now... all the best manvi...
manvi : thank you di...
as jeevika turned around, manvi closed the door and virat took her into his arms again...
manvi : what are doing...??
virat : teaching you...!!!
manvi : teaching me.. what...???😲 prem granth...
virat : prem granth... romance section chapter 1...
manvi : arent we done with the first chapter yet...???

virat : no baby... it was just an introduction of the section...
manvi : so...??? 😕
virat : so... chapter 1 starts NOW...
manvi : uff...
part 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow this was awsom ...so virmanish !! ..felt bad for virat wen he thought she is not concernd ..than felt bad for manvi wen she said she is doing everything for him only ...than again felt bad for virat as he wanted to be with her n thats y he made her do it all ...n than again i felt bad for manvi wen virat was not ready to confront about ths relationshp to his family ...n than felt bad for virat wen virat said hez not suitable enough for her yet ...as hez not settled...
thats shows how amazingly it was written by you...well done ...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: salmangirl

wow this was awsom ...so virmanish !! ..felt bad for virat wen he thought she is not concernd ..than felt bad for manvi wen she said she is doing everything for him only ...than again felt bad for virat as he wanted to be with her n thats y he made her do it all ...n than again i felt bad for manvi wen virat was not ready to confront about ths relationshp to his family ...n than felt bad for virat wen virat said hez not suitable enough for her yet ...as hez not settled...
thats shows how amazingly it was written by you...well done ...👏

HEY CONGO U ARE THE FIRST ONE TO COMMENT...😃
really happy that you liked it...
and i would say that this comment of yours ia a sweet and apt analysis of my os...
thanks salmangirl 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: afreenkansal

it was awesome
keep writing

thanks dear... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: xoxsweetestgal

❤️ i loved it...gud job!!xx

thank you dear... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyy deaar!!
Awsumm OS !!
Manvi doing MBA just because of Virat, thatz funny hehe!! 😃
And I must say, Virat is a greaat teaacher huh? 😳
I just loved the end of the OS, when he said that this was only the introduction... 😳
Plz plz continue this 😊!!
Tfs for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awesome.
Ok Manvi doin postgraduation for the sake of Virat .Hmmm it remembers me of some one who did the same 😆.Great Manvi and me did the same 😆.


Loved the update.When Virat is this close to MAnvi how could she think of studyin.Love this Os more😊


Edited by preetipc - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww luved dis OS soo much ❤️.virat teacher teaching romantic lessons😉.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preetipc

it was awesome.

Ok Manvi doin postgraduation for the sake of Virat .Hmmm it remembers me of some one who did the same 😆.Great Manvi and me did the same 😆.


Loved the update.When Virat is MAnvi this close how could she think of studyin.Love this Os more😊


thanks...😊
so this "someone " is you preeti... you did the same...??? really...???
wow... 😃
manvi will now have to study romance and only romance... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update... continue soon n PM me

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