virman os : UFF... part 2 25/12

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Swati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: naina927

abhi abhi mere os pe comment karte hi... 😆

😆😆😆😆

Edited by sweetysontakke - 12 years ago

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saemeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Again a superb update by you dear. .loved it. .
plz continue

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: naina927

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<font color="#996600" size="3">thanks imsid... 😊</font>
<div><font color="#996600" size="3">what a combo...!!! naughty virat n sexy bold manvi... isnt it...???</font>

<font color="#996600" size="3">i dint thought of it... i should thank u for it...</font>

m thankful dat u gt an idea frm m comment..
U r an awsum writer yar. Hatsoff 2 u
k nw m bcming a bit greedy bt i want a hot and sexy update asap plz plz plz

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uroosha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: naina927

thank you dear... 😃

i really love you for such a sweet comment... ❤️ muahh...

there is no magic trick involved dear... its just my love for virman... or the thing is i am really missing the real virman these days...

and you know what i had the idea of this os in my mind froma week but didnt had time to pen it down... so i am no special...

how can't u be special u write on Virman Everyday and u love them soo much.
and i am also missing the old Virman sooo muchhh

Edited by Arrosha - 12 years ago

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MaebyFunke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Aw this was so much romantic yet funny! Bhabhi se chup chup ke romance..tralala 😉 Such a fab writer you're! Write more!

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Nikethana Taran

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Posted: 12 years ago

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first of all i am really sorry for the late reply * kan pakadkar*

it was awesome!

mindblowing yaar!

you know what all your os start in such a way that the reader first reading it gets many questions in his mind..

but later on slowly slowly we get all the answers

and it was brilliantly written👏

next coming to the story..

wow indeed a passionate one!

manvi a collage girl living in vadhera's house for studies!

you know i always had such a concept in my mind but could never frame it but you wrote it excellently!

it was quite a hot one!😳

if jeevika wouldn't have interupted

they would have...ahem ahem!😆

but it was nice!

you always give amazing titles to your stories this was indeed different in fact quiet different!

keep writing all such OS and

kudos to you!!👏⭐️

thnx a lot for the pm!😊

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5/5⭐️

it is a five star story...

Edited by nikeshathana - 12 years ago

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

a part of mixed emotions...loved it😊

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achunishal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

omg naina it's amazing , i mean i can actually see this scene in my mind 😃

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

THIS PART IS ESPECIALLY FOR U IMSID... IF I HAVE UPDATED IT, ITS ONLY BCOS OF U BUDDY... BUT ITS NOT THAT LONG...

LINK TO THE PREVIOUS PART

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69639410

Part 2

manvi : virat stop it...
virat : manvi dont be lazy... you have a lot to learn...
manvi : get up now... enough of your prem granth lessons...
virat : cmon... what will bhabhi say if she gets to know that i didnt teach you as many chapters as i could...
manvi : if your bhabhi gets to knw abt these romance section and chapters, she will throw me out of the house and send me back to rishikesh... and who knows get me forcefully marry some idiot...
virat immediately left her hand which he was holding seconds back and got up...
manvi : virat i was just kidding...
virat : why do you have to joke about something that would hurt me...??? why...???
manvi : ok baba... i am sorry...
virat : isnt it the best way out...??? hurt somebody and then apologise... a single ' sorry ' would undo everything you did or said... sorry and you ms. manvi go hand in hand... and its not a new story...
manvi : excuse me... who gave you the right to insult me...??? i am sorry to burst your bubble, but no one has the right to insult me.. not even you...
virat : i know i have no right on you... but i am the mad one that follows you like a love-struck puppy... and thats just because i love you... u were right love is not everything... sorry for wasting your precious time...
manvi : virat... you are over reacting... calm down please...
virat : you are talking of getting married to somebody else in front of me and i am over reacting... what an observation power you have...??? commendable...!!!!
manvi : virat dont start that again... what do you think that i dont love you...??? what do you think that everything we have between us is just an episode for me...??? or do you think i just want to have a fling with you...??? speak up damn it...
virat : manvi... what are you saying...???
manvi : i exactly said what you heard mr. vadera...???
virat : do you think i would think that ill of you...??? no... i just cannot... bcos i love you damnit... i love you more than anything in this whole f**k**g world... i love you more than myself... i love you so much that i cant think of being away from you...
manvi : then why do you think that i will marry somebody else...??? lemme tell you something. i will marry you only you and no one else and god forbid if i have to marry someone else other than you, i would prefer to die than being wife to somebody else... i was joking... nothing else... the mere thought of being away from you kills me and what do you think i can live my life with somebody else...
virat : manna... plsss...
manvi : virat i love you so much that i wouldnt even think for once before submitting myself to you... trust me... i am ready to shed all my inhibitions for you... you have all the rights on me... i give you every right a wife give to his husband... i just cannot give your place in my life to anybody else... no one can replace my chep... no one...
virat hugged manvi very tightly as if promising her that he wouldnt let her go... not now not tomorrow and not anyday in the future...
virat : i am sorry... you know na i have this anger management issue... when i get angry, i dont realise what i utter... i have hurted you... i wont be able to forgive myself manvi... see i was right... i dont deserve you... you are an angel... and i.. i am just a rude, arrogant and spoilt brat...
manvi : i told you no you are my prince charming... dont start that again chep...
virat : as you say meri drama queen... i love you... now you get back to your studies... i should leave...
virat separated manvi from himself , planted a kiss on her forehead, and was about to move towards the door when manvi held his hand.
virat looked at her rather questioning her with his looks...
manvi : arrey bade ajeeb teacher ho yaar... bina revision ke class khatam kar doge... bina test liye chele jaoge (what a strange teacher you are...!!! no revision...??? and wont you take my exams regarding the chapters you taught...???)
virat smirked listening to his ded futiya...
virat : so you want to appear for the exam...
manvi : yes...
virat : first give your mba exams... pass with flying colours... and then i will take your test baby...
manvi : this is not fair...???
virat : concentrate on your studies ms. manvi desperate chaudhary... and he ran away...
manvi : ufff... i will kill you virat...!!!

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